OS: Dancing in the rain - UPDATED!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ohh that was just so so romantic!! How can you even say it was bad?!😆 I LOVE stories with rain and dance - It's so damn romantic...atleast i think so😳 And every story that has Arhi in it can't possibly be bad...and crap?? -no way in hell😆 It was damn damn romantic yaar😍 Keep up the awesome work!!👏 But in the mean time..don't forget to send out a pm to me 😆 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ---Pari---
Hiya dear! 🤗 Actually, to be very honest with you, I also liked that one the best! 😆 Par kya hai na, offlate I've been getting a lot of requests for some hardcore romance😆... and honestly, me, with not an iota of experience in romance, it was kinda tough for me to write this, which is probably why it didn't turn out great! I like writing about ArHi's nok jhoks more! Probably because I can somewhat picture it happening in the show!😆
Anyhow, I will definately take your comment into consideration jaan, and hope to write one similar to the Ice-Cream OS very soon!😉 Hope u will not stop reading my work as I love reading your comments!😭

Stop reading your work!! That ain't happening!! You keep writing the way you do right and believe me I will be compelled to comment. 😃 Another thing I want to specifically mention so that I can help clear this misconception of yours that you can write better about ArHi's nok jhoks versus hardcore romance. Honestly, girl whether you have the experience or not, you absolutely can and actually do write some seriously hardcore romantic stuff. The main reason I love the Ice Cream OS of yours is because the kiss that you have written about is sensational, its unbelievably beautiful. It is one of the best descriptions of a kiss that I have come across. That's what I meant when I said that I keep hoping to stumble across an OS of yours that going to surpass that kiss...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

@all: rofl! Guys! Tum sab aaj ke episode me khoye hue ho Lagraha hai! Iss liye itne behke behke comments! 🤣 rain dance tho dekhna hai show me! Par definitely one that is hotter than this! Much hotter...ehehe...me a besharam! 🤣