OS: Dancing in the rain - UPDATED!

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Reserrrvveeeddd!!! Back with another hot shot Os! I think my title pretty much says everything, phir bhi, read the description below!

Os Description: Arnav and khushi are in love...they are together one night...and it starts to rain...two souls melt within each others arms...

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Ok, so this is a really crappy OS... I tried to make it romantic for you guys! Tell me how it turned out!!! Erm... I'm not sure if I should give this any kind of warning... some kissing and all in it... but other than that, it's mostly just a play of words!😆
Os: Dancing in the Rain
My black tresses billowed rhythmically in the raging wind. A storm was brewing. I knew the signs. Shivering, I tugged on the white pallu of my sari in a meek effort to shield myself from the fury of the wind. A clash of thunder shook the silence of the night, startling me and bringing with it a flood of rain. I closed my eyes, relishing the feel of the cool droplets as they fell upon my face.

Suddenly, I felt a warm hand brush against my waist. "Cold..?" Murmured Arnav, burying his head in my neck. I leaned back against him, allowing my head to rest on his shoulder. "No, but if you keep touching me like that, I just might..." I sighed.

As if in a daze, he began to place hot, wet kisses on my neck. I moaned, closing my eyes and giving him further access to my body. Even after two years of marriage, Arnav still managed to have that effect on me. "You know... there's always our bedroom if you're too cold out here..." He whispered against my ear. And as he spoke, I didn't miss the light caress of his lips against my cheek. I bit my lip trying my level best to hold in the gasp which sat on the tip of my tongue. "Arnav...stop-" I began. He, however, whisked me around to face him before I could finish.

"No Khushi..." He murmured huskily. "You stop that. Stop biting your lip... or I'll just have to take over for you..."

I felt a rush of heat against my cheeks. My eyes darted away from his, trying to mask the embarrassement that I felt upon hearing his statement. "You know Khushi..." He whispered. "You look awfully sexy in this white sari of yours..." I felt my breath hitch. My hands clenched into tight fists. I shuddered silently. The only difference was that this time it wasn't because of the chill in the air. "You look good enough to eat..." He muttered as he leaned in and gave my ear a gentle bite. I flinched at the sudden pain... Was it pain..? Or pleasure? I couldn't tell. His warm fingers trailed up my waist, up my blouse and to my neck, sending bursts of shock through my veins. "A-Arnav..." I gasped. "W-We need to stop..." My pleas went unheard. His fingers stopped only when they had reached my chin. He lifted it up, forcing my eyes to lock with his. What I saw within his chocolatey eyes was something that I hadn't seen in a long while. Passion... perhaps...? No... definately more than that... much more than that...

I swallowed nervously, stepping away from him. But he was in no mood to release me tonight. With a reflexive pull, he got me where he wanted instantaniously - against himself. I was his prey and he was my predator. I was trapped in his arms. Not that I minded of course. My hands rested on his chest exploring him on their own accord. With every curve of his body that I touched, my heart froze all the more. His breath came in ragged gasps and his smoldering eyes were sending waves of burning fire through my skin.

I felt his cool hand snake up my back. I shivered, my eyes closing on their own will. "S-Stop it Arnav... that's enough..." I begged for the third time that night. He pulled me harder against him in unspoken denial and placed small butterfly kisses on my cheek. "Don't Khushi... don't you DARE try to stop me tonight... I've had enough... I can't wait anymore..." His hand wandered upward, stopping only when it got to the strings of my blouse. He looked at me, his eyes dark with desire. "I love you Khushi... and I want to show you exactly how much... tonight..." Before I could respond, he had captured my lips within his.

The kiss started off gently... innocently. But such was the desire that despite having his lips on mine and mine on his, we both wanted more. Much more. His one hand dug into my hair, pulling me harder into the kiss, while the other floated around my blouse. With every movement he made... with every action he took... i felt myself immerse further into him.

If it weren't for the cool splash of a droplet of water on my face, I may have never pulled away from the kiss. But I did. "A-Arnav... it-it's raining... I think..."

A slow smirk spread over his lips. My heart, as usual, skipped a beat. "You think what Khushi...?" He asked mischievously. "You think we should continue this inside huh...?" I gasped, shocked. "N-No!!! Th-That's not what I meant-"

"Then what did you mean Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada...?" He whispered before placing a wavering lock of hair behind my ear. I didn't reply. I COULDN'T reply. Everytime he neared me, I turned into jello. I shook my head and buried my head in my hands shyly. Arnav chuckled, placing a feathery kiss on my forehead.

"Alright then. Topic change. Khushi... if I ask you to do something... will you do it...?" I looked up, feeling flustered. "Uh-I..I..D-don't...I mean.. I..."

He rolled his eyes, exhasperated. "Yes or no Khushi?" I nodded, although somewhat hesitantly. "W-What do you want me to do...?"

The smile plastered on his lips widened. Uh-oh... not a good sign... I thought to myself. He moved back, slowly lowering himself down on his knees. "Dance with me Khushi." He declared, with his hand outstretched. My mouth dropped open in surprise. "A-Arnav! Are you crazy!? It's cold, I'm wearing an almost-transparent white sari and it's starting to rain!"

He shook his head stubbornly. "I don't care. You said you would do whatever I asked."

I gazed at him, mustering the most innocent expression that I could manage. "Oh did I...? I don't remember making any such commitment!"

I laughed, noticing his hurt expression before turning away. "Khushi!" He declared, effortlessly clasping my hand within his own and pulling me hard against his body once more. I gasped at his unexpected movement. "No one says no to Arnav Singh Raizada..." He whispered, giving my shoulder a gentle bite. "And that," he whispered, referring to the love bite. "was your punishment for trying to run away from me." I groaned, the sting of the bite still evident on my reddening skin. He smirked, slowly wrapping his arms around my waist once more. "Did it hurt jaan...?" He questioned. And I couldn't help but notice that the huskiness in his voice had grown ten-fold... How was it possible that a person could be so sensuous simply with their voice? I shivered, nodding in response. He leaned in slowly, running his lips over the affected skin. "Sorry love..." He murmured. "But I'm still waiting for that dance you know...?"

By this time, the rain was pouring down on us. My white sari, which had been half transparent a few minutes ago had become completely drenched and see-through. I sighed, realizing that Arnav was not one to give up. "Alright. Fine. I will. But there's no music!" I pointed out, hoping, that Arnav would change his mind. It didn't work. He took my hand, gently placing it on his chest. "There's always the music of my heart..." He murmured. I closed my eyes, listening to the rhythmic thump of his heart. "You see what you do to me...?" He growled, shaking his head in mock anger. I couldn't help the soft smile that spread over my lips. So he's as effected by my touch as I am by his...
He took my other hand, positioning it on his shoulder before slowly moving to the music of his heart. It felt so perfect. The rain was pouring down, as if celebrating our union. I sighed as I buried myself in his arms. Could there be a safer place on this earth? I didn't think so. For the first time that night, I didn't care that I was cold... I had Arnav to protect me. I didn't care that I was in a transparent sari... The streets were empty except for us... and the rain? I had always loved the rain. And after tonight, I would form a new appreciation for it. I blushed at the mere thought. We were just two souls... coming together... And as we danced that night, under the blanket of stars... in the downpour of rain... I had realized the true meaning of love.
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Crap? I agree... but leave your comments guys... I worked pretty hard for this! 3 whole days of writing, backspacing and rewriting! 🤣 Would love to see your replies, good/bad! Please padh k bhaag mat jaana! Your comments give me encouragement to write more!!!😳
And with this OS especially, I felt kinda scared to disappoint you guys... I mean.. I got 10 WHOLE PAGES of comments just for my "reserved"... feeling nervous to post this... Please bata na, ok? If u liked it or not?
If you would like to request an OS (on a particular scene or something of the sort) then feel free to tell me! 😉
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~Sanju
Edited by ---Pari--- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeyy me first able to reply
very nyc haawwwttt os
sooo romantic..loved it soo much
Edited by tina_1234 - 13 years ago
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Please add my Id: BubblyMunchkin if u wnt pms! :D thx a lot guys!
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OMG!! Cannot wait! 😊 Pari, you write such fabulous OS's full of passion! It's always a treat to read them. And, boy oh boy, does this sound promising or what? 😳
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ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!(desperate sounds...😳)
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Me!!!!!!!! Plzzz add me as well😊
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Ohhh, Can't Wait :D ☺️
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Originally posted by: Scintillating

OMG!! Cannot wait! 😊 Pari, you write such fabulous OS's full of passion! It's always a treat to read them. And, boy oh boy, does this sound promising or what? 😳



Awww!!! Your comment brought a big smile on my lips! Thank u so much! 🤗 and oh boy, planning to make this one hawwt!!! 😳
get ready for some big ArHi DHAMAKA!!!!!
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pm me... nce descrptn , hot rain dnce.. bst

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