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Posted: 13 years ago
Preetoji is jealous and Rajbeer manofying her Aww
New Characters Anushka and Arjun are nice
Anushka laso had crush on RB ? Lol RB hai hi pyaara kaun bach paayega
Can't wait for next part when Anushka comes home..dekhte hai Preeto aur green ho jayegi or Anu and Preeto milke RB ka Taang lambe keechenge 😆
Rati and Arjun as Anushka and Arjun 👍🏼..Loving all the new characters in the story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Savan-Rules

oh!miss preeto rajbeer.evil cvs and uska evil channel sab barbad kar diya😡

agree huh imagine channel😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Saina--

Preetoji is jealous and Rajbeer manofying her Aww

New Characters Anushka and Arjun are nice
Anushka laso had crush on RB ? Lol RB hai hi pyaara kaun bach paayega
Can't wait for next part when Anushka comes home..dekhte hai Preeto aur green ho jayegi or Anu and Preeto milke RB ka Taang lambe keechenge 😆
Rati and Arjun as Anushka and Arjun 👍🏼..Loving all the new characters in the story 😊

thankuuu Saina...😃
will update next part now...anu aur preeto kya karte hain u will know it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
thankuu Gowri...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raj_preet


Preeto dresses are good👍🏼 😉
I love jealous Preeto very much she looks very cute in that way
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0cDGz1kuVs[/YOUTUBE]

and Anushka/Rati entry was good...Anushka's 1st crush was Rajbeer 😆 & Simi's 1st crust too Rajbeer ..OMG all this makes Preeto more Jealous
and yeah Anushka and Arjun are superb👍🏼
waiting for nxt part to see Jealous Preeto nd more Rajpreet cute scenes
thnx for the spoiler 😉

thankuuu Meenu😃
first crush of anu was Rajbeer...but for simi first love was rajbeer...2 different things dont u think😉
even i love my jealous chattar pattar preeto a lot...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sneha i thought u posted next part but u r giving replies
i am waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapatro

thankuuu Meenu😃
first crush of anu was Rajbeer...but for simi first love was rajbeer...2 different things dont u think😉
even i love my jealous chattar pattar preeto a lot...❤️

haan simi loves na... confusion card she too don't n it's love or crush or attraction poor sim card😆
this was one of my fav promo...Preeto looks so cute in it
Edited by Raj_preet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part26:
Day 35:

Prithvi' s home at 7:30:
door bell rings...Sita opens the door..Its Anushka..
Anushka: Prithvi kaha hai..
Sita: Anu di uper honge abhi tak nahi uthe honge..
Anushka: yeh jaldi kab utha hai sita bolo humesha sothe rehta hai..
laughs..
acha Preeto ki kamra kaha hai..
Sita shows her pointing towards upstairs..
Anushka goes and knocks the door..Preeto who was just about to go for bath hearing the knock opens the door..
Anushka: hey Preeto
Preeto: hii Anushka
she greets her with smile asking her to come in
both sit in the bed..
Anushka: tumse zaroori baat karni thi..actually kal ke liye sorry bolna tha
Preeto: sorry? lekin kyun..
Anushka: tumhe bura laga hoga kuch bhi bak bak karti ja rahi thi..
Preeto mein bas rajbeer ka tang kheech rahi thi aur kuch nahi..
Preeto: anushka mujhe tumhari kisi bhi baat pe bura nahi laga..Rajbeer se naraaz thi tumse nahi..
Anushka: sachi
Preeto: haan..smiling..
Anushka: thankgod..she hugs her and smiles saying mujhe toh laga tum mujhse bahut naraz hoge..
kya tum rajbeer se abhi bhi naraaz ho
Preeto: aisa kuch nahi..lekin kal thoda naraaz thi jhoot jo bola hai unhone..
Anushka: ok then chalo mere saath..
no one minute..Preeto ek idea hai..she whispers in Preeto' s ear..
Preeto: laughs...maaza ayega chalo..
both stand near to the door of Rajbeer and Prithvi' s room..
Anushka: ok start karte hain..
Preeto: jyada shor karte hain
Anushka: ok..
They start Fake fight..
Anushka:itna drama kyun kar rahe ho
Preeto: mein nahi tum drama kar rahe ho
Anushka: pata nahi rajbeer ne tumse kaise pyaar kiya
Preeto: tum kaun hote rajbeer ke baare mein sochne wali
Rajbeer and Prithvi come out fast...both dont understand y Preeto and Anu are behaving like that..
Anushka to Preeto: dekho mujhse panga mat lena
Preeto: ha toh kya karloge..sherni hun mein..darti nahi hun tum jaise logon se..apne aap ko kya samjhte ho haan kuch bhi bole jaoge aur mein chup chap tumhari bakwaas sunti rahungi..
Prithvi: Preeto saans toh le yaar
Anushka: oh hello pointing finger at her..tum sherni ho toh mein hitler hun samjhe..tumhari attitude kisi aur ke paas dikhana mere paas nahi..
Prithvi:tum dono ka dimaag toh sahi hai na
Anushka: Prithvi just shut up..
Rajbeer: dono itna kyun lad rahe ho..baat kya hai..
Arjun who also just comes there
Arjun: Anu yeh sab kya ho raha hai..
Anushka: she just winks at him and starts shouting at preeto..
Arjun just smiles
Anushka: Rajbeer i just came here to say sorry lekin yeh hai ki ulta mujhpe chila rahi hai
Rajbeer: tum dono shanti se baithke baat nahi karsakte
when he said that...both at a time start laughing..
Anushka: shaanti se..laughs..
Preeto look at him..
Preeto and Anushka hi fi eachother..
Rajbeer: iska matlab tum dono mile huye ho..
Preeto: rajbeer mujhe nahi pata tha aap itne budhu ho..
Anushka: it was just a prank Raj..kaise laga..
Rajbeer: drama ke liye award milna chahiye tum dono ko
Anushka: yeh tumhara jhoot ke liye badla tha hero..kyun Preeto
Preeto: haan anushka..Rajbeer ke chehra dekhke mujhe toh bahut maaza aya..
anu and preeto just keep laughing..
Rajbeer: very funny..
Prithvi: subah hi mila tha tum dono ko..bekaar mein mujhe jagah diya..
Simran who just comes there seeing Anushka gets very happy..Simran and Anu hug eachother..
all then sit in the hall...Anushka introduces Arjun to Rajbeer..Preeto..Simran...
meanwhile ishu dhruv and meeta pankaj also join them...all chit chat for sometime..
Arjun: so delhi aye ho kaha ghumne ka plan hai..
Prithvi: abhi tak kuch socha nahi arjun..
Rajbeer:lets plan then..
Dhruv: rite abhi plan karte hain
Anushka: trip will be fun..job se atleast ek din ke liye chutkara toh milega mujhe..
preeto: fashion event jo hai..uske baad hi kahi
Simran: yaa Preeto is rite..
Arjun: k so what about Agra
Meeta: excitedly tajmahal
Anushka: by god Arjun kya idea hai..she pulls his cheeks saying this..
all laugh
Rajbeer: Arjun kaise jhelte ho isse
Arjun: jhelna padta hai..pyaar jo kiya hai..
Anushka: will u both just shut up..
Pankaj: Agra ke baare mein bahut suna hai..bahut maaza ayega yeh trip..
Dhruv: seriously grtt idea man..
all then have breakfast together..Anu and Arjun leave to office..
Preeto and Simi get ready as today is the day of pre-reharsals..
Rajbeer Prithvi drop them to the rehearsals place and go back..

models were waiting in the hall..
Preeto and Simran greet the models..
Preeto writes down the names of them and tells the models about the order they have to walk in one after the other..
Simran and Preeto select among the outfits which one would fit best to the each individual model..
Models try the outfits chosen and walk well..
Practice for the ramp walk continued till 2 o clock..
and then the Models left for lunch..
as Rajbeer and Prithvi came all four go out for a lunch at restaurant..get back to the hall by 3:30pm..
continue with the rehearsals till evening..

Evening At Amritsar:
in dance classes
Bani gets a dance partner..his name is Sahil..
they introduce themselves..
Sahil: dance partners sabse pehle dost banna chahiye..tab kuch bhi hojaye koi nahi roksakta competition jeetne se
Bani: baate bahut ache karlete ho..
Sahil: grt pehli mulakaat pe hi tum mujhe jaan gaye..
so friends..
Bani: smiles ya friends..
as the music played..dance practice starts between jodis in the big hall..
phone call interrupts sahil he stops for a minute excusing..
he lifts it
Sahil: ha bol
Caller( his best friend): Partner kaisi lagi..
Sahil: ya good..he says it slowly..
Caller: itna dhire kyun bol raha hai paas mein hi hai kya..
Bani stares at him while Sahil was talking over on mobile..
Sahil: baad mein baat karte hain..
Caller: ok byee..enjoy..kal milte hain..
Sahil: bye..
he then goes to Bani
sorry important call tha
Bani: thik hai..lekin rehearsals ke waqt..mobile please silent pe rakhna..
Sahil: smiles..ok Bani ji jaise aap kaho..
they then continue with dance rehearsals..

Delhi:
At Prithvi' s Home 10pm:
Rajbeer knocks the door of Preeto' s room..
Preeto: aap iswaqt
Rajbeer: tumhe kuch dena tha..
Preeto: mujhe..kya
Rajbeer: he goes in..sits in the bed..
she also sits..
Rajbeer: kal tum itna naraaz the..mujhe mauka hi nahi mila dene ki..he gives her the gift box..
Preeto: kya hai isme..looking at the box before opening it she guesses it as saree and asks him..
saree?
Rajbeer: kholo..tumhe pata chal jayega..aur haan isse pehle tumhe promise karna padega..tum yeh pehenke dikhaoge..
Preeto: acha thik hai lekin pehle dekhne toh doh aisa kya laye ho mere liye..
Preeto opens the gift box and sees its a beautiful gown..smiles but immediately stands up screams loud Gown...!!
rajbeer aap jante ho mein aise kapde pehnti nahi hun..
Rajbeer: shhh itna chila kyun rahe ho koi ajayega..(standing )
waise itna bhi kya problem hai iss dress pehnme mein..
Preeto: Rajbeer gown bahut sundar hain lekin mein aise kapde kabhi pehnti nahi hun yeh aap bhi jante ho..
he pulls her close to him by placing her arms around her waist..
Rajbeer:tumne mujhe abhi abhi promise ki hai
abh koi bahana mat nikalo..samjhe miss fashion designer..
Preeto: smiles..acha abh jao bahar..
Rajbeer: he loosens his grip from her waist..saying will wait out..
he waits outside..
she dresses up wearing the gown..by leaving her hair loose..
Rajbeer: he knocks the door Preeto jaldi karo..
Preeto: ek minute arahi hun..
she opens the door..as he walked in closes the door first..
she was leaning slightly on the wall beside the door..shying..
Rajbeer was fully blowned by her beauty as she looked very gorgeous in the gown..
he just stood there mesmerized..by looking at her..
[Pretty Gown which Rajbeer gifted to Preeto( pic credit AM forum)😆]


Preeto: Rajbeer!
Rajbeer: haan..by placing his arm on the wall..says
uff iss dil ka kya karun...
Preeto hits with her hand lightly on his other arm..blushing..he then raised her hand to his lips..kissed the palm..saying i love u..
she blushed and hugged him tightly..

he then tugged her hair strands behind her ears..by looking into her eyes lovingly..
Preeto also stares at him with a smile on her face..
Rajbeer: sachme Preeto bahut khubsurat lagrahe ho..
coming close to her places a kiss on her forehead..she closes her eyes..
while she opened her eyes after a minute..shyingly walks from there..
he grabs her hand to stop her..
she stops there without further moving ahead..
Rajbeer steps forward gets close to her..
by slowly placing his arms around her waist..hugs her from back..
she just stood blushing..
he then buried his face in her neck..she closes her eyes feeling the moment..he places a kiss lightly and then moves his face up which touches her cheek
he places small kiss making her blush even more..she turns around hugging him by saying i love u..

Saans may teri saans mili to mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Rooh ne chhu lee jism ki khusbu tu jo paas aayi
Tu jo paas aayi, tu jo paas aayi

Saans may teri saans mili to mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi


Suddenly knock on the door..she quickly pulls herself away from him..
Preeto: haaye rabba..iswaqt kaun hosakta hai..
Rajbeer: ruko mein dekhta hun..
Preeto: nahi..
aap ek kaam kijiye yahi kahi chup jayiye mein jake dekhti hun..
again knock at the door..
Rajbeer: arey lekin kya hoga
Preeto: Rajbeer plz..aap woh curtains ke peeche chup jayiye..
she pushes him to hide behind the curtains..
he goes there and hides
Preeto opens the door..
its Simran who seeing Preeto in gown gets surprised...
Simran: oh my god Preeto ur looking so pretty..
Preeto: thanku simran..
she asks her to come in..
Simran sits in the bed there..
Preeto: woh kal maine shopping ki thi bas abh aise try karke dekh rahi thi..
Simran: acha aur kya kya shopping ki hai tumne..dikhao mujhe..
neend nahi araha tha preeto so jus came to talk with u..
Preeto: koi baat nahi simran..
ruko abhi dikhati hun..
she gets the new dresses from the cupboard to show it to simran..while giving it over to simran..one of the dress slips from her hand..
Simran: wait mein uthati hun..
she bends down to pick it up..her eyes fall towards the curtains and notices someone hiding behind it..
simi just smiles and picks up the dress..wow preeto pink color dress li hai u will look gorgeous..Fashion show ke din yeh pehna tumpe acha lagega..aur waise Rajbeer maine dekha liye hai tumhe u can come out..
Preeto feels embarassed..
Rajbeer comes out..with smile hey Simi tum yaha..
Simran: ya i know..disturb kiya na
Preeto: arey bilkul nahi simran
Rajbeer: tum dono baate karo..am going..smiles and leaves saying bye to them..
Simran: acha toh Rajbeer ne gift ki hai tumhe..
Preeto: haan..smiles..
Simran: waise prithvi ne bhi kal mujhe yellow gown gift ki thi..
Preeto: Prithvi ne..wah kya baat hai simran..lagta hai aajkal bada pyar dikha
raha tumpe..
Simran: haan...hez sweet..but thoda stupid bhi hai
both laugh...
after their talks for sometime...Simi leaves to her room saying goodnight..

PS:
Bani' s Dance Partner Sahil Played by Yuvraj😊😛
Yuvraj Thakur


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specially to sana and jess sorry for late update...next update will make it fast😃😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update Sneha :)

Rajpreet moments uff :) hehe

and preeto luking so pretty :)

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