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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

Wow mein toh cloud 9 paunch gi hoon , tumne mere fave Abhay aur Piya ko include kiya ... 😳 You rock Snehu , was surprised when i saw Abhay and Pia name




Abhay rajbeer ka cousin ... wow 😃😆... Towel scene was great of rajpreet 😳 and yaar privthi ka plan flop , when will he say to simmi ? ... they both think that the other person loves them but not sure ... haha ... i can't wait until rajpreet go Chandigarh ...


i know u will be surprised but it was planned long back when i said many a new entries coming up😆 and thanku for loving it Aqeelah😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Vivian
hey Aquee i know you are super duper happy. good surprise sneha😃

loved it Snehu especially Rajpreet & Prithvi part was very funny it's just superb and haa towel scene too super & Rajpreet nok-jhok too cute👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sneha - Finally i read two parts..Long overdue but wanted to read leisurley and not in a hurry :-)

Both the parts were light and sweet with cute Rajpreet moments.
After reading first part i thought thank God Hotel mein raid nahi hua 😆 and Rajpreet chat ke upar haye so so cute yaar ❤️
In the Second part , loved the towel scene and RP's cute nok-jhok's especially cracked up reading this line
Preeto: faltu ka discussion bandh karo..mein ja raha sone..goodnight..
Rajbeer: ha jao bahut thak gaye hoge hume follow karte karte...🤣🤣
Poor Pithvi's plan failed but hota hai itna aasan nai hai pyaar izhaar karna :-) ...Hamare Hero Rajbeer bhi kitna waqt lagaya tha aur phir jaake dhamaal se propose kiya 😆 ❤️
And awesome surprise of Abhiya ( Aqeelah to Saatvein aasman par hogi ) ...
Due to hectic work got to read it late but well worth the time 🤗
Will wait for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Wow Vivian

hey Aquee i know you are super duper happy. good surprise sneha😃

loved it Snehu especially Rajpreet & Prithvi part was very funny it's just superb and haa towel scene too super & Rajpreet nok-jhok too cute👍🏼

thanku Meenu😃
😆 i first thought whether abhay and piya or rk and madhu...but as i like abhay and piya more i chose them and dont much like madhu i like only rk so chose best option..😃😆
if am right even aqeelah also loves abhay and piya more...😉😆
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Saina--

Sneha - Finally i read two parts..Long overdue but wanted to read leisurley and not in a hurry :-)

Both the parts were light and sweet with cute Rajpreet moments.
After reading first part i thought thank God Hotel mein raid nahi hua 😆 and Rajpreet chat ke upar haye so so cute yaar ❤️
In the Second part , loved the towel scene and RP's cute nok-jhok's especially cracked up reading this line
Preeto: faltu ka discussion bandh karo..mein ja raha sone..goodnight..
Rajbeer: ha jao bahut thak gaye hoge hume follow karte karte...🤣🤣
Poor Pithvi's plan failed but hota hai itna aasan nai hai pyaar izhaar karna :-) ...Hamare Hero Rajbeer bhi kitna waqt lagaya tha aur phir jaake dhamaal se propose kiya 😆 ❤️
And awesome surprise of Abhiya ( Aqeelah to Saatvein aasman par hogi ) ...
Due to hectic work got to read it late but well worth the time 🤗
Will wait for next part

thanku Saina...😃and i knew dear that when u get free time u will read my ff ...🤗
😆 hotel mein raid was already shown in the show so didnt over here...
and i can write only light and sweet moments saina and hot moments in our forum sana and mary are good at it😃😆
next plan for prithvi in next update😉😆
@Bold
even i couldnot stop laughing while writing it🤣 can so imagine rajpreet and their expressions in the scene😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part24:
Day 33:
Morning after breakfast:
all were sitting in the hall..
Dhruv: acha aaj kya program hain
Preeto: aaj koi program hai toh cancel..
Ishu: Kyun?
simran: ghar pe kya karenge Preeto
Preeto:hum sab abhi game khelne wale hain
Meeta: game arey wah Preeto bada maaza ayega..
Rajbeer who was sitting beside Preeto
Rajbeer: whispered Preeto tumhara plan bhi flop hoga dekhlena
Preeto: acha dekhte hain..toh lagi bet
Rajbeer: bet..?
Preeto: kyun darte ho
Rajbeer: no ways..done bet
Dhruv: Preeto game toh batao..
Preeto: haan Jiju..
pillow pass karne wala game..sabko toh pata hoga..
Pankaj: excitedly ha pata hai..maaza ayega..
Preeto: lekin suno music stop hote hi jiske paas pillow hoga unko mein jo kahunga wahi karna padega..kuch chits nahi hoga..
all agree to her and say ok..
Simran: Preeto please give some simple activity for me
Preeto: sochunga..
all go and settle down Preeto just stops Prithvi
Preeto to prithvi: yehi mauka hai please kehdo simran ko..
Prithvi: am tensed
Rajbeer: laughs..all the best Prithvi..he also then goes and joins remaining who were sitting..
Preeto: Prithvi mera plan hai izzat toh rakho..isbaar koi gadbadd mat karna..
Prithvi: ok ok..
Preeto: acha yeh sita (maid servant) kaha hai..she goes to kitchen and asks her to come..
Preeto tells Sita to stop and play the music on the player as she wishes to by showing her how to do..
Preeto: Sita tu karlegi nah
Sita: nods..haan didi
all sit around in a circle and are ready now for Pass the Pillow game..Preeto and Rajbeer were sitting facing eachother..
as the music was played..Ishu passes the pillow to simran and then simipasses it over to Dhruv..dhruv to Prithvi to Rajbeer to Pankaj..Pankaj was about to pass it to Meeta music stops..
all shout Pankaj out out..
Meeta: laughs..umbrella tu pehla out hogaya..
Preeto: Pankaj kyunki tu pehla out hua hai kuch asaan sa hi deti hun..
toh shuru kar Meeta di ke liye ek gaana gale..
all cheer him up Pankaj sings the song
tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam
pyaar hota hai deewana sanam
abh yaha se kaha jaye hum
tere bahaon mein mar jaye hum
game continues..Preeto gives activites one after the other who were out..after Pankaj it was dhruv who was out..Preeto asked to recite a shayari..Dhruv dedicates it to Ishu and then it was Meeta who was out Preeto asks her to say any long filmy dialogue..
Now left in the circle were Ishu Simran Prithvi Rajbeer Preeto..
as the music plays again passing the pillow continues..
Rajbeer passes it over to Preeto..Preeto to Ishu..Ishu passes to Simran..while Simi passes it to Prithvi music stops..Prithvi was out..
Dhruv: Prithvi ko kya de rahe ho..
Preeto: batati hun jiju..
haan toh Prithvi utho..
Prithvi: getting nervous stands up..
Preeto: socho tum agar kisi se pyaar karte ho..toh kaise confess karoge..
simran: starts laughing
Rajbeer: Simi kya hua..
Simran: kuch nahi Rajbeer..bas aise hi hassi agayi..
Dhruv: oh come on Prithvi
Rajbeer: laughs..and whispers to Prithvi confess karke dikha..
Prithvi: with tensed face first glances at simran..and turns to Rajbeer..woh mein..mein kaise karun..
Dhruv: Prithvi kya mein mein kar raha hai..
Prithvi: nervously haan confess mein mera matlab karta hun..
silence for a moment..
Prithvi: i will jus say..he pause for a second..says out i love u Simran by looking at her..
dhruv meeta pankaj look at prithvi with shocked expression..ishu smiles as she knew before and did had a doubt...
simran surprised..stood up..prithvi and simran share a eyelock..
Prithvi: simran mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hun..yeh baat mein amritsar mein hi kehna chahta tha lekin keh nahi paya..
simran:smiles and says ya i know that u love me..
prithvi: kya
Preeto and Rajbeer also surprised..
prithvi: tumhe pehle hi pata tha
simran: pehle toh nahi..bas kal hi pata chala..i saw the gift in the cupboard..car keys dhundte waqt..
Prithvi: oh god really..so do u ?
for a moment he doesnt get any reply she first looks at dhruv..and then looks at prithvi says out yaa i love u too..
Prithvi gets very happy and hugs simran
all present there feel happy for both of them..they all say congrats to simran and prithvi..
Preeto to Rajbeer: dekha har gaye na bet..
Rajbeer: bet hargaya toh kya am happy for simi and prithvi..
jus then bell rings..
Prithvi: shayad pizza delivery boy hoga..
sita goes and opens the door..and brings the pizza boxes..
Meeta: being happy knowing..wah Pizza..
Prithvi: haan meeta di maine order kiya tha game shuru hone se pehle..
Dhruv: pizza ko side mein rakho...game abhi bhi khatam nahi huyi hain..
Preeto: game toh prithvi ke liye rakha tha..
Ishu: Preeto toh yeh tumhara plan tha..
Preeto: haan ishu di..abh chalo sab pizza khate hain
Dhruv: no ways pehla game khatam karo..
Pankaj: sahi kaha
Ishu Preeto Simran Rajbeer sit around in a circle..music starts..they pass the pillow..music stops at simran..
Preeto: haan toh simran tumhe Prithvi ke saath abhi yaha dance karna padega..
Simran:blushes..Preeto please kuch aur de nahi sakte..
Prithvi: simran come on karte hain na..
Simran: ok smiles..
music plays they dance for a minute...
and then again game starts between ishu Preeto Rajbeer..this time ishu out..
Preeto: Ishu di aap yeh baatayi apko dhruv jiju ka aise kaunsi baat acha nahi lagta..
Ishu: aisi koi baat nahi hai..dhruv bahut ache hain..
Preeto: oho ache hain..
Rajbeer: aisa nahi chalega ishu di..apko batana hi hoga
Preeto: haan ishu di kuch toh hoga..chalo bataye..
Ishu: she looks at Dhruv and then says kabhi kabhi dhruv bina breakfast kiye huye office chale jate hain..aur raat ko bhi late ghar ate hain..bas wohi acha nahi lagta mujhe..
Meeta: Ishu tu yeh kyun nahi kehti ki tujhe dhruv ke liye wait karte karte bhuk lagti hai..
all start laughing..
Preeto: Meeta di aapko humesha khana ka hi padi hoti hai..
Meeta: ha toh chal jaldi game khatam kar Preeto mujhe pizza khana hai..

music played..its between rajbeer and preeto..
Rajbeer and Preeto keep passing pillow..after a minute music stops..and pillow is in hand of Rajbeer..Preeto wins..Rajbeer out..
Preeto: gets up and jumps ye ye mein jeet gayi
Meeta: harne wale kya karne ja rahe hain
Dhruv: Rajbeer ko kya karna chahiye Preeto nahi balki hum sab decide karenge..
Preeto: chalo thik hai..toh decide karo..
Preeto and Rajbeer wait to know..
they all decide and Dhruv says out
Dhruv: Rajbeer hum sabke samne u need to propose preeto for marriage..
Rajbeer: dhruv yeh kya hai..tujhe toh mein..he goes to hit him..
Dhruv: laughs rajbeer yaha sabki yehi icha hai..he looks at all kyun bolo sahi bola na mein..
all shout haan..
Ishu: Rajbeer humari preeto ko tum kaise propose karoge hum sab dekhna chahte hain..
rajbeer was just trying to refuse..and Preeto standing there was shying and blushing..
Prithvi: Rajbeer u cant escape karna hi hoga..
Simran: ya come on Rajbeer..we all are waiting..
Rajbeer: simi u also took their side..
Dhruv: Rajbeer chal time mat le yaar..
Rajbeer and Preeto share eyelock smiling..he takes a moment..
Rajbeer got down on one knee..
forwarded his hand by looking into her eyes..which made her feel special..
she gives her hand blushing..
by holding her hand with his he proposes her saying:
(muktsaar song bg music playing)
Preeto mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hun
love u forever..
marry me..?
Preeto: smiles and at same time was so touched..replies haan..
Rajbeer kissed on her hand..and stood up..she blushes..
all just loved it and clapped hands for the way he proposed her so sweetly
Rajbeer gave a side hug to Preeto with a smile..
Meeta Ishu Simi came to preeto and hugged her..
dhruv pankaj and Prithvi went to rajbeer..
Prithvi: kya baat hai rajbeer..how romantic yaar..
after the enjoyment of game all started chit chatting while having pizzas..

Evening 5:30:
at Amritsar:
Bani goes and enrolls her name by paying entry fees for the dance competition..
all who got enrolled their names dance practice did start but pairs were not decided yet..Bani just enjoyed first day..

Delhi 8pm:
Preeto gets a call from model agency..who just informed about day after tommorow date for the prehearsal session with the models that they have selected..
Preeto tells about this to Simran..
Simran: oh thats grtt..
Preeto mein soch rahi thi kal hum kyun na shopping chale..fashion show jo hai toh thodi bahut achi lagna chahiye na..
Preeto: baat toh tum sahi keh rahe ho..chalo puchte hain sabko..
Rajbeer Preeto Prithvi Simran decide to go for shopping tommorow..
as Dhruv Ishu Meeta Pankaj were already been to shopping they decide to visit some other places in delhi instead..

PS: do click like button if u have liked it😉..will wait for ur comments..😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSana

Rajbeer proposes so cute

thankuu Sana...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Sneha u know when i am reading this i am feeling like watching the show it's simply superb👍🏼
Prithvi proposed simi was good heheh i am like yes Prithvi finally u did it😃
and what to say about our Romantic hero Rajbeer wow love his style love u Rajpreet ❤️
waiitng for nxt part snehu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Superb Sneha u know when i am reading this i am feeling like watching the show it's simply superb👍🏼

Prithvi proposed simi was good heheh i am like yes Prithvi finally u did it😃
and what to say about our Romantic hero Rajbeer wow love his style love u Rajpreet ❤️
waiitng for nxt part snehu

thanks a lot Meenu🤗
i wish show was still going on miss their jodi😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note: all(silent readers also😆) who have if at all missed previous part Part23(Rajbeer proposing preeto)as it being the last post in page 39 then go and read that first...😃 link part24:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2754469&TPN=39


Part25:
Day 34:


At 12:30pm after having lunch:
Rajbeer Prithvi Preeto Simran go for shopping...Prithvi drives to one of the best shopping mall at Delhi..
Preeto and Simran look into some anarkali' s in one of the store..both started digging the racks where as Rajbeer and Prithvi telling them go for their shopping to other store in the mall...while they were walking to their store Rajbeer eyes fall on a beautiful gown..he stops there..
Prithvi: kya hua..
if u want to buy anything here then lets get in..
both just got to the store..
Rajbeer selects one pretty long gown for Preeto..and Prithvi selects one knee length gown for simran..
they pay the bill and then go to other store in the mall buy some tshirts for themselves and get back to Preeto and simran..
Preeto selected some kurtis for Bani and selected some dresses for herself but had not yet decided which one to buy...Simran has already chose her dresses..so Prithvi takes away Simran from there..
Prithvi: Rajbeer hum yehi mall pe honge..call up after you complete your shopping..
Rajbeer: ya ok..
Preeto looks at his bags and asks about what he bought asking him to show it..
Rajbeer: jyada kuch nahi Preeto jus some tshirts..
he doesnt say about the gown that he bought for her..as he wants to keep it a secret and surprise her later..
Preeto has selected some dresses she just goes to the trial room..
Rajbeer standing out was waiting for Preeto ..after wearing anarkali she comes out and shows it to Rajbeer.. with his approval she selects 2 dresses among the 4dresses that she tried..
2 dresses which Rajbeer chose for Preeto (pics credit AM Forum😆)



paid the bill and walked out of the store..both then get into mobile store Preeto buys nice mobile for Bani as promised to her..and then they get into other store whereshe bought 2 chudidhars for sonu..
Rajbeer: anything more left to shop
Preeto says about buying heels
Rajbeer: ok chalo
both get into shoe store..
Preeto asks the salesman to show high heels..
she gets atracted with one pretty black high heels..
while trying out she managed to walk ahead wearing them and then turns around walking..
Rajbeer: Preeto itna high heels aadat nahi hai kyun bekaar mein try kar rahe ho
Preeto: walks towards him by saying apka height dekha hai match karni hai toh pehna padega mujhe..when she just reached near to him looses her balance..as Rajbeer noticed catches hold of her immediately..and while stopping her from falling..holds her one hand with his and his other hand slipped around her waist..in the moment her lips touched slightly on his cheek though which happened was for a second he felt the kiss on
his cheek..
her lips were now just inches away from his..and her loose hair was touching his shoulder as both were standing close to eachother..soft smile on her face..
he smiled looking at her while making her stand properly..
he held on until she took out the heels..

bahon mein bahon ko thaam lo
o sanam do kadam
ankhon ko ankhon se
ankhon ko ankhon se
jaan lo maan lo
bahon mein bahon ko thaam lo
o sanam do kadam


shopkeeper interupts by asking if to show low heels unlike the one she tried out..she says okk..
Preeto just stood shying away adjusting her hair strand behind her ears..
Rajbeer: standing beside her..whispers..
preeto mujhe heels ko shukriya kehna chahiye..
Preeto: blushing hits his arm with her hand..
among the few that were shown she selects the one pair of heels which she was comfortable in..
after completing their shopping Preeto and Rajbeer were just getting back to the parking area..a gal and Rajbeer bump into eachother..2 bags that he was holding fell down..
Gal: says am so sorry before glancing at him..after adjusting her hair as she looks at him gets surprised..
oh my god Rajbeer tum yahan..?
Rajbeer: equally surprised seeing her...anushka..
Anushka: by god Rajbeer not bad u still remember me..
they both hug eachother..
Preeto just takes the bags from down by then..
Rajbeer: longtime..i thought u were in mumbai..simi ne ekbaar bataya tha..
Anushka: Mumbai toh kabka baat hai Raj..chodke ek saal ho chuki hai..job mein itna busy hogayi ki simran se bhi contact mein nahi rehpayi..how is she and dhruv kaisa hai..
Preeto just standing looks at them..
Rajbeer: they are here too..actually simran and she ( by looking at preeto)are taking part in the fashion week so we all have also come like on a holiday trip to delhi..prithvi ke ghar ruke hain..
Anushka: oh thats grt..Prithvi didnt even say me..usko toh mein baad mein dekhta hun..
she then glancing at preeto asks him..
Anushka:Rajbeer introduce nahi karvaoge..
Rajbeer: he smiles and says shez Preeto..
and Preeto shez anushka..
preeto and anushka greet eachother with a smile saying hii..
Anushka: ur girlfriend?
Rajbeer: he pauses for a second and says we are just good friends..
Anushka: oh i see..smiles..
when he says jus good friends Preeto looks at him with eyes wide open and with angry look on her face which Anushka does notice it and smiles
waise Preeto u know we all were good friends me simi dhruv Rajbeer Prithvi..
and Raj can i say one thing..u have not changed much infact u look even more handsome now..
Rajbeer: tum aur tumhare baate bilkul nahi badle anu..
Anushka: smiles..isse mein compliment samjhun..
Preeto tum batao raj mera pehla crush hai aur hum itne din baad mil rahe hain toh handsome kehne mein kya badi baat huyi..
Preeto: she jus smiles and nods though her heart was burning with jealousy looking at both of them..
Rajbeer does notice Preeto getting more angry he interrupts anushka from saying anything more further by immediately changing the topic..
Rajbeer: acha Anu tumne bataya nahi in which company you are working now..?
Anushka: same company bas yaha pe transfer karli hai..
she then just gets a call from Arjun..
Arjun: aur kitna time..
Anushka: 5 mins haan..jus coming ok..
after ending the call
acha raj have some important work now
sorry haan c u later at prithvi' s home..byeee
byee Preeto it was nice meeting u..
after Anushka leaves..Preeto jus angrily handsover to him his 2 bags and walks out from the mall..and Rajbeer follows after her
Rajbeer: Preeto wait..suno toh sahi
Preeto: stops and yells at him aapne usse jhoot kyun bola
Rajbeer: woh isliye kyunki wohmeri tang khechegi..tum jaante nahi ho usse..
Preeto: irritately kya..?..bas abh kuch mat bolo..she starts walking out..
they go to the parking area were simran and Prithvi were waiting for them..all get into the car..Prithvi drives the car..
Simran and Preeto sitting at back seat..
Prithvi while driving asks Rajbeer
Prithvi: tum dono ko ane mein itna der kaise hogaya..
Rajbeer: hum ahi rahe the..Anushka se mulakaat hua
Simran: excitedly.. really Anushka yaha pe hai?
Prithvi: oh finally tere pankha se mulakaat ho hi gaya..
Rajbeer: jus shut up prithvi..he glances at preeto who turns her head side watching out of the window..
Prithvi: ya Simi shez here..
Simran: woww..milne ka mann kar raha hai..
Prithvi: yaa will ask her to come...

at mall in food court:
Arjun was waiting for Anu at the table..she comes to him..pulls the chair and sits saying sorry to him for being late..
Arjun: itna time kaha rehgaye..
Anushka: guess what i met Raj
Arjun: Raj?
Anushka: yaa Rajbeer...maine tumhe bataya tha na raj ke baare mein
Arjun: oh ya ur first crush i remember
Anushka: haan..just met him now..usse baat karte time nahi dekha..
Arjun: oh toh isliye mujhe bhul gaye..
Anushka: Arjun r u jealous
Arjun: jealous aur mein no way..u know me right..
Anushka: ya i know ki tum aise har choti baat pe naraaz nahi hote..
Arjun smiles
Anushka: acha kuch order kiya..
Arjun: yaa jo tumhe pasand hain woh maine already order kiya hai..bas tumhara ana hi der tha..
Anushka: sorry phir se..wait karva di nah tumhe..
Arjun: its ok..

Rajbeer Prithvi Simran Preeto reach home..they jus keep the shopping bags in the hall..
Dhruv: tumlog agaye we were waiting for u all..chalo lets have dinner..
Meeta asks Preeto to come and join them all in dinner..
Preeto: mujhe bhuk nahi hai Meeta di..
Ishu: Preeto thoda toh khale
Preeto refuses saying shez tired and wants to sleep
Rajbeer: Preeto bhuka paet neend nahi ayegi tumhe..khalo..
Preeto leaves without replying..
Meeta: kya hogaya isse
Ishu: Rajbeer kuch jhagda hua kya tumdono ke beech
Rajbeer: aisa kuch nahi Ishu di..

after dinner all get back to their rooms
Rajbeer and Prithvi at their room:
Rajbeer: Preeto mujhse naraaz hai yaar
Prithvi: naraaz par kyun?
Rajbeer: anu mili thi na mall pe...tu toh jaanta hai usse..kitna bak bak karti hai..crush ye woh kehti gayi..
Prithvi: laughs..
Rajbeer: with irritated look..tu hass raha hai..
Prithvi: sorry..ruk mein anu se baat karta hun..iska solution wahi nikalsakti hai..
Prithvi just calls Anushka
Anu lifts the call and yells at him for not telling her that Simi and all were at his home
Prithvi: really sorry anu sachme batane wala tha..busy hogaya..waise baat toh sunn..
Prithvi then tells her about Rajpreet..
Anushka: she laughs mujhe dekhte hi pata chalgaya tha ki they love each other..
Prithvi: laughs..pata tha phir bhi tang kheech rahi thi..
Anushka: ok give him the phone..
Prithvi then gives the mobile to Rajbeer
Anushka: kya baat hai hero
Rajbeer: tune namak mirch sab kuch dalke araam se bye bolke chali gayi..tumhare wajeh se Preeto mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hai..
Anushka: laughs..Raj tum sach batadethe toh itna sab nahi hota..
kya keh rahe the good friends..am not stupid haan tum dono ko dekhte hi pehchangayi thi..
Rajbeer: u knew it toh chup nahi rehsakte the..
Anushka: was just pulling legs..humesha ki tarah..
acha acha dont worry will talk to Preeto..meet u tommorow morning..
Rajbeer: ok then kal milte hain..he gives back the mobile to prithvi
Prithvi: haan anu..i have one good news..tells her about simran and he loving each other
Anu gets surprised and congratulates him
Anushka: have to meet simi..kal ghar athi hun..usse kuch mat bol..
Prithvi: ya ok..
they end the call by saying bye..

At 11pm:
Preeto in kitchen searches for something to eat..
Preeto: kuch nahi hai yaha pe..
fridge mein dekhti hun shayad kuch milega..
Preeto was searching in the fridge..
Rajbeer:patted his hand on her shoulder
kuch mila?
Preeto: she turns back
mein bas paani ke liye ayi thi..she takes the water bottle starts to walk away from there..
Rajbeer: Preeto ruko
she doesnt stop..he goes after her and gets hold of her duppatta..
by holding onto her duppatta pulls it..
Preeto: just stops as she felt him take a hold of her duppatta..
she shys with a secret smile on her face..
Rajbeer: kuch missing hai
Preeto: kya?
Rajbeer: tumhari smile..lekin mujhe pata hai kaise wapas asakti hai..
he starts singing few lines of a song sweetly..
while singing Rajbeer slowly starts going closer to preeto holding her duppatta..

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ke Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho
Zameen Ko Aasman Banoo
Sitaroon Se Sajaoon
Agar Tum Kaho


as he got close to her she stops blushing
Rajbeer: abhi bhi smile nahi karoge..
itna ruthe ho?
she just realizes shez upset with him so turns back facing to him
Preeto: kahun..suna chahte ho..
Rajbeer: haan
Preeto:bahut bura gaate ho plz phir kabhi mat gana..
Rajbeer still holding her duppata just smiles at her..
Preeto: making a cute face with serious look
meri duppatta chodo..snatches it away from him goes back to her room..
Rajbeer:lagta hai kuch jyada hi naraaz hai..manana itna asaan nahi hoga..lekin kuch karta hun..
he searches for food in the fridge and finds a 2mins noodles packet..
Rajbeer cooks Noodles for her...and knocks at her door..
Preeto: abh kya hai
Rajbeer: ..specially for u..shows her the bowl with noodles
Preeto: mujhe nahi chahiye
she goes and sits in the bed..
Rajbeer walks to her and sits beside her in the bed..
she doesnt speak anything..
Rajbeer: i know tum naraaz ho lekin gussa khane pe mat nikalo..
dekho kitna pyaar se banaya hai tumhare liye..
he hands it over the bowl to her..
he looks at her and says pata hai banate waqt kitna taqleef hua..haath bhi jalgaya tha..
Preeto gets worried kaha dikhao..she holds his palms and starts checking it out..
he just starts laughing..
Rajbeer: tum bhi na Preeto..tumne mere mazak ko bhi seriously le liya..itna bhi bura cook nahi hun..
she leaves his hands by giving angry look..he smiles looking at her angry face..
Rajbeer: acha abh sorry gussa chodo doh aur khalo
he makes her eat and after having noodles she goes and washes her hands..
Rajbeer says goodnight..
Preeto: with angry tone..saying goodnight leaves to her room..

Arjun and Anushka are jodi..work in the same company😛
Anushka played by Rati



Arjun Played by Arjun Bijlani




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next update spoiler😆: Saans song of Jab tak hai jaan on rajpreet with cute scene..😉

Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago

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