Maaneet FF- KHUMAARI- BWTB#2/22/pg146 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo on new thread...waiting for update
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Congrates for the new thread, continue soon.
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KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
PART- 13


OMG!! So many likes n comments... Thnk u thnk u thnk u sooo much...

@mishti_muna
Thnx for having faith in Maan n thnx for liking the SS so much
@jssood
thnx for ur constant support n motivation
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Love ur pix yaar
@Rupanzal
Wen a person who does'nt even speakes to u properly asks u to bcom intimate tat too harshly n widout any feelings then u are bound feel scared
@Saams
Neechi harkat lol I shud hav given tis as precap
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Khumaari means being intoxicated or nashe ki haalat in hindi
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Updating this part in 2 posts hit Like at the end of 2nd post only😊



THUD the window closed n opened again. A gush of wind entered the room n Geet felt short of breath. The rain had stopped but the storm did'nt.

Is it all my fault... Am I the reason for all this hurt and pain
Did I really push him away...stopped him from ever liking me again
Am I blaming the past for my hatred towards myself...
Are these tears I cry...just a lie...a cover up, for the mistake I did

Is it all my fault...no one else
Am I too blame for all my hate and pain...
I cant change the past...but if I could would I do?
I cant make him ever come back
I cant make him ever like me the way I love him...
I cant control him...and I cant even control me...

And yet... I am still questioning it...
Is it my fault.
Am i bad person ...living in denial...
Pushing the happiness away and hating every moment of my life...
Is this all my fault?


It was Dadimaa's room. Geet blinked her red eyes as she sat in cornor of the big bed in the same postion in which Dadimaa had left her.

It was hard to tell the reason of the redness in her eyes. Was it fear? Or pain? Or regret.

She was still not able to believe the fact that all this happened with her. She was shivering with fear. Only one question playing in her mind. Was it her fault? Yes, May be it was all her fault. She was not able fulfil his demand. But then it was new, unknown n scary.

She remembered his face n instently hid her face in her palms. The anger in his eyes gave her tremor of fear.

Aaaooo... Cotton came to her.

Geet looked at her only friend. She cuddled up with him n soon sleep took over as she was hell exhausted.


Today you have crossed all limits. Dadimaa shouted. Her voice sharp n strict conveying the extent of her anger.

Oh please Dadimaa. No need to exaggerate things. Maan said without even a pin point regret.

Maan humme sharam aati hai aapko khurana khandan ka waris kehte hue... Dadimaa gave him disgusted look. Kya bigada tha uss becha...

Bechari...haaa... She should be happy that I was giving her chance to serve me. I was giving this marriage a chance. Isn't people marry to make love n produce babies.


Chee...!! Bas Maan aapko yahi samajh hai rishto ki. Yeh sab Arnab k kaaran hua hai. Humme unka saaya bhi aap pe nai padne dena chahiye tha.

Dadimaa... I won't hear a word against uncle. Maan barked n his voice ecoed through the distanced walls of the hall.

Aapko sunna padega... Aaj se Geet humare bagal wale kamre me rahengi aur aap unke kareeb tab tak nai jayenge jab tak wo khud na chahe, jab tak aap iss rishte ki ehmiyat(importance) nai samjhte, jab tak aap Geet ki izzat(respect) karna nai sikhte. Dadimaa announced. Aur agar aapne meri baat nai mani toh aap humara mara hua muh dekhenge.

Why this old lady have the habbit of turning every small thing into hill size. Maan gritted his teeth n left from there irritated n angry.





CONTINUED BELOW...!!
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CONTINUED...!!



PLAY ME IN BACKGROUND


Tujhko bhulaana
(Go away Stay away You are not the one for me
Go away Stay away This our reality)


Maan stepped inside the club in one of his own hotels.

Aansu na laana
(Go away Stay away You are not the one for me
Go away Stay away This our reality)


The night was young in this place was his refuge.

Ab aa gaya
(Go away Stay away You are not the one for me
Go away Stay away This our reality)


As soon as he entered everyone became aware of his presence. Now all girls had only one mission to seek his attention, no matter how dirty they had to play.

Tujhko bhulaana Aansu na laana Aur muskurana Ab aa gaya
Ab aa gaya


The loud music entered through ears n attacked his brain. His ribs vibrated with thumping music n his heart beats became fast n faster just like when he sees her. This is what he decided to believe but in reality nothing could replace her, his so called wife.

Yadoon se teri Daaman chudaana Dil na dukhana Ab aa gaya
Ab aa gaya


The smell of wine pulled him towards the bar. The attendent knew his faviorite n was going to serve him in a glass but Maan grabbed the whole bottle n gulpped the whole wine in one go.

Ha..ha..
Sun bewefaa Yeh teh kar liya Reh lenge hum
Tere bin


Pole dancers danced on stage seductively with plenty of exposed skin in barely visible cloths.

Heyyy
Ab dard bhi kya hai Humko bhala
Raat aa gayi hai Tere mere darmiyan ka Joh hai fasla


2,3,4... even the attendent lost the count of how many bottles he served him.

Yadoon se teri Daaman chudaana Dil na dukhana
Ha..
Ab aa gaya


Maan shook the bottle in circular motion n looked at the wine inside. It was red. Red the color of love. Red the color of anger. Red the color of danger n blood. Red the color which she wore today. Red the color which creeps her cheek with his every touch.

Wooo oo oo


Damn why every single thing reminds him of her. He broke the bottle in frustation.

Wooo oo oo


Maan neared the girl on the dance floor who was giving him provocative looks since the time he entered.

Dil ke makaan se Tu jaa chukaa
Isme nahi Tu ab raha
Ho..


Maan twirled the girl into his arms n danced with her closely. The girl was offcourse delighted may be it was her lucky day.

Wo..Ho


The task was incomplete, if not Geet then someone else would do it. Maan lifted the girl in his arms n walked through the deserted corridor.

Meri dua mein Tu ab kahan Tu ajnabi hai
Tune inme rehna ka Hai huk kho diya


Maan opened the room door n threw the girl on bed. The girl was on cloud nine. It was indeed her lucky day. Sex with greek god for which she would surely receive big amount.

Tujhko bhulaana Aansu na laana
Na laana
Aur muskurana
Ha..
Ab aa gaya


He came on top of her n kissed her furiously. Her hands went on his back, roaming freely.

Hey
Yadoon se teri Daaman chudaana
Ha..
Dil na dukhana
Ab aa gaya
Ab aa gaya


Strangly it was cold n odd. He remembered Geet how perfectly she fits below him. He pushed the girl away n fell on his back, finally surrendering to sleep but not before feeling her intoxicating name on his lips.

Ab aa gaya


Geet...





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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely part dear
so now he knew
what geet is
hope he learns what is arnab
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊honestly..i am loving this FF. its totally different from others. keep up the good work !😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ...amazing prt ...but y geet blaming herself...updt sooon eagerlyyy waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update yaar...

Loved it...

nice dosage to msk from daadi.. poor Geet...

and he remembering her so much...

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome but i hope ki maan jald hi geet ki unke irste ki ahmiyat samaz jaye continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWSEM update dadi saved geet and now maan see how important geet is to him do next soon

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