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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

When she noticed the love in Arnav's eyes, I was like okay, she is going to walk out but she is waiting for the right moment to attack! Geez, what the heck is wrong with her? You have to continue soon, I am addicted to this story.

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

'Blushing'.."..that was intense and much needed! Thank you Muffin ...now if only Lavana can leave...sigh!!!

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rockinggirl555

@rockinggirl555

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

I love all your work. You are a great writer. Awesome FF!!! And I can't wait for more. Thanku so... much.

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Oh good Lord! *fans self* I hope Shamsher and Lavs fall in love. They'd make the perfect couple. 😉

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

😳arnav and khushi are just <3

i love the way you write them together

👏

but lavanya ughh

whatta (w)itch

i hate her. i really hope she doesnt destroy them

but i loved the way she noticed the love in arnav's eyes

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH - i knew it was going to be awesome the moment i read the first chapter.

i really hope arnav shows khushi how he has her kamarband and payals - memories from her past life, that scene would be so beautiful

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

i hate lavanya - i just re-read chapter 25, and gosh you write her so well enough for me to actually feel hate towards her.

it's like she's a real person. i love your writing in that it makes the reader feel that he/she is in the room with the characters.

i may have mentioned this already, but this story reads like a screenplay to a play or movie. so wonderful!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

wow!! me love this!!
and lavanya can go to hell!!
and all her strategies can go up her's!! ;)
loved the update, munchy!! :D
i'm not sure if i commented on the previous updates.. in case i haven't, just know that they were loved too!! :D
love you <3

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

oh loved the update but why lavanya 🤔

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

Very Nice update. He knew what he did was wrong so he pleasured her. She knew he wasn't done so she did the same for him. Finally they both know that they are wanted. Hm lets see what La does!

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#320

I'm addicted to your FF... honestly i just can't get enough of it ;) The way you write is phenomenal... Desperately waiting for the next update :) Thank...