[MG FF] The Sunshine- Update pg 134 - Page 78

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Posted: 11 years ago
well i m waiting for leap.. yes too much childhood will be little boring when stretched but u xcan write 3-4 updates on that and then leap.
i really want to see Maan's revenge. want him to torture Mohan. and also want to see wat happen to Geet's mother.
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz go ahead with what's in ur mind but would like to read few small gists of his progress n how his personality grows
waiting for teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
am ok with which ever way you want to take it ...but, would love to see their love blossoming...emotions changing...respect and care changing into love...maan and geet accepting their relation...waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reply to your note:

I agree, writing about their childhood in detail might be a bit too much. I am totally fine with a sensible leap. Just write as you planned. Till now you managed well to entertain us I am sure you will not bore us with unnecessary details. Waiting for the next update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
to be frank i forgot detail of this story so i will like u to give short summery of story so far,and then continue with story.too much same and same thing boring but some spice,and twist and turns most welcome.
eager to know real maan now not suppressed any more and how their teenage friendship grow and then how he left country,what happen to geet in mean time etc. etc.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys! Thanks for giving your opinions. Though I was waiting for more, anyway, never mind. I am sorry for being late in updating ans may be ruining the effect of the story for you guys. But I promise I am going to update regularly or at least try. I hope you guys will understand. There was a good suggestion of posting a summary of the plot till now. The summary will be posted before the main update is posted. Look out for it :) Here's the teaser.
TEASER

Silent breeze whistled in the pitch darkness of the living room of the cottage when Geet stepped inside. Her sharp eyes tried to make something out of her surroundings but she didn't have any inkling of what was happening there. She treaded on into the room carefully, trying not to bonk herself against any piece of furniture. But something came in her way, something rubbery and when she tried to swat it away with her feet, it burst.

"Oh my god!" she screamed and turned only to bang into someone, her screaming increasing tenfold in sheer fear of darkness and the unknown when a hand closed her mouth to stop her from screeching and waking up the whole neighborhood, "Shhh...munnu!"

Maan's voice washed her with such calmness that she froze completely. He was so close that his breath tickled her ears as he whispered, "Happy Birthday, munnu!"

She closed her eyes in delight. It had been 6 years since Maan came into her life and there wasn't a dull day from then on. But every year on this particular day, her life seemed like a fairy tale to her. Every single moment that led to her birthday every year was waiting in such desperate anticipation of what Maan was going to do to surprise her. He never let a dash of the party plan reach her ears. She didn't know he managed to make it beyond perfect every time, but he did. For that she loved him.

That thought nestled in the deepest corner of her heart as she received a huge hug from her only best friend. That thought was there to stay...

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful teaser .. i'm really happy that they both are happy .. 😃
Edited by annbell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome teaser. i m desperately waiting for update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
great teaser, waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting teaser...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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