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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear😊...

they r so cute😳...loved their convo...

neha prayed for veer's success...so sweet😊...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo


thanks swthrt😛😉
luv u too,ur comments always encourage me😊😊😊
thank u so much😉


thats why comment...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 15

(malhotra house)
veer entered in the house n everyone saw him shockly...nivi came near to him n said-''veer kahan the tum hum sab kitna pareshaan ho gye the ...btake jaana chahiye tha na beta ...kam se kam mujhe bta diya hota...ek phone bhi nhi kiya tumne...agar koi jaruri kaam tha ti kisi ko phone hi kar dete...

veer looked at her worried face n said-''maa aap itni pareshaan kyun ho rhi h ab mein bada ho gya hun chota baccha thode hi hun jo kho jayunga...bas ek jaruri kaam tha to mein mein jaldi chala gya...or phone karna bhi bhool gya sorry''

nivi-''han han bhot bada ho gya h na ab maa ki kya jarurat h''

veer hugged her n said-'sorry maa ab maaf kar dona sorry''she smiled n kissed his forehead n said-''ab jao or tyaar ho jao hum ne tumhaara saara samaan pack kar diya h''

veer smiled n said-''thank u maa''n went upstairs

after sometime

he was ready with all his luggage n important files in other bag...dhruv put his luggage in car...n veer take blessings from elders..his father came near n said-''koi pareshaani ho to phone kar dena beta...or nervous mat hona ''n hugged his son

dhruv n rudra smiled n said-''veer chalo nhi to flight choot jayegi''

veer hugged her mother n then all of 3 sat in the car n leave for airport
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all of them reached at airport...n in few minutes all his formalities were completed...n after 1 hour there is a announcement of his flight..dhruv n rudra hugged him n gave best wishes ...with their best wishes he left happily ...dhruv still staring him n felt sad...rudra put his hand on his shoulder n said-''don't worry dhruv...veer kabhi nhi harega''hear his words he smiled n leave for home

at night

sushma sat on bed n thought something...shubh entered in the room n said-''sushma kuch soch rhi ho''

sushma-''ji...mein ye soch rhi thi ki ab hme diya ki shaadi kar deni chaahiye..wo badi ho gayi h or shaadi thik umar me ho jaye wahi sahi h kyun?''

shubh looked at her n said-''nhi sushma diya abhi bacchi h abhi use padne dena chahiye...or fir nivi or siddarth bhi to yahi chahte h ki wo padai kare''

sushma frowned n said-''acche ladke baar baar nhi milte meri saheli apne ladke ke liye hmaari diya ka haath maanga rhi h ladka bhot syndar or sanskaari h or hmaari brabari ka bhi h to meine to usse kah diya ki hmaari diya unke hi ghar ki dulhan banegi''

shubh shocked to hear this n said-''tum pagal ho gyi ho aise bina soche samjhe rishta pakka kar diya..nivi or siddarth se to puccha hota diya unki beti h or tumne unse puchna jaruri nhi samjha''

sushma-''to kya wo meri kuch nhi lagti...or waise bhi wo mujhe mana thode hi karenge aakhir wo meri bhi bacchi h''shubh lying on bed annoyingly -''jo man me aata h karo''

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(sharma house)

neha lying on bed n lost in his thoughts n remembered the first meeting between them...then in shopping mall...n the way he placed her hairs behind the ear ...then touched his lips on her cheek...she smiled shyly n put the pillow on her face...suddenly a hand pulled her pillow n gazed at her beautiful face..she shocked to saw him there n said-''veer tum yahan..tum to aaj jaane wale the na fir''before she could completed he put his palm on her mouth n said-'' tum kitna bolti ho ...thodi der chup nhi reh sakti''

neha removed his hand n said-''tum yahan kya kar rhe ho jao yahan se koi dekh lega''

veer-''mein tumse milne aaya hun or tum mujhe yahan se jaane ko bol rhi ho''n bend towards her ...n came more closer...she got nervous n said-''koi dekh lega''

veer smiled n came more closer to her lips n said-''dekh ne do''she slowly closed her eyes n said-''jao na''

he was about to kiss when she opened her eyes n shocked..she was all alone in the room ...that was only her imagination...she sat on the bed n looked here n there for him but he was not there ...then after sometime she smiled n pat her hand on forehead n laying on bed again lost in his dreams ...n soon she was in deep sleep

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next morning

neha sat in her cabin n said to herself-''kal se ek baar bhi phone nhi kiya...meine to aise hi mana kiya tha phone karne ko ...ptah nhi veer thik se pohcha bhi hoga ya nhi''

suddenly peon entered in her cabin n said-''madam aapko sir ne bulaya h''

then she leave...

on the other hand
tanya n sapna entered in the hospital...n busy in their talks

tanya frowned n said-''mujhe ye hospitals bilkul pasand nhi h yahan aakar thik thaak log bhi bimaar ho jaate h ''

sapna-''thik h baba,,,mein bas tujhe thodi si dawai dungi or tumhaara sar ka dard bhot jald band ho jayega''

tanya-''mujhe dawai nhi khaani sapna veer ayega to mera sar ka dard apne aap band ho jayega''n made a very sad face

sapna entered in her cabin n said to tanya-''veer ko bhot miss kar rhi ho'' she nodded...sapna sat next to her n said-''veer bhi tujhe miss kar rha hoga aakhir tu uski bachpan ki dost h''

tanya looked at her n said''ab mein sirf uski dost nhi hun...life partner bhi hun''

sapna surprised to hear her answer n said-''kya kya kaha tumne life partner mein kuch samjhi nhi''

tanya was very happy n said-''us din jab hum disc gye the na tab meine use kehte hue suna ki wo bhi mujhse bhot pyaar karta h or mein veer ko apne se dur kabhi nhi jaane dungi wo hmessha mera hi rahega''n both of them smiled n hugged each other

sapna-''tannu mein tere liye bhot khush hun''

she gave her medicines...n tanya leave..as she moved towards the gate of hospital n on the other neha came with lots of files n both of them suddenly strucked to each other...her all the files scattered on the floor...she quickly said-''sorry''n bend down to put the files

tanya was very angry n said-''dekh ke nhi chal sakti dekhaai nhi deta kya tumhe''

neha saw upward n said-''meine sorry bola tha''

tanya-''tumhaare sorry se sab thik ho jayega mujhe itni jor se laga uska kya...apne aap ko samajhti kya ho tum''

she didn't listen her n busy in arranged the files...she said -''tum hi se baat kar rhi hun behri bhi ho kya

she stand up n said-''mujhe tuhaari jaise pagal ladki ki baat sunne mien koi interest nhi h ;;tanya got more angry n said-''tumne mujhe pagal kaha'' stretched her hand to slap neha but
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆🥱scene 1 --cute, sweet, i like it reading...⭐️
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scene 2- sab lakdiyoon ki shaadi ke piche haat dhokar kyun pade hote hai...😭.


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(sharma house)

neha lying on bed n lost in his thoughts n remembered the first meeting between them...then in shopping mall...n the way he placed her hairs behind the ear ...then touched his lips on her cheek.(oye hoye😳).she smiled shyly n put the pillow on her face...suddenly a hand pulled her pillow n gazed at her beautiful face.(😳sharmagayi, ooo, neha blushed☺️).she shocked to saw him there n said-''veer tum yahan..tum to aaj jaane wale the na fir''before she could completed he put his palm on her mouth n said-'' tum kitna bolti ho ...thodi der chup nhi reh sakti''(sach main bohot bolti hain!😆!)

neha removed his hand n said-''tum yahan kya kar rhe ho jao yahan se koi dekh lega''(jab pyar kiya tho derna kya?😉)

veer-''mein tumse milne aaya hun or tum mujhe yahan se jaane ko bol rhi ho''n bend towards her ...n came more closer..(sahi main veer, tumhare himaat ki kadar hi nhi h neha ko??)

.she got nervous n said-''koi dekh lega''(😳bandhi nervous ho rahi h)

veer smiled n came more closer to her lips n said-''dekh ne do''(👏dats the spirit!)


she slowly closed her eyes n said-''jao na''(akhein bandh kar logi, aur use kiss karne se rokogi nahi,😎 tho voh kyun jayega)

he was about to kiss when she opened her eyes n shocked..she was all alone in the room ...that was only her imagination..(oh! no......neha ka POPAT ban gaya🤣).she sat on the bed n looked here n there for him but he was not there ...then after sometime she smiled n pat her hand on forehead n laying on bed again lost in his dreams ...n soon she was in deep sleep (🥱chalo neend tho aayi)

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next morning

neha sat in her cabin n said to herself-''kal se ek baar bhi phone nhi kiya...meine to aise hi mana kiya tha phone karne ko ...ptah nhi veer thik se pohcha bhi hoga ya nhi''(chinta ho rahi hai veer ki, cho chweet)😳



tanya frowned n said-''mujhe ye hospitals bilkul pasand nhi h yahan aakar thik thaak log bhi bimaar ho jaate h ''(tumhari tho thinking hi ajeeb hai)😡

sapna-''thik h baba,,,mein bas tujhe thodi si dawai dungi or tumhaara sar ka dard bhot jald band ho jayega''(...accha, iss tanya ko main poison😡, jahar na dedo, aayi badi sar dard vali😡)


tanya was very happy n said-''us din jab hum disc gye the na tab meine use kehte hue suna ki wo bhi mujhse bhot pyaar karta h or mein veer ko apne se dur kabhi nhi jaane dungi wo hmessha mera hi rahega''n both of them smiled n hugged each other(abe oye,😡 tanya tintokali...😡jyada ban mat, jyada ud mat,😡 aayi badi, veer ko 😡aapne se dur nhi hone dongi, ...😡..band baja dongi teri agar neha aur veer ke bich main aayi tho.)

sapna-''tannu mein tere liye bhot khush hun''(yeh khushi nahi dhokha hai!)

she gave her medicines...n tanya leave..as she moved towards the gate of hospital n on the other neha came with lots of files n both of them suddenly strucked to each other...her all the files scattered on the floor...she quickly said-''sorry''n bend down to put the files

tanya was very angry n said-''dekh ke nhi chal sakti dekhaai nhi deta kya tumhe''(tu tho bada aapni headlight 😡si aakhin chala kar dekh rahi thi...😡...)

neha saw upward n said-''meine sorry bola tha''(haan , usne bola nah...😡...kya kare tanya ke kano main serious 🤓defect hai..brain main bhi h,😉 dr. neha plz iska treatment karo😆)

tanya-''tumhaare sorry se sab thik ho jayega mujhe itni jor se laga uska kya...apne aap ko samajhti kya ho tum''(main hoti tho😆, thoda acche se dhakka marti......)

she didn't listen her n busy in arranged the files...she said -''tum hi se baat kar rhi hun behri bhi ho kya(behri tum ho,😡 usne sry bola, sunai nahi diya kya,😡 u duffer...n deaf.)

she stand up n said-''mujhe tuhaari baat sunne mien koi interest nhi h ;;tanya stretched her hand to slap neha but(hey ! bhanvaan,😍 yeh veer hi ho, aur aur, yeh use maaza bhi chakhaye,...😵...)


cool ud,
enjoyed reading.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear😊...thank u so much for these faster updates🤗...

loved that imagination part😳...so cute...she was missing him...i am waiting for their cute phone convo😍...

but this tanya😡...i hate her...

what a point to stop😉...slap suspense...hmm...plz plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww lovely update dear😊...
part14-
so veer went to see neha only😳...but poor boy is tired waiting for her...late riser itna jaldi uthega to exhausted to hoga na......
but not to worry...neha is there to take care of her veer😳...she's so concerened for him😳...
and neha prayed for his success😳...damn cute...
don't be nervous veer...she's with u na...success is waiting for u...😃
and neha gave him her phone no. 😊chalo achchha hai at least distant conversation to chalta rahega😳...
part15-
love that neha-imagining -veer scene😍...she's imagining him to be kissing her😳
now i hate this tanya🤢...till now i was just disliking her for coming in b/w veer and neha...but couldn't hate her as thought what's her fault if she loves veer and misinterpreted veer's words🤔...
but now i know this girl can never love anyone🤢...she lack the virtue called humanity yaar...
and how dare she talk about hospitals like this😡...and then abusing a doctor😡...what does she think of herself???? spoilt rich kahiki...neha became a doctor on her own not like spending her dad's money like u...🤢 sorry yaar...yahan thoda personal ho gaya😆
but why did she stop??😲 (not that i want her to slap our neha)
plz update soon dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late reply
both the parts r awesome
someone kill this Tanya or I'll do the honor
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear n thanx 4 pm
Neha's dream abt veer ''jagtehuye veer ke sapne'' ohhooo😳
Veer didn't call her , 😔
update soon
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

sorry for late reply

both the parts r awesome
someone kill this Tanya or I'll do the honor
update soon


di iss kaam main, aapki choti sis bhi haat batayegi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ud!!!! 😉
I hate dat Tanya 😡
waiting for veer n nehas next meet...

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