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Posted: 13 years ago

hey dear

sorry 4 late comment
loved the last 7 parts
superb!!!
cont soon
n thnx 4 da pms
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Posted: 13 years ago

Yeh kya??? Upd8 aa gaya aur mujhe PM nahi mila?????

Kya gunaah kiya tha maine???😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Khair maine phir bhi padh lia
Update toh bohot achha tha...aur veer ka game aur bhi achha tha😉
But mera ek question hai...
PM bhejo na bhejo...iss question ka answer zaroor dena
What happened to Neha's ice-cream?????😆😆😆😆
Cont soon.
nxt tym mujhe PM karna mat bhoolna
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Yeh kya??? Upd8 aa gaya aur mujhe PM nahi mila?????

Kya gunaah kiya tha maine???😭

Khair maine phir bhi padh lia
Update toh bohot achha tha...aur veer ka game aur bhi achha tha😉
But mera ek question hai...
PM bhejo na bhejo...iss question ka answer zaroor dena
What happened to Neha's ice-cream?????😆
Cont soon.
nxt tym mujhe PM karna mat bhoolna
luv u...😊

bade wala sorry dear😭...bhot jaldi jaldi pm kiya na sabko isliye shayad i forgot u sorryyy😭😭😭

question bhot accha h 😆 or answer or bhi accha h

neha ne veer ko offer ki thi ice cream but usne nhi khaayi so saari usne hi khaali...waise bhi ice cream koi chodta h kya...mein to kabhi nhi chodti😃

sorry dear
next time nhi bhoolongi

luv u too
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
geetap thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey u r online now does that means u r updating? ...plz na mat bolna
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetap

hey u r online now does that means u r updating? ...plz na mat bolna

ok will try to update today but wait karna padega ok😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
haan chalega...can wait few hrs better than waiting till tom...thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetap

haan chalega...can wait few hrs better than waiting till tom...thanks dear

sorry dear powercut ho gya tha thodi der me karti hun update
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Posted: 13 years ago
no problem...thanks for updating anyway and sorry for troubling u so much, everday.
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 45

veer lazily wake up from the bed n strtched his arms...then went to washroom for freshen up...dhruv n rudra excitedly came to his room n rudra knocked the doors loudly-''veer jaldi bahar aao''

veer -''just 2 min''inside the washroom

rudra-''itna time nhi h hmare pass veer jaldi bahar aao''veer rolled his eyes n said-'accha phir jao mujhe time lagega''

rudra-''ok fine 5 minute wait karte h hum sab shopping par jaa rhe h sapna ke sath''veer laghed n said-''accha sab log bhabhi ke saath ja rhe h to tum kya karoge jaakar''

rudar pat the door-''veer hum sab ja rhe h sapna mein tannu dhruv pooja bhabhi or tum shopping karne''

veer -''mujhe nhi jana ladkiyon ki shopping mein hum sab kya karenge''

dhruv stopped rudra n said loudly-''rudra chalo use interest nhi h agar neha puchegi to bol denge ki use usme koi interest nhi h''veer quickly opened the door n they both gigled-''meine aisa kab bola''

dhruv-''to tum humaare saath aa rhe ho''

veer -''han''while combing his hairs...dhruv n rudra gigled to saw him

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after sometime they reach at a shopping mall...sapna n tanya waited for them..tanya smiled to saw veer-''hi veer tum yahan''

veer-''han...ab mere bhaiyo ki shaadi h to mujhe bhi to shopping karni hogi na''

than suddenly neha npooja entered in the mall...sapna welcomed them n said-''so boys jakar apni shopping karenge or girls apni shopping karegi ok''

dhruv n rudra said quichly-''kyun sath mei nhi kar sakte kya??

sapna smiled n said -''no no''aap jakar alag shopping kijiye''

rudra-''this is not fair yr''rudra made a childish face...all of them laughed

veer busy in gazing his neha when dhruv pat his shoulder n said -''veer ''he looked at dhruv -''hmmm''

dhruv-''chalo shopping karni h''veer looked at him with puzzled face-''shopping''

neha smiled to saw his face..everyone leave for their shopping...girls were busy in selecting their dresses n jwellery...on the other hand boys walked in shopping mall as they came on morning walk

veer felt bore n sat on a chair...but girls still busy in their selection...veer busy in gazing neha...neha select a beautiful dress n looked at veer...

he smiled n rejected her dress...she saw her dress n put throw on shopkeeper-accha nhi h koi or dikhao''

veer laughed n again looked at her...soon they met for lunch together

dhruv-''to kitni shopping hui tum logo ki''

pooja-''abhi tak to kuch bhi nhi hua...''

rudra-''humne pehle hi kaha tha ki hum saath chalte h thodi help kar dete dress select karne mein but nhi tumhe to akele hi jana tha''

tanya-''ok fine ab sab saath mein hi cahlenge''now boys were happy...they all having their lunch when veer hold neha's hand under the...who sat next to him

she shocked n looked at him nervously-''chodo''in a very slow tone

he didn't loosed his grip n made it more tighter ...she ate from left hand slowly slowly...veer enjoyed her grasped

after sometime

they all went to their shopping...dhruv with pooja n rudra with sapna...veer standing on nearby shop with tanya ...tanya gazing him n said-''veer chalo hum bhi shopping karte h''

veer-''ok bas neha ko ane do phir cahlte h''she smiled but she was hell irritated with this name...neha came towards veer when thought something n twisted her leg n about to fall when veer hold her through waist...neha looked at veer..he quickly removed his hand...

tanya smiled softly-''im sorry woh mere per me moch aa gyi thi''

veer-''koi baat nhi tum baith jao''he made her sit on a chair


neha''veer tanya ko chot lag gyi h to wo hmare saath shopping par kaise ayegi''veer looked at tanya n said-''tannu tum yahan baith kar aaram karo hum shopping karke aate h..ok agar kuch jarurat ho to mujhe call kar dena ok''she nodded unwantedly

veer left with neha...she select her jwellery-''yeh kaisi h dekho''

he gazing her lovingly-''accha h''she tried it on her n saw in mirror

then she select a dress n went to change...veer standing outside.waited for her...after few minutes she came out n surprised to saw her in red dress...she looked more beautiful n gorgeous...she came closer n said-''mein kaise lag rhi hun''

veer pulled her closer-''om my god...u know im the lukiest person in whole world becoz duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki meri girlfriend h''she blushed

veer kissed her forehead n said-''u look beautiful''

she smiled shyly n said-''to mein yeh le lun''he nodded

after sometime

they completed their shopping n leave the shopping mall...
veer grasped neha's hand n moved towards his car

soon he reached paali hill

she was surprised n said -''veer hum yahan kyun aaye h''veer cameout from the car n said-''yeh dekho''

she looked at a plce where some construction going on-''yahan kya ho rha h''

veer hugged her from behing-''yehi to h mera surprise''

neha-''surprise''

he embraced her more tightly-''hmm...my dream project...mene start kar diya''she felt very happy-''sach''she jumped out

n hugged him back...she pulled her head-''all the best for ur project mr veer malhotra''

veer-''nhi...our dream project...kuch din me yeh ready ho jayega''

she looked into his eyes...her eyes become moist...veer looked at her-''kya hua aise kyun dekh rhi ho''

neha-''kuch nhi...hmara sapna jarur poora hoga..''
n embraced him

she looked at constructed building n smiled...then she looked at veer..went more closer n more closer he was little surpriised...she came near his lips n kissed them...veer was shocked n widened his eyes...after few seconds she tore her kiss n smiled shyly...veer put her chin upward n went more nearer...he lokked at her wet lips ..then sucked them...passionately


sorry for late update


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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for updating
plz iss tanya ka kuch karo she is too irritating, but loved the scenes between veer and neha...😍,
continue soon
Edited by geetap - 13 years ago

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