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Character Sketch

arnav-he is a fun guy of 18 yrs old...in grade 12,handsome, humorous, dashing ...lives in Canada...but an Indian...

khushi-She is a fun girl,good looking ,smart, 18yrs old in grade 12...lives in India...but she has just moved to canada
payal-khushi friend,lives in Canada,18 yrs, gr 12
akash-arnav friend lives in Canada,18 yrs ,gr 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1

A girl from Air India steps on tht land and her hair r coming all over the face cuz of the wind…thts our dear Khushi

A guy jumps up from the bed like a spring after hearing the darn Alarm and shuts it off and sleeps again, but the sun rays from the window wake him up..….thts our dear arnav
pay:Are yaar…kitni der laga di …I was waiting for u outside the airport..
Khu: Kya kahu yaar…wo immigration walo ne roka tha..to take pic and all documents stuff…
pay:Oh ok ok.. I get it…so..how was the journey..
Khu:Sooo tiringgg…..but fun….cuz I traveled in plane for da 1st time…lolzzz
krips:Oo I c….yaar….teri bohot yaad ayi…aur mujhe tujhse itniii saari batein karni hai ….intniii saari baatein karni hai…tht kya kahoon kitnii saaa
khu:Haan…ab yeh dialogue baji band kar…mera samman kaun uthayega…tu…????
pay:La mein uthati hoon [ moves ahead to take one of the bags]…
khu:Rehene de bohot bhari hai…and waise bhi its just 1 bag…and car is just a few steps ahead…I ll do it…
Both go towards the car….they put luggage …they sit…they go to payal home…
Actually payal is living alone(she came on student visa) ,same with khu….now thye r gonna live together…

Here comes payal's home…ek flat hai…she opens the door…..typical Indian ghar hai..[from inside] (lolz)….Indian khane ki khoshbu aa rahi hai…

khu:Are tuje Indian khana banana kab aaya…tuje toh kuch bhi nahi aata tha naa//!!
pay:Yahan aake sab sikh liya…
khu:Wowww….chalo achha hai….where's da washroom…I wanna go to freshen up…
pay:Straight to the right…tum jao.., tab tak , mein khana lagati hoon….
khu:[thinking( to herself)> bol toh aise rahi hai…jaise mein uska pati hoon…."khana laga deti hoon"
She freshens up and comes back and sits on table…her legs r paining….
khu:La tuje help kar do…
pay:No just yeh microwave mein hi garam karna hai…nothing long to do…u sit and relax…
kash:Ok
Tabhi she picks up the remote to switch on the tv…and to her surprise she sees…there is a bill!!!
khu:Are yeh kya be….hotel se layaaa tune….mujhe doubt to ho hi gaya tha……ki tu meri achanak itni seva kyun kar rahi hai….kya zaroorat thi…hello mam…mien burgar ,pizza kha sakti hoon…..
pay:No actually burger pizza kaa samaan hai..but mujhe aaj Indian kahana khana tha tere saath…aur itne dino se nahi khaya …
khus:Yaar…leking this cud be expensive naaa..
pay:Are hum toh parties mein bahar se hi late hai…and nothing costly…its normal….
khus:Ok …I see…
They both eat…and then go into the room….khu enters the room…its all pink….cuz pink is payal's fav. Color….
khu:yeh kya kiye be…pink achha hai…but this is too much yaar….ab mein aa gayi hoon…I m gonna put curtains sky blue color and bed peach color….
pay:No…I said no….yeh toh aisa hi rahega…
khu:No I m gonna change it….wahan India mein bhi hostel mein yeh haal tha…yyaad hei…log hame pinky kehte the…..
pay:Kehte hai toh kahen…and waise bhi no1 gonaa come here….
khu:Ok lets do 1 thing…u take tht bed I ll take this 1…and I ll put all my things on this side…u put there…
pay:Ok …
They start talking…khu talks abt their old Indian friends and pay talks abt her new friends in the school….
khu: hey where is th e school…and when shall I go for admission….and all my documents …and my …
pay:Ufff…don worry…I have already talked with ur counselor and u can hand him ur marksheets from Indian school…he ll see it and probably u ll have to take a simple test…and they ll give u 4 courses this semester…and listen…take physics,chem.,bio and phys ed…this sem…it ll b good for u…
khu:Ok…physics is hard…
pay:u think tht…but over here.u ll not find it hard……
Blah blah ballahh….lik this they talk abt school stuff…and all tht..

Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start but please put english translations for any hindi used thank you thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2

arnav and Akash live together in a flat
ar:Abe chal uth re'
Ak:Aaj kya hai'itna jaldi kyun uth gaya be'
ar:Are school nahi jana kya'?? And I have English test today'who Shakespeare ke play per'I wanna go in library and study for a half an hour'so I wanna go early to the school today
ak:Wht eva'.i don care abt shaky!
ar:Tera shaky jab khafa ho jayega aur phir to tuje bahagwan hi bachaye..
ak:Bhagwan kyun??tu hai naa'.plzzz yaar'aj ke din toh mujhe answers bata dena plzzz'yaar tuje pata hai na'.tht I suck at literature'.
ar:U suck at chem.,bio,math,phy'.everything!!!
ak:Kyaaa be'.now on I m gonna b studying hard on those science subjects'
ar:Why now on..??? pehle kis baat ka muhraat dekh rahe the panditjii!!
aka:Kyaa be'phir finals mein toh teri place kahan hogi aur meri kahaan'I ll nopt b able to copy then naa'
ar:Are panditji toh bohot chalak nikle'
ak:Ab baatien hi karega yaa jana hai library?
arnav goes in the washroom,Akash goes to make coffee for both'.
ak: yaar sochta hoon aaj shave karoon.
ar:Haan haan kar le beta'sadhu jo ban gaya hai 18 ki umra mein!!
rehne de rehne de''.abhi tak dadhi nikli bhi nahi'aur shave karne nikla hai'.kise impress karne ki iraade ghoom rahe hai dimaag mein??
Ak:Kisi ko nahi'kisi ko bhi toh nahi'.[Sharma ke]
Both get ready and go to school in the car..'.
Both are working at a pizza place so they bought a car in installment.,to travel to school,cuz .school is far from their home.
Khushi& payal enter the door..its huge school'looks lik a college to khushi..
pa:This side'come here'.office is here..
kh:Hmm
Counselor( person who decides the level of subjects a student will b able to handle with)
payal:sir,thts khushi,my friend she has just arrived here'
C:yes miss khushi,plz come'do have ur documents and immigrant papers?
Kh: yes I do..here they r[hands them in]
C: miss payal u might b getting late to ur classes,'u may go'miss khu will b joining the school in a few days'payal goes
[to khu so acc to these marksheets ur standard is quite high and I can almost say tht u go t the admission ,u don need to take any tests'thoses tests r for ppl who are very new and unaware of the language spoken here'u seem to be quite confident and good to go'.processing will take 2 days and u can join the schhol from Monday.
khu: thnks 'so shud I come directly on Monday or do I need to come in the office for any documents if need be
C: v ll call u if v need anything'or else u ll b getting ur subjects tht day itself
Khu: Sir,I have a request'can I take phs,chem.,bio,phys ed this semister
C: yes,but if classes are full then v l have to move u to some other class'
khu: ok thnks again;;;
She goes
pay was standing outside
khu:did u tell abt subjects..
khu: ya but he said only if classes have space, and I m joining from mon, and no tests for me'.yaaahhhooo
pay: Coolll'.,k I g2g to my class'.will u b able to go back alone?take any bus tht goes to our area ..or else show our address to driver and he ll guide u
khu: don worry I ll figure it out
in class
payal is sitting on left hand corner with no1 on the other side
akash comes in
payal's eyes sparkle lik a star'she smiles a bit..
akash looks towards her,smiles a bit and sits on the other bench on the right side'now arnav comes and sits with akash..
while the teacher was teaching,akash was looking towards payal with slanting eyes'and payal senses something and looks to her right and akash suddenly starts writing something where as teacher was ust speaking and not writing anything on board(lolz)
and then akash looks at her she kinda behaves lik she was looking at the poster on the wall on her right(lolz)'both r gazing eyes on each other'
class is finished
while coming out of the class
ar:what were you doin???
ak:are yaarr'.nothing,what i do
ar: kya kuch nahi'teacher likhne ko kehte the tab, u were not writing a word and when he told to pay aattention towards him u were busy writing'.te\hen u say'u lll work hard on science subjects!!huhhh'how will you hard'.
ak: ya'i wil do you dont worry..
ar: if i dont get worried what i should do you always copy'
ak: ok ok chill !!!
ar: what was that
ak: kya(smiles)
ar:woohhh
ak: nothing
ar:stop all this and study!
They both go to the locker..
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey lovd it.
1 smal req, pls giv eng dialogues like ur othr writings.
Bt d way of presentin n dis story s nice.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3

Its Monday!
pa: khu, do u have hair straightener?
Kh: y am I gonna have it'.my hair r already straight'y do u wanna straighten ur hair'curly hair look good on u ..u hair look fluffy and ur small little face lloks gorgeous with ur notrmal hair,but y do u wannna straighten them???
pa:nothing'just for a change[looking into the mirror ,adjusting her hair]
Khushi pushs her with her elbow & says in a teasing tone
Kh: u have boyfriend?
pa: no wayyy
kh:tell me ,dont hide from me u ill be in problem
pa: no i dont hve
kh:tell me i will help you
pa ok its gotting late I have to pack my bag too'
Kh:[looks at the sky,thinks] what i m thinking she will think 1000 to get involve with someone she is too shy for tht,she too rins away from guys
They get ready & go to school in Bus
pay & khushi reach the school,they go into the office,khushi takes her classroom info ,school mao,etc..
C: u got physics,eng,biophys ed. U ll b able to get chem. ,math,etc, next semister,u can take books from tht room by the front,room 509
Kh: thnx a lot for giving me my desired subjects.
C: if u wish to change schedule or teacher or any prob feel free to talk to me during breaks or be4 n after school.
She goes & takes all her books from tht room,she now has loads of heavy books in her hand.pay was waiting outside
pa:so ur 1st class is eng'
yaaahooo.mine too..so v lll b I same classes ' [after a while]oh nooo'I ll have to return some books in the library ,see, our lockers r on the other side of the school, v ll have to walk a lot for going there and coming back to go to the class'so just keep thes books with u for this period ok? I ll show u locker after this period
khu:ok'.aree wait'class kidhar hai??/
But pay is gone,she is running lik crazy towards the library
Khu: ohh kya karu,'umm..Yes,I do have a map, [takes it out]achha room 623 soo'.i ll have to go left then straight then right & pass by door number 6 then around the gym'ohhh good'its too complicated'[bell rings
she runs lik crazy to find class,she cant ask any1 cuz all r running,not to b late to their classes.she is looking up and searching the room number she was looking fro,on the door of all classes,and
DHADDHHAAAmmm
She bangs into a guy'' the first thing she noticed abt him is his eyes.arnav too noticed her eyes.
Situation:arnav is sitting ,actually kinda lying on the floor,khushi fallen ,kinda sitting on sujal's lap,on his legs, books all over the place
[After a few seconds]

ar: Haiii''''.goshhh'.hello!!u gal!can't u see properly'here take these glasses,,,u need them badly and wht the hack r u doing with these many books??? U don have a locker or wht??
khu: Actually'
ar: areee'myyy fooottt...uuufff
Kh:ask him r u Indian ?
ar:that means,tht u break my leg! 😕

Khush suddenly stands up from his leg😆😳

Kh:actually I m new, its my first day today,I m searching for room 623 tht English,Mr.Durek's class.
arnav helps her with picking all her books,in this, her bio book gets exchanged with arnav chem. Book.
arl:ok'I have English too, so v r in da same classes ,lets go..
They r running thru the hallway ,cuz class is far wawy and they r already a bit late.akash appears from nowhere and whispers in arnav ear tht u don have any other work than falling with girls!
ak: Hey ,man will u take these books I g2g to my locker and then to the library to return thtt novel'
ar:Yo, wait..i can't hold these many'cant u c I already have'[but akash is gone]
Huhhh Gosh this guy!!is sooo disorganized ..he keeps everything till lastdue date,and panices at the end
Khu: So ,he's ur friend'wht's his name? And ya ur name too?by da way I m Khushi
ar:I m arnav and he was akash.
They reach the class.
Now,they sit lik this'pay and akash come late and come to their places.
Kh:[to [pay] y didn't u tell me where the the class was 'it was sop difficult for me to find this class
pay:ooppsss'.i m sorry'.i was in a bit hurry'then how come u r here early?
Khu:aarav helped me out'.
Teacher: Hello ppl,v have a new student today,this is Khushi and u all r supposed to help her out with her missed classes and notes. [to khu]Don't worry u did not miss a lot,Just a few poems'I am available during lunch hours if u need my help on anything u don understand.I moved the test on thursday instead of today[ all ppl become happy..especially akash,he didnot prepare naaa]SO v just started a Shakespearean play, and v r finished with the analysis part of Act1 Scene 1'''.[blahh blah'starts teaching]
All pay attention
pa and kh whispering
pa: wht the hack were u talking abt?? Who helped u?
kh: aarav yaar'he s in our class..
pa:"which class
Kh'this class'.sitting there with the right guy
Teacher:Silence plz
Now they stop talking & listen to teacher'
'.. '.. '.. '' Class finished
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous start pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so interesting ya.
I lovd thr 1st meeting.
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nice .pls pm me wen u continue...plzzz
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great start !!!!!!!!!! really liked it !!!! contine soon !!!
thnx for the pm !!!!

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