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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
the song represented their start f a new life together
loved it very much
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update piya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
awww maneet's expression of luv was really beautiful..
hmm fell tht dev is the culprit..
nice precap..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
piya lovely update
maaneet r awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I dedicate this update to my Anu Di (tellyme) it's her birthday today and another happy news is that she has become a mom today😊😊😊😊😊
I am so happy for u Di may u get all the happiness and may all your dreams come true. I REALLY LOVE U
Love-Piya
PART 29

Geet gets ready for college

She knew who her culprit was he had tried his level best to keep her unconscious but Geet had gained consciousness for few minutes and she had seen his face

The devil was none other than Dev. He had dared to mess with a tigress and now the tigress was ready to teach him a good lesson. He had to pay heavily for his deeds

Geet starts her bike and leaves for college

Maan was already present in the college he had a meeting with the principal. He didn't want any type of problem for Geet due to the incident that had taken place during the prom night

Geet enters the college and starts searching for Rasika she very well knew the relationship that both of them shared hence she was sure that Rasika would certainly know about Dev's whereabouts

Geet: Dev kaha hai Rasika? [Where is Dev Rasika?]

Rasika: Ohho toh Geet Madam Dev ko dhoond rahi hai kya hua itne jaldi humare college k trustee se jee bhar gaya tumhara [So Geet Madam is searching for Dev let me guess u lost interest in the trustee of our college so soon]

Geet: Khabardaar agar Maan ka naam apni gandi zubaan se liya bhi toh [Dare if u even try to take Maan's name from your dirty mouth]

Rasika: Are waah listen guys ye wahi ladki hai jisne prom night k din Maan Sir ki insult kithi aur ab dekho kaise wo unke naam ko lekar bhi possessive ho rahi hai kya baat hai Geet kahi daal mein kuch kala toh nahi? [Oh wow guys listen to this she is the same girl who insulted Maan sir on the prom night and today she is being possessive just by hearing his name is something black in the lentils Geet?]

Geet: Mind your tongue Rasika

Most of the college students had gathered in that area

Rasika: Abhi tak maine kuch kaha hi nahi hai Geet kahi aisa toh nahi k uss din k baad tumne aur Maan ne milkar bistar par samjhotha kar liya ho aur abhi apne tan ki pyas bujhane k liye Dev ko dhund rahi ho haina [I have not said anything as yet wait a minute there is a possibility that u and Maan must have compromised by sleeping together and now you r searching for Dev to satisfy the thirst of your skin am I right?]

Geet placed a tight slap on Rasika's face

Rasika had not expected this reaction from Geet she had assumed that Geet would feel ashamed and would not react to her silly baseless talks

But she was wrong Geet's eyes were spitting fire

Geet: Itni chothi soch tum jaisi ladki ki hi ho sakthi hai kyunki yeh toh tumhara roz ka kaam hai Dev ki rakhel jo thehri tum [A girl like u can only have such low thoughts and it is natural as this is what is your everyday routine since u r the keep of Dev]

Rasika started sweating badly. The entire college was present there she wanted to insult Geet but her game backfired and now she was getting insulted

Geet: Paseene kyun chutne lage darr lag raha hai [Why r u sweating so badly r u scared?]

Geet: Tumhare aur uss kam**e Dev k riste k baare mein toh pura college jaanta hai ab sharmakar kya fayda [Every person of this college is aware about the relationship that u and that bas***d Dev share why r u feeling embarrassed right now?]

Rasika somehow managed to gather some strength

Rasika: Dusro par ungli uthane se pehle khud k gireban mein jakkar dekho Geet agar himmat hai toh hum sabko batau k tumhare aur Maan k beech mein kya ristha hai [Before pointing a finger on someone else first have a good look on your own conscience do u have an answer what relationship do u share with Maan]

Geet: Aaj main tumhe batathi hoon k Maan ki aihimeyat Geet ki zindagi mein kya hai [Today I will tell u what importance Maan holds in Geet's life]

By this time Adi had informed Maan by texting him

Maan rushed outside but stood at a good distance from Geet. He had promised her that she would be the one who would be taking all the decisions hence he didn't want to interfere in this matter but if situation went out of control then he would always be there for his Geet

Geet: Jaanti ho Rasika Maan wo shaks hai jinke ek ishare par ye Geet apni zindagi apni jaan unki mohabbat par luta aur mita sakthi hai [Geet can obliterate her life for the sake of Maan's love]

Geet: Qurbat k kuch lamhe agar Maan k saath mil jaaye toh unn lamho k liye apni hasti apni shaksiyat qurbaan kar sakthi hai ye Geet [If I get some moments of closeness with Maan then Geet can sacrifice her existence for the sake of those moments alone]

Geet:Aaj tak Geet kisi k saamne nahi jhuki par Maan k pyar par apna naam sajaye rakhne k liye ye Geet fakir banne k liye bhi raazi hai [Geet has never bowed down in front of anyone but she is ready to become a beggar in Maan's love]

Geet: Maan k ek pyar bhari nazar mere bechain dil ko raahat se taarash dethi hai [Maan's one loved filled look gives peace to my tormented heart]

Geet: Maan wo hai jinke bagair naa toh mera aaj ho saktha hai aur naahi kabhi main aane wale kal k baare mein soch sakthi hoon [There can never be a moment without my Maan nor can I dream of a tomorrow without him]

Geet: Mera dil phattar ka bun gaya tha par Maan ne apne pyar se uss phatar dil mein hulchal paida kar di aur mujhe ye ehsaas dilaya k main bhi zinda hoon [My heart was as hard as a stone but Maan's love touched it in such a way that feelings started arousing in it he was the one who made me realize that I am alive]

Geet: Chahe jisko bhi main dekhu mujhe har jagah bus Maan hi Maan nazara aate hai kyunki wo mera saaya hai jinke bagair main adhuri hoon [ I see something of him in everything I look at as Maan is my shadow and I am incomplete without him]

Geet: Maan sirf dipak ki tarah meri raaho mein jalthe hi nahi balki wo mera ek hissa hai jo mere andar samaye hue hai [He not only burns like a lamp on my paths but he's inside me he is a part of me]

Geet: Agar main dariyaan hoon to Maan mera sahil hai [If I am a river he is my shore]

Geet: Agar mera dil ek mandir hai toh Maan who muhurat hai jinki puja iss mandir mein hothi hai [If my heart is a temple then Maan is the only one whose image gets worshipped in this temple]

Geet: Main ek aisa sapna thi jiska koi chehra nahi tha par meri har kami ko Maan ne apni mohabbat se pura kar diya [I was a dream without a face but Maan completed me with his love]

Geet: Aasman ki inayat bankar Maan meri zindagi mein aaye aur meri batsurati ko khoobsurati mein tabdeel kar diya [Maan entered my life as a favor from heaven and made me beautiful]

Geet: Maan wo hai jinhone meri mukaddar ki maramat apne pyar se ki [Maan repaired my fate with his love]

" Dil mein ek chothi pyas thi unhone mujhe dariyaan de diya

Kitni khwaishe thi inn palko mein unki ek nazar ne meri har khwaish ko pura kar diya

Main zameen ko chuna chahthi thi unhone mujhe aasman se milwadiya

Kitni baate kehna chahti thi main par unhone mere dil ki har baat ko bina kahe hi pad liya

Bheegi hui dharti ki tarah main apna sahara dhud rahi thi unhone badal bankar mujhe apne aaghosh mein le liya"

[I had a small thirst he gifted me an ocean

I had endless dreams and desires he gifted me his love and I attained everything

I wanted to touch the earth he gifted me the sky

I was experiencing difficulty to express my emotions but he understood my heart's speech with ease

Like a drenched earth I was searching for a support he took the face of a cloud and embraced me protectively]

Geet: Geet Maan ki mohaabat mein itni taakat hai k saari kayinaat unki mohabbat ko sametne mein nakayiyaab ho jaaye [There is so much strength in Geet and Maan's love that the whole universe will fail to embrace our love in its folds]

Geet: Haan main Maan se pyar karti hoon [yes I love Maan]

Rasika was shocked to see the confidence in Geet's eyes

Geet: Maan aur Geet k pyar ki gehrayi tum nahi samaj paayogi [U will never be able to understand the depth of Geet and Maan's love]

Geet turned around and was about to go when all of a sudden she stopped and faced Rasika once again

Geet: Aur haan uss chuhe (Dev) ko bol dena k jis din wo apne bil se bahar nikla usse iss Sherni k keher se uske farishte bhi bacha nahi paayenge kyunki ab ye Geet pehle se bhi zyada takatwar bun chuki hai kyunki ab uska pyar uska haath thame uske saath chaltha hai [And yes tell that mouse (Dev) that he won't be able to escape the wrath of this tigress as now Geet has become more strong since the love of his life is there with her holding her hand in every phase of her life]

Rasika started shaking badly after hearing Geet's warning

Geet started walking

After few seconds she felt her hand in someone's protective grip it was Maan

They shared a beautiful eyelock

Without saying anything both of them started walking holding each other's hand as if declaring to the world that Maan and Geet would remain together and nothing can come between their love not even death

PRECAP1: The chase begins

PRECAP 2: Some Maaneet moments😳😳😳

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wht an update Piya di...
Hats off...
*clap* *clap* *clap*

Kya Piya di... U werent sure bout dis update...
Piya di.. Trust me its amazin.. I told u nah ki i knw dat u'd be amazin... N u shud hv confidence on urslf... Ur absolutely fantastic... 😃

Rasika... Urggghhh... Khud ka pta ni.. Geet k upar comment kr rhi thi... Huh...
I luvd hw Geet retorted back.. Maza aa gya.. Dat Rasika deserved dat... Hehehhee..

I luvd each bit of wht Geet said... It was magical... Hw confidently she expressed herself... Geet has been a tigress ..a fighter... N it showed d way she still carried herslf..
Luv u Piya di.. For making Geet's character so strong and smart.. 😃

N d poem.. OMG.. Piya di.. Its engraved in my heart.. Sachhi me... Each word.. It ws jz sooo beautiful...

"Dil mein ek chothi pyas thi unhone mujhe dariyaan de diya
Kitni khwaishe thi inn palko mein unki ek nazar ne meri har khwaish ko pura kar diya
Main zameen ko chuna chahthi thi unhone mujhe aasman se milwadiya
Kitni baate kehna chahti thi main par unhone mere dil ki har baat ko bina kahe hi pad liya
Bheegi hui dharti ki tarah main apna sahara dhud rahi thi unhone badal bankar mujhe apne aaghosh mein le liya"

Amazin poem Piya di...
Me gonna use it 4 MY MSK... Hehehehhe... 😆

I luvd hw end me Maan n Geet walked hand in hand showing d world dat Maan n Geet arent apart but dey r MAANEET...

Amazin part Piya di..
Luv ya so much...
U rock..!!
Muuaaahhh...
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow piya..

i love this ever strong geet...she's become even mre powerful nw that she has maan...i loved that dialogue..it was awesome👏

rasika...go 2 hell 😡😡

cnt wait 2 see wht happens 2 dev..he's going down👎🏼

loved d ending..maaneet walking 2 geva...wiv the eye lock 😃
Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
missed maneet moments dear
but ossum
the way geet said those words dear
waiting fr the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh so dev is the bas... and rasika get her answer with a interest slap love geet answer
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing part
geet slap rasika wow
loved it
pls cont

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