Garv-Kumud in Kutumb

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a Kutumb type fic
Garv-kumud r known 2 each other since childhood as their parents Vishu-Esha& Abhay-kusum r family friends.Then later they study in the same college.

The college is going 2 an end.Kumud sits in the classroom alone.Simran comes & tells Garv:garv..kumud was looking 4 u.she is waiting 4 u in the classroom
G:is it?ok,I'l go & see her
G goes 2 the classroom. K:hi garv..
G sits near her:why r u sitting alone?
K:simply,I was studying
Suddenly the door gets closed by sum1.Both G-K feel awkward.All the guys cum & make noise.they open the door.They:chee…we never expected this from both of u.both from nice families.but what were u doing inside this room alone?
G:nothing….
K:plz belive us
They never mind & go. G-K become angry & they look at each other with anger.
G:now I understand everything.u called me here 2 create such a scene.
K:what?why shud I call u?u came 2 my room purposefully 2 create this situation
G:no,I came here.bcoz u called me?
K:u liar!when did I call u?why shud I?
G:u r from a notorious fashionable girls' school where girls go after boys.so u thot of getting me thru such a cheap situation
K loses her control:stop it garv.i came from a famous school,not from a notorious school.like u guys think its not a college of carzy girls.may b sum girls r like that.biut not only in our school,everywhere sum r stupid.i'm not such girl as u think I never lose samskar.but I no that u r a flirt.always very sweet 2 girls.u r an indecent boy
K goes. G thinks:kumud,u trapped me.i'll take revenge

HOW WIL GARV TAKE REVENGE ?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice starting sounds interestin cont soon
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nice starting sounds interestin cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-2…..
Garv is angry at home.G thinks:I'l never allow kumud 2 b peaceful.i'll destroy her peace.but 4 that what shud I do?
G walks thinking about it.He clicks an idea:but it's a game with my life.no problem.i'l torture kumud & wil leave her

G-K r ashamed of the incident in the college.G meets K. K:why did u call me dammed?what nonsense u've 2 tell?
G:not nonsense.very imp matter.the thing that happened 2 us wil reach our parents' ears soon.hav u ever thot what wil happen next?
K gets confused. G:we'l b looked upon by others as not lovers.but sumthing bad
K:what nonsense! G:it's the reality.we can escape from that only thru 1 thing
K:then tell G:marriage
K:what?marrying u?never.so this was ur plan.u thot by creating such situation,u can marry me
G:stop it.i just told abt the marriage just 2 save our reputation.why shud I marry u when I'l get smart glamorous girls easily?u r so boring.very dim
K stares at him. G:2morrow is holi.during the party,if u r willing 2 marry me,u must put read colour powder on me
G goes.K gets confused:if my parents cum 2 no abt it…

K phones up her best friend Mandy:Mandy,I want 2 speak 2 u an urgent matter
M goes & meets K. M;why r u so dull kumud?
K:its bcoz of ur devar garv
M:garv?4 that what did he do?
K:he wants 2 marry me. M was surprised:what?wow!I never felt that that u both r lovers,I did'nt even feel that u both r friends.u did'nt hav frienship with boys.but garv had many gfs.
K:yes,garv is not my friend,just my dad's best friend's son as well as my college mate,not even my classmate.
M:then how did u both reach here?
K tells everything.M is shocked.

WIL KUMUD AGREE 2 MARRY GARV?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Ohhhh!
thats awesome!
I love this fanfic its diff from all your other fanfics where garv and kumu are already lovers!
Plz cont soon...i cant wait to see what happens!
I hope Kumud marries Garv and then they have cute fights and stuff but later fall in love something like that....i like this fanfic cont soon!
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Part-3…Holi celebration is going on.All r dancing with
colors.But Garv-kumud STAND still.G is watching others
dancing 2 the song Tauba…{kaal}
K who came late is looking at G.K takes red powder &
pours on G.G turns back.His seriousness goes into a
small smile.K turns back 2 go.G holds her hand.then he
takes red color powder & slowly puts it on her face.K
closes her eyes.Then opens.K's face r filled up with
tears.
K umud's parents & Garv's parents,G's elder brother
kshitij,younger brother Najul r shocked 2 see this.
K goes away from G.G is smiling.K is lost while
walking.Mandy feels sad & goes near her. K:I'm going 2
get marrid 2 the person I hate most
M holds her hand 2 comfort her.

Esha:whats this Garv?
G:sorry mom.we both r in luv
All r staring at him.G gets tensed.
E:kumud   ; is a nice girl who is known 2 us since
childhood.so no problem..as u wish
G smiles:thanx mom
Abhay:but we shud look their kundli
Vishu:yes,call punditji

Punditji says:they both wil make a gud cuple.both of
their horoscopes r excellent.they'l b the happiest cuple

All r happy. G smiles at K.K is angry.K also becomes
angry.G thinks:happiest cuple?foolish panditji.we'l b
the worst cuple
K thinks:whats this panditji telling?happy with
him.never!punditji is wrong

G goes 2 a house.A glamorous girl in short skirt opens
the door. She:hi Garv
G :hi kali G:kali,I need ur help on my wedding day
& after that also
K :sure,I'l b always there with u
They both hug.



Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 gr8 part i hpe kali dont mess thingz up nw
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
omg!
this fanfic is cool!
i cant wiat for the next part!
plz cont soon!
nice twist but plz dont make kumud fall in love with kshitij!!!!
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#9
Part-4…The wedding of Garv-kumud take place.All r
dancing. Esha:garv..kumud..cum..dance.cum
G:cum kumud we'll dance
K stares at him.G is also tuf. Finaly they al dance 2
mahive…{KHNH}

The nite cums.G goes out without ay1's
knowledge.Midnite.K looks out.a car arrives.G-kali get
out of it.K is stunned.G looks at K with a smile.G hugs
kali.K turns off her face.G cums inside.K lies on the
bed.
G:don't u want 2 no where I was in suhag raat?
K:suhag raat is not over.still its nite.so I'm not
interested.
G gets irritated:but u've 2 no.i was with kali.i spent
my suhag raat with my lady luv kali.she was my
schoolmate
K feels awkward. G:why r u feeling awkward?u cant
tolerate I being with another girl 4 a nite?
K:I feel awkward,not bcoz u r with kali.bcoz I don't
care 4 u.so why shud I?its realy disgusting that u spent
a nite with a girl b4 marriage.what king of a girl she
is.i pity u 4 having such a gf
G gets irritated:never mind.u don't hav 2 worry abt
me.i'l marry kali when I get rid of u
G lies on the bed. K:u r also lying down here?how can
we both on 1 bed?I don't trust a flirt like u
G: this is my bed.if u don't want 2 sleep here,get lost
K:never,why shud I go?there r 2 beds here.i'l sleep on
the other bed.the 2 beds hav 2 b separated.
G:what if others see it?
K gets confused:then,I'l seep on the edge of the bed
G:do u think I'l touch a ugly creature like u?if so,then
u r wrong.i'm from a gud family.i wont touch a girl whom
I don't luv.so I'm not going 2 touch u
K:u r from a gud family.but that does'nt mean u r gud
K lies down.K gets irritated seeing G.

Next day K goes 2 the kitchen.Esha & mandy r cooking.
K:aunty,I don't much of cooking.but I'l learn
E:no problem beta.u can slowly learn
K smiles.E goes. M:how was ur 1st nite?did he behave
badly?
K:no,he did'nt misbehave
M:I new that.bcoz however garv is,he won't cross his
limits
K:last nite garv was with his gf
M is shocked.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah its really cool!
and i like it because its not boring!
cont soon!

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