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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing ff i jus read all of it ryte now plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a funny part !!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey,
I just finished reading this fan fic and i must say that ur r awesome. This is going to be a really fun ff with so many characters. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bring A-k together. It sounded really funny when every guy said that kripa broke their heart by marryinh Angad. Angad must be soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo proud. It's heck a good. Good Luck and plzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon. Bye. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey,
I just finished reading this fan fic and i must say that ur r awesome. This is going to be a really fun ff with so many characters. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bring A-k together. It sounded really funny when every guy said that kripa broke their heart by marryinh Angad. Angad must be soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo proud. It's heck a good. Good Luck and plzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon. Bye. 👏
Divjot

its nice that husband knows that his wife is a bomb & if he doesnt improves his way he is going to b a looser😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
RECAP: entry of Shabir & Rishi. angad is getting more & more jelous

TODAY"S UPDATE:

Sujal explained the whole situation to Shabir & Rishi… about Adi's illness & their future plans…

Everything is going fine after a week Adi & Sujal r about to leave…
Everything is going fine after a week Adi & Sujal r about to leave…
A: so all set to go?
AD: v r what about u?
A: about me???
AD: Angad I think so u should talk to Kripa… directly
A: u know she doesn't trust me…
AD: trust is some thing u built up… u know y god has crested a gap between our fingers…
A: no…
S: so that some1 u trust & love will fill it on day…
Sujal comes from behind & holds Adi's hands from her waist…
A: got it… but I don't know how to do it?
AD: have u heard the proverb… love will find its way… follow it…
S: time will also help u… before v come back this matter should be solved…
A: I will try…
AD &S: u better…
Adi & Sujal leave 4 US…

AFTER A WEEK:
Kripa is in the office… rest of the people have reached home…
R: so Angad did u talk to Kripa?
A: about what?
Sh: before going Bhabi & Sujal told us everything…
J: & also v should help u with it…
A: ok… fine help me out…
J: Rishi u have something in mind???
R: yes I do… but v need a girls help….
AA: I am ready to help…
SH: Rishi out with it now…
R: ok today is Tuesday… on Thursday is Valentines day…
J: so what It comes every year…
R: I know it does… as I always spend Rs.10,000 on Roses that day only…
SH: what the plan Rishi…
R: well, Angad will propose Kripa on that day…
AA: how will I help in that…
SH: with shopping 4 Kripa…
J: Shopping??? Y is that..
R: duffer… will v don't know what Kripa likes… like her fav color… her fav dress… etc…
AA: so that bhai can gift it to her…
SH: how can v help in that?
J: to keep her busy
SH: after 2 days is valentine's day
J: so???
AA: it's lover's day…
R: I spend about 20,000 bucks each year this day only 4 flowers only….
A: I used to spend 40,000 but not this year…
SH: I never knew v had to train a flirt…
J: but I knew…
R: anyways… there will be a party that day just 4 u & Kripa… Aaliya just find out about Kripa's choices so that v can gift it to her on that day… but this will b a surprise party just 4 the 2 of them… v have not done anything… Angad had arranged the whole thing ok…
EVERY1: ok
SH: some1 has to keep Kripa busy the whole day…
J: that will b me…
R: I will do the decorations…
AA: I will do the shopping…
A: I will accompany u…
Kripa then comes in…
K: what's up guys?
J: nothing… just talking about valentine's day
K: so who is going out with whom?
R: I will be going with my 10 gf…
SH: I have asked Sheetal out…
J: I have to decide…
AA: even I have no partner…
A: go out with Josh…
K: u 2 will look cute together…
They all have dinner pulling each other's leg… then go off to sleep in their respective rooms…

Angad & Kripa r lying in their room… both of them r unable to sleep…
K(in her mind): will Angad even wish me… it would have been so special 4 both of us had Angad not done that thing… but I will surely like it even if he will just wish me… that will b gr8 4 me…
A(in his mind): god v have planned all this. I just hope Kripa likes it… she is angry with me… hope this will cool her a bit… may be if this plan works v will be close to each other… I just hope this plan works…

VALENTINE'S DAY:
Only Kripa & Josh r in the office. Josh has kept her busy so that she doesn't ash him questions regarding the other's whereabouts. According to Kripa every1 is in 1 or other meeting…
Rishi & Shabir r busy with the decorations… they have booked a restaurant 4 it… they r trying to give it the look of the most romantic place…
R: if I had worked this much 4 myself I would have doubled… no tripled my gf…
SH: I would have at least got married to a nice girl… but v cant help it…
R: yes v have to do it…
SH: or else Sujal Bhai & Adi bhabhi will throw us out of the house…

Angad & Aaliya r doing shopping 4 Kripa only… they have not left a single thing that she likes… her fav dress… matching earrings… jewelry… flowers… ring… perfume…
A: wow so much shopping? I have never done so much shopping in my entire life…
AA: that's because u have never fallen in love before…
A: that's also true…
AA: let me check if v have missed anything….
She goes through her list again…
A: everything fine…
AA: no… v have forgot chocolates…
A: I will get it…
AA: good going brother…

It's evening time according to the plan Josh tells Kripa to attend a business party at the restaurant where Rishi & Shabir were doing the decorations alone as she is taking care of that project…
She enters the restaurant wearing:


Angad is totally stunned by her beauty… he is looking at her 4 quiet some time when she comes near him & gets him to come to his senses…
K: Angad what r u doing here?
A: well Josh & Aaliya told me I have to attend this business party…
K: what party? No1 else is here except 4 us…
A: I was thinking the same thing…
K: let me call them up & ask what is the matter…
A: yes u should…
At this point a waiter comes & gives Kripa a card… she reads it & hands it to Angad…
K: this is our marriage gift from Rishi, Shabir & Josh…
A: nice gift…(in his mind) thank god they had kept a card there or else I didn't knew what to say to her… thoughtful guys…
K: sweet guys…(in her mind) I wish u had done this 4 me Angad…
Angad gives her a card…
A: this is 4 u…
K: thanks…
There is soft music being played in the background.
A: so may I?
He asks her hand 4 a dance…
K: y not?
The song is being played:
--FEMALE--
(you are my love you are my life
you are the one deep in my heart) – 2
--MALE--
tu hi mere tu hi mere ishq ki iteda hai
tu hi mere tu hi mere ishq ki inteha hai
saanson ki jhumbish kehti hai
kuch nahin tere siwa hai
tere bina meri subh nahin jalti
tere bina meri shaam nahin dhalti
tere bina meri jaan hai pighalti
soniye soniye soniye soniye
doobe doobe jism-o-jaan hai
pyaar ki baarishon mein
jee raha hoon jee rahaon
main teri khwaaishon mein
bhool ke main duniya saari
khoya tere nashe mein
tere bina meri subha nahin jalti
tere bina meri shaam nahin dhalti
tere bina meri jaan hai pighalti
soniye soniye soniye
--FEMALE--
kehka sha hai tera chehra
yaadon mein hi tera pehra
tera mera naata bara gehra
tere bina meri subha nahin jalti
tere bina meri shaam nahin dhalti
tere bina meri jaan hai pighalti
--MALE--
soniye soniye soniye
(you are my love you are my life
you will always be deep in my heart) – 2

both of them r lost in their own world… they cant take their eyes off each other… Angad thinks that this is the right movement 4 him to speak to Kripa
A: Kripa I wanted to tell u something…
K: yes go ahead…
A: ya (in his mind) I have proposed to a billion girls till now… then y cant I talk to Kripa? she is my wife… she will never say no to me…
K: Angad speak up…
A: I wanted to say…
Suddenly Kripa's cell started ringing… she picked it up…
K: hello… WHAT?... HOW DID THAT HAPPEN? IT WAS THE SAFEST PLACE… THEN HOW DID IT HAPPEN? HAS THE FIRE BEEN CONTROLLED? ANY INJURIES? I am coming. I will reach there in 2 hrs. u take care till then.
A: what happened?
K: our factory in Shimla has caught fire… I have to leave 4 there immediately.
A: v r leaving … I am coming with u…
K: thanks. I will call up Josh & tell him about this… (on her cell) Hello Josh, our Shimal factory has caught fire…
J: WHAT? Who told u?
K: our manager there had called up. Angad & I r going there to see the situation. I will contact u after reaching there.
J: ok take care both of u & keep me informed…
K: v will…
A: mind if I drive…
K: u don't know the way… I want to reach there fast so I think I should drive…
A: as u say…
Kripa starts driving… it's a long way but no1 is saying anything. Angad is stealing glances at Kripa but Kripa is taking no notice of it. She is busy in her thoughts about the factory.
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Posted: 19 years ago
I just read the whole fanfic and its awesome!!!!! 👏 👏 There are so many different charcters which makes it all the more interesting! I have a feeling that Josh will yell at the manger for calling Kripa and not him, since that disturbed A-K's "date"


Plz cont soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soaps_01

I just read the whole fanfic and its awesome!!!!! 👏 👏 There are so many different charcters which makes it all the more interesting! I have a feeling that Josh will yell at the manger for calling Kripa and not him, since that disturbed A-K's "date"


Plz cont soon 😛

there was nothing the manager could do 4 them.

he was not the part of plan

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Posted: 19 years ago
RECAP: sujal & adi have left. Rishi, AAliya, Josh, Angad & Shabir make a plan 4 Angad & kripa 4 Valentine's day. Kripa has to rush out becoz of fire in factory.

TODAY"S UPDATE:

They reach the place in 2hrs thanks to Kripa's fast driving. Kripa is horrified to see the factory burning like this. There is panic all over. People r running 4 help. She spots there manager Mr. Walia & goes runs him.
K: how did this happened Mr. Walia?
W: madam v have no clue. The fire brigade is taking care of it…
A: r there any casualties?
W: there has been no loss of life till now but some of the workers have been seriously injured…
K: they r in which hospital?
W: they have been admitted to government hospital.
K: no shift them to private nursing homes. The company will bear all the expenses. Let there be money loss I don't care but there should be no loss of life… a human life cant be counted by money….
W: ok madam. I will do the needful.
A: can v talk to some1 regarding the fire?
W: sir I have talked to the chief… he says that there r no more people inside but may be our consignment got destroyed…
K: the Lason project???
W: yes mam… may be the whole of it…
A: v better go to the hospital
K: even I think so…
They leave 4 the hospital. This time Angad is driving as Kripa is busy in her thoughts.
A: what r u thinking so deeply?
K: I think this fire was set up. The fire didn't catch on its own.
A: WHAT? HOW CAN U SAY THAT?
K: well v had done the necessary precautions. The Lason project was won by us beating Swyam. He cant take a defeat. I know him too well. If v r not able to complete this project on time v r doomed…
A: relax… v will think of some thing…
K: I hope so…

They reached the hospital before that only the workers had been shifted to the private hospital. Kripa & Angad personally met the doctors in charged & told them to keep no stone unturned to save the workers. They also met the families of workers to comfort them.

OUTSIDE HOSPITAL:
A: now where do v go?
K: well its too late to go back to Delhi. V will have to stay at the farm house.
A: u guys have a farmhouse here… gr8!
K: well it was a wedding gift 4 Adi & Sujal from me & Josh.
A: I think so it will be beautiful…
K: it is very beautiful. V guys come here on holidays or when v r upset. It is away from the world lets u have peace of mind…
A: come on lets go…
They reach the place in some time.
K: same as I had left it…
A: u have been here recently?
K: yes I had come here 4 a few hrs after I had come from Mumbai.
Angad understood what she said & didn't ask her any further questions.
K: Angad there r no servants here v have only 1 person here who takes care of the food supply here but he doesn't stay here. So u have to do ur own work… No HELP.
A: fine.
K: I will give u Sujal 's clothes. They will fit u…
A: what about u?
K: well I have kept some of my clothes here in my room.
A: good.

Angad has changed & is going towards the terrace 4 some fresh air when he hears Kripa crying. He is not able to resist the curiosity & goes towards her room.
A: Kripa what happened y r u crying?
K: no I am not crying its just that something went in my eyes…
A: come on don't lie to me… v r friends remember… & friend can share everything.
Hearing this Kripa quickly goes & hugs Angad & starts weeping badly. Angad tries to comfort her.
A: hey what happened? Relax now & tell me quietly what's bothering u?
K: I can still see the burning factory… the families to the workers in the hospital. It is all because of us. They were working 4 us & v couldn't even that care of them. I couldn't help them Angad. I am feeling very miserable Angad.
Angad is totally touched by this. He knows he has to bring her out of this feeling 4 her good as it is not her mistake.
A: relax Kripa. It was not ur mistake. V did everything v could to help them. Look at the good side of it… no1 was hurt badly. The doctors had called up sometime ago saying that all the patients r out of danger. So no need to worry.
K: u r telling the truth?
A: yes I am telling the truth. Trust me.
K: thanks a lot Angad.
A: no need of thanks. That was my duty as ur husband…
K: anyways. What were u saying to me at the restaurant.
A: Well… nothing (in his mind) I don't have the guts to tell u that now
Angad is at the window with his back towards Kripa as he does not want to face Kripa. Kripa suddenly remembers about the card. She goes & picks it up from the table. She is very happy to see it. It was a I LOVE U card. She kisses it.
K: did u get this card 4 me or from some1 else?
The card then suddenly comes to his mind when he sees Kripa holding it.
A: well I got it 4 u…
K: do u mean what's written in it?
A: yes. I really love u Kripa & I am really sorry 4 what I did? I was not able to realize my feeling when u were there with me. But when u went away I realized what I lost. I LOVE U KRIPA… I really do…
K: I LOVE U 2.
Angad was really happy to hear this. He quickly went & hugged her. Before Angad could say anything, Kripa cupped his face in her hands and gave him a big kiss. When they broke apart, they both kept looking into each other's eyes. Angad picked Kripa up in his arms, still looking into her eyes, and carried her to the bed. He put her down and threw himself over top and kissing Kripa passionately at her back slowly ...THEN the screen goes out of focus
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part.. 👏 Thanks
Bye
Divjot
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww omg yay they are back together plzzzzzzzz continue sooon!!!

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