MN FF *Intezaar*#2* Last part..update on pg101 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PLZZZ UPDATE SIS...
WAITING EAGERLY...😳
LOVE U LODSSS...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ff loved it to the coreee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liking changed mayur relationship
loved this part
congo to ur new thread maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting for ur update Maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i m sorry for delay ..will continue very soon...:)
and Thank u so much for ur wishes...love y all*hugs*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
keep reading the story.🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

important..Thank u so much new readers who r liking the story..plz add me in ur PM list so it would be easy for me to PM u😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Intezaar

"Nupur ye baat Mayank ko na pata chale?"Shilpa was looking scared and Nupur

was confused.

"Per kyun maa who toh….."Her words got struck in her mouth as she turned a bit and saw Mayank standing at the kitchen door.he was looking very hurt or for a moment she felt as someone had snatched his life, Shilpa too turned back when she saw shocking expressions on Nupur's face.

"Mayank"Shilpa's eyes got widened to see him standing there who was looking at them with blank eyes..

"Mayank wohh…"Shilpa tried to say something but her words fade away in her mouth when Mayank rushed towards the outdoor without listening anything.

"wo hi hua jis ka dar tha"Shilpa said with shaking voice and tears slipping down from her eyes..

While Nupur was still in hell shocked to see him in that condition, the same hurt, hollow eyes, pain which she always had seen in his eyes today she saw again. She was still terrified to see him like that; his pain was hurting her too. Wiping off her tears with her palm she turned towards Shilpa.

"Maa ..ap.. pareshan met hoon"she just could say these words hardly to console her but the pain she was feeling for him was making her weak too as after many days she saw him smiling with her whole heartedly, she was seeing new hopes in his eyes which gave her content that may be now everything would get fine in their relation but that news came like earthquake that had shaken everything again.

She held her by shoulder and took her towards hall and made her sit on sofa and sat beside him.

"Maa ap aur Mayank piya ke parents ko le ker itne tense kyun hain?"Finally Nupur got courage and asked her.

Shilpa quickly turned her face towards Nupur who had so many questions in her eyes she turned her eyes away as she had no courage to tell her truth..

"Piya Mayank ki dost thi…"she told her with breaking voice and Nupur placed her hand on her..

"Maa meain janti hoon..per piya ko le ker kya baat hai jo main nahi janti"Nupur tried to look into her eyes to get the answer of her question which were bothering her every moment ..

"Nupur wohh Mayank se…….."She stopped in mid way and Nupur gasped some air to remembered the words of Mayank's diary,,

"piya loves me"

How could she forget those words,Mayank's reaction when he caught her reading his diary. She had read Piya loved but what about Mayank??had he feeling for her too? There was something between them or not? Same questions started revolving around in her mind.

"Nupur!!!"Shilpa's voice brought her back into her senses and she quickly turned her face towards her.

"ji Maa"

Shilpa took her hand in her hands and looked at her face she could see lots of questions on her face but she was scaring of that time when Nupur get to know truth..

"Nupur wada karo tum Mayank ka saath kabhi nahi choro gi"she asked for promise tightly holding her hands in shaking yet low voice while Nupur was shocked at the way Shilpa was reacting after that news,she gulped down her lump .

"Main hamesha Mayank ke saath rahoon gi" Nupur just could say those words in reply to console her and she saw content on Shilpa's face after listening her words and then without saying or telling her anything she went towards her room left Nupur confused, shocked..

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The whole day had been passed but Mayank had not yet came back home.Nupur was hell scared and upset now she had tried his cell phone many times but every time she listen same replied

"The number you have dialed is powered off"

She had called his office too but his secretary told her he did not come office. She even had called Samrat as he was the only friend of Mayank but Samrat too did not know where was he?

On the other hand Shilpa did not come out of her room not even for lunch so Nupur had given her lunch in her room..

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"Mayank kahan hain ap?" tears dwelled up in her eyes, her heart was sinking as how many weird thoughts coming into her mind., half lying on bed She rested her head at the back of bed and closed her eyes placing her one hand on her tummy to feel the new life inside her which was giving her strength.

It was almost mid night when Mayank stepped inside the home, where was he entire day no one knew. He took step towards their room, he knew Nupur must be very upset due to his sudden disappearance but he wanted to be alone for sometime, he had no courage to face ant question, he had been broken again.

He slightly pushed the door without making any noise and entered in, the lights were off it meant Nupur was sleeping. He sighed as he had no courage to face her.

He removed his coat and placed it on table, grabbing out his night suit he went up to washroom to change them. he splashed cold water on his face to get fresh, after sometime he came out of washroom lights were still off, so feeling content he opened the door of terrace and was about to took step when he felt the same soft touch on his wrist it could not even take him a second to recognized she was Nupur.he quickly turned his face back and to saw her standing behind closed to him. Before he could say anything..

She hugged him tightly wrapping her arms possessively around him; she dipped her head into his chest "Mayank kahan the ap?"she could only say those words in between her sobs while Mayank was surprised at her action.

Without saying anything, his hands reached all the way around her waist wrapping her for hug and he dipped his face in her neck closing his eyes, she opened her eyes and realized how tightly he was holding her in his arms,a shiver ran down in her spine as he pulled her closer to his body "I am sorry Nupur" His mouth was a mere millimeter from her ear as his words came out as a soft whisper,she closed her eyes again inhaling his scent in her body, feeling grip of his skin on her skin, being enveloping in his arms she felt as she got everything. His arms tightened around her, his warmth radiating towards her. Her heart began pounding; his breath lightly hit her face as he pulled his face a bit back and looked down at her face Nupur raised her head in order to look into his eyes.

He moved his hand towards her face still holding her in his arms, he slightly touched her face with his palm and her heart skipped to feel his touch "I am sorry Nupur..i am very bad person "he slightly brushed his finger on her cheeks to removed the lines of tears and Nupur felt as something pricked in her heart to heard his broken voice.

she pressed her palm on his hand and he stared at her "ap sab se ache hain Mayank"she could not listen his words that he was bad person for her he was the most precious person in her life whom she loved and tears dwelled up in his eyes to see immense love for him in her eyes.. "Nupur kyun mujh se itna pyaar kert ho?main tumhare pyaar ke qabil nahi hoon"he said in low yet a bit shaking voice..

"pyaar kerna kisi ke bas main thori hota hai.ye toh bus ho jata hai"she stared back into his eyes and Mayank's heart skipped to listen her loved filled voice he knew she loved him deeply, unconditionally and he wanted to loved her back with that depth but he was scared to take step towards her.

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here is next part..i hope u ll liked it😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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SIS...🤗

Awesome Update SIS...
loved it lodsss...
First part was really sad...
bt i m lil tensed abt whts behind all d worry...
as i can understand Piya committed suicide for Mayank as he said no one give away der lives for any1...bt den whts more behind it...
sigh!!! was again feeling bad for Mayank...n Nupur.
jab sab thik hone hi wala tha tab hi sab galat ho gaya...
bt still i loved d last part...
d way Mayank hugged Nupur back was superb...
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written...
waiting for d next part...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo beautiful update..

bt y mayank n his mom got so affected by priya's parents's arrival?
hope everything will be f9...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago

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