MN FF *Intezaar*#2* Last part..update on pg101 - Page 21

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--Ruchi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Maria...
sorry for late comment

SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
very beautiful upfate

feel bad for mayank ... he had hold too much pain in his heart so long.

its very nice to see nupur made him overcome all his fears.

he really not a killer of piya ... it happened only for misunderstand.

hope piya's parents ll understand too.

continue soon

thanks ofr the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update😃
so romantic😳
loved it
continue soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
great ff, do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...finally the truth is out...it was beautifull to watch nupur support her husband in such a wonderful and understanding manner...i hope future just holds happiness for both of them as they have been through a lot...plz update soon and do pm me and add me to ur buddy list..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
keep reading the story.🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Intezaar

Nupur's cheek was stuck to his chest and her leg was twisted at an uncomfortable angle, but she didn't care. As she lay in his arms, her heart was filled with gratitude toward this man who was her husband, her love., she did not know Mayank was awake and watching his wife through the corner of his eyes blushing her wife hard and he felt urge to leaned more on her and he wanted to parted her lips and plunge inside her warm mouth, he wanted more.

He wanted to caught her hard in his arms to show his love to her again and again, that love which he was fearing to show her but now there was no fear, hesitant left in his heart she had been mad her way towards deep inside his heart removing all the barriers of fear, but he controlled his desires as he did not want to break that beautiful moment, feeling her soft body in his arms giving him heavenly blissful feelings, he smiled biting his lips.

Her heart pounded to remind the night event, they had been made love last night but this time it was not the connection of just bodies but the connection of two hearts.

She smiled shyly and lifted her head to glance at him and Mayank immediately closed his eyes feeling her movement.

"He is sleeping"

She muttered under her breath smiling shyly, she couldn't take her eyes off him. He was looking so content and the slight smile on his lips making him cuter like innocent child, for a moment her heart fluttered to think what if he would awake and seeing her.But then she reathed of relief to see his close eyes.

She slipped into white sheet and collected her clothes carefully without disturbing his sleep, she tried to moved herself away when he slipped his arm beneath her waist and pulled her towards him she again rolled on his chest, she rolled her eyes in surprise lifting her head at his unexpected way.

"It's not fair to leave your husband alone on bed"

Mayank opened his eyes and grinned to see shocking expressions on her face, "ap jag rahe the the"she flipped her eyes surprisingly trying hard to control her unstable heart beat and Mayank could not help but smile biting his lips. He curled his palm over Nupur's naked shoulder and drew her toward him and Nupur shuddered to realize their proximity, their bodies were intimately cling to each other and their faces were dangerously closed to each other, she curled her fingers shyly around his waist lowering her eyes "if I would not awake how would I knew my wife looks so beautiful when she blush"he said hoarsely and her heart pounded fast to realized Mayank was awake it meant he had seen her starring at him.

"acha to hap jag rahe the,hamain laga ap sau rahe hain" she almost said in whispering tone trying hard to hid her blush but he had been seen that..

He smiled and rolled of her and she stared in his eyes tried to repress a shiver of excitement. Her heart pumping so fast that he could hear the rhythm of her beat, red colour had been crept over her face making his angel more beautiful as she closed her eyes in anticipation his lips curled into smile,he leaned down his face more and she shivered as his breath crossed against her face, he traced his fingers gently on her cheeks and she clutched the sheet in her hand, He cocked his head and whisper

"Nupur look at me"

She flicker her eyes and stared back into his eyes, her heart fluttered to see strange emotions in his eyes,he cupped her face delicately in his hands still starring into her eyes and she looked at him with questioning eyes, "I know I have hurt you a lot,I tried my best to stop myself for accepting our relationship because I was coward who was scared to tell you truth, I could have not bear your rejection But Nupur you has made your way in my heart broking all the walls which were surrounding my heart wanted to stop you to enter in,You are angle.My Angel"

He leaned down and kissed her forehead and she blissfully closed her eyes capturing the moment in her heart for forever, a lone tear slipped down her cheek as he called her HIS Angel.

He lifted his head and slightly removed her tears from her cheek rubbing her skin gently,

She opened her eyes slowly only to find him starring at her,

"I promise you Nupur I will never allow tears to come into your eyes, I will fill your life with colours, I will give you all the happiness,All the happiness"

His voice was filled with so much emotions that her heart fluttered to feel something in his eyes,May be Love which she has wished to see in his eyes. With this promise he slipped his arms beneath her waist holding her tightly in hug and she crawled her arms around his neck pulling him closed to her, He dipped his head, and the next thing he knew, he was nuzzling the side of

her neck, finding a soft spot just below her ear. He wanted draw her into his

arms for forever.

She was his comfort, is peace, the bliss, the comfort, Love he always wanted finally he found in Nupur,she ,too closed her eyes penetrating his each word in her heart..

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here is next part...i hope you will like it..😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
-Anila- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mari SIS...🤗
Abhi apki tabiyat kesi hain?
u know main abhi itniii Frustrated feel kar rahi thi...sigh!!
Thank u for updating...😳
love u lodsss🤗

Awesome update SIS.
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written as usual...
loved it to d coreee
waiting for d next part..
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
oye ur fine jo tum update ker rahi hoo..
shud be taking rest yaar

edited


lovly part so loved filled...
i am waiting whn mayank will face the girls parents
Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

@Anila,Fiza🤗🤗

i am quite f9 yaar. now..🤗🤗n this part half written already i just completed it and posted..
Anila🤗sweety i will update Love and Hate very soon🤗

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