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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Nice update😊


Finally Naina kisi tarah se party mein jaane ko taiyar to ho gayi waise uske liye hi accha hai jis tarah se wo Ritu ko dekhkar react kar rahi thi aur us reaction na dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi ye sab starting mein hi ho gaya warna baad mein Raj ko pareshan karti aur sabse jaldi ghulmil gayi especially Yash se😊😉😊

Ritu and Yash ka pair kaafi suit hota hai in dono par aur ye pair bohot understanding bhi hai Ritu ne Raj ki shakal dekhte hi samajh liya tha ki baat hai kya aakhir aur ab Yash bhi sirf Ritu ki hi baaton se samajh gaya ki usne ye last minute party kyon rakhi😊😊😊

Yash aur Naina ka connection dekh ke to bilkul Aalekh ki yaad aa gayi kitni aasaani se Yash ne usse kaha ki sabkuch batao aur wo bhi kehti chali gayi bina kisi darr ke aur usne bilkul ek bhai ki tarah use support bhi kiya aur Naina ke bina jaane ye bhi jaan gaya ki Raj aur Naina ek dusre se pyaar karne lage hain saath rehte rehte 😃👏😊

Ye lo ab isme bhi Raj ko kuch ho gaya hai kya i mean brain tumer ho gaya har jagah aajkal humare sir ji ko kuch na kich ho ja raha hai har jagah chalo koi baat nahi dusre test ke liye jaldi Raj ko convince karo aur report normal dikhao😆😭 warna Naina to PIYA ko lekar chali jaayegi aur Raj bechara phir akela ho jaayega😭

continue sson😊😊


Thanks for commenting Shreya...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

superrrbbb part...👏after all maine post kiya hai...bhale hi tune kitni bhi achhi tarah se kyoun na likha ho...par post toh maine kiya hai na...toh sara credit main le jaati hoon...!!! aise haiarn...pareshan si kyoun dekh rahi hai...mood achha hai aur achhe mood me sherni aise hi apne dosto ka shikar karrti hai...ha ha ha...😆

okay...ab point par aate hain...

Raj akhir Raj hai...ussne Naina ko mana hi liya...party me aane ke liye...par wo abhi bhi sure nahi hai...pata nahi kyoun...mujhe lagta hai ke naina ki past life me defo koi bada locha hai...!!! khair yeh toh tu hi clear karr sakti hai na...😃

hum aage badhte hain...😉

Ritu ke naam se hi mujhe darr lagta hai ke kahin raj pe gandi nazar na daale...par thank god...tune uss ki life pahle se hi set karr rakhi hai...Yash ke sath...!!! vaise mujhe bhi bahhhttt khushi ho rahi hai iss couple ko dekh kar...i mean padh kar...😃

lo jee...Naina ne ghar se party me aane tak raj ko thik se dekha nahi tha kya...jab raj flirt karrne laga...tab ja kar ussne notice kiya ke...raj kitna handsome dikh raha hai...ha ha ha...😆

toh Ritu convince karrne ki koshish karrti rahi...aur Raj nahi mana...!!! Vaise bhi Raj her baat itni ashani se kaha manta hai...😛

khair...Naina ne yash se sab kuch share karr liya...jab ki wo uss se pahli baar mil rahi hai...??? vaise dekha jaaye...toh kuch logo par achanak se bharosha ho hi jata hai...!!! jaise mujhe tujh par bharosha hai k raj ko tu kuch nahi hone degi...aur tujhe bharosha hai ke agar tune raj ko kuch kiya toh MAIN TERA SARR PHOD DUNGI...hai na...😆

so finally Ritu ne dimag chalaya aur Naina ke samne raj ki sari batain bata di...achha kiya...!!! ab Naina bhi use dhamka rahi hai...bichara raj...her koi use dhamka raha hai...😛

ab jaldi se cont karr...mujhe pata hai next part me kuch bahttt hi achha sa honewala hai...😃


Tujhe to special replies dene hai... isliye fursat me dungi... And thanks for commenting...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

first of all... a big thank you to u Pri...for posting the part,ofcourse..!


and Debs...that was a wonderful part !!

this ritu is wayyy better !! n mauli fits in the role pretty well !

So Raj was flirting with other gals and Naina was feeling jealous..hmm...😉

The bonding forming between Naina and Ritu's husband...was shown beautifully...she does needs someone to open up to... i mean Raj is there , but...still...

N really liked the way Naina had begun to show her right on him, by saying that he'll come to do the tests...ahh...Raj ki bimari ke baaremein main kuch nahi kahungi...
You know u have to make everything alright...n that too soon, isn't it Debs??😈 otherwise...YOU KNOW ME WELL !!! 😈




Ahh...Mana...

I know you too well... so I will continue now...

And this means replies will come later...

But thanks for commenting...
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Thanks to all my readers...


And a big thanks to Priya for posting the last part...!!!!



Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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EPISODE – 6:

Badi mushkil se apne aansuon ko rokti hui Naina garden se nikal gayi… Raj aur Ritu uske piche khade hi reh gaye… Raj ka shocked sa chehra usay baar baar yaad aa raha tha… wo jaanti thi ki Raj ne usse ye blackmailing expect nahi ki thi… par agar Raj se scanning karwane ka ek yahi tarika tha to wo ye tarika aazmane ke liye bhi taiyar thi.


"Kaise kiya aapne ye Raj… kaise chhipa paaye aap itni badi baat mujhse…? Kya aapki zindagi me wakai meri itni hi ehemiyat hai ki aapne mujhse ye sach share karna bhi jaruri nahi samjha?" Apne aap se ladhti hui Naina bina dekhe party hall ki taraf badh rahi thi.


Thodi der pehle bhi agar koi usse puchta ki wo bhid me rahegi ya akele me to wo bhid se dur jana hi pasand karti… Lekin abhi wo ekdam se uss bhid me jaana chahti thi jahan wo sabke bich me kho jaye… jahan usay koi na pehchane… sab ke bich hote hue bhi jhan wo akeli ho…


Naina ka mann kar raha tha ki wo zor zor se roye… kuch tod fod kare… par wo kuch bhi nahi kar pa rahi thi… na hi apne aansuon ko behne se rok paa rahi thi… Zabardasti usne apna chehra saaf kiya aur fir chalne lagi. Usay dhyan hi nahi raha ki wo kahan chal rahi hai… achanak wo kisi se takrai aur ekdam se khud ko sambhalna pada usay.


Apne aap ko balance karke usne sar utha kar dekha… Saamne Inspector Arjun Singh khada tha… Naina ki halat to aisi thi ki kato bhi to khun nahi.


"Aa…aap?"


"Oh hello Mrs. Mathur… dekhiye…hum fir mil gaye…" Arjun ne hath milate hue kaha.


"Aap yahan?" Naina ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kahe… kahan jaye… usay iss situation me darr bhi lag raha tha aur kismet ke fer pe hasi bhi aa rahi thi.


Tabhi usne piche se kisi ki awaaz suni. "Mrs. Mathur????" Uss insaan ki awaaz me confusion saaf jhalak raha tha. Bina piche dekhe hi Naina samajh gayi thi ki kaun aya tha uske piche. Ghabrahat ke mare uske maathe pe pasina chalak aya tha. Usne nazren uthakar Arjun Singh ko dekha jo uske piche khade aadmi ko rwspect ke sath dekh raha tha.


"Hello Sir…" Arjun Singh ne salam thokte hue kaha.


"At ease Inspector… aap meri party me hain… head quarters pe nahi…" Kehte hue Yash aakar Naina ke paas khada hua.


Naina ne sawalia nazron se usay dekha…mano wo puch rahi ho ki ye chakkar kya hai. Yash ne uske kandhe pe hath rakha aur Arjun Singh ki taraf turn kiya. "To aap dono ek dusre ko jaante hain… that's good… Naina…inse milo… ye Inspector Arjun Singh hain… Mumbai Narcotics department k ek trained officer… aur Arjun… ye Naina hai…meri wife ke dost ki…."


"Wife… jaanta hun sir. mila tha inn dono se mai.,.. bade hi cute couple hai…par humesha ladhte rehte hain…" Arjun ne haste hue kaha.


"Naina…ek baar meri baat to suno…" Piche se bhagkar aate hue Raj ne yash ko kuch bhi kehne ka mauka nahi diya. Lekin apne samne Arjun Singh ko dekhkar wo bhi thitak kar ruk gaya. "Aap……….???"


"Oh Hello Mr. Mathur… kya baat hai…aajbhi aap dono me koi ladhai hui hai kya? Lagta hai mai humesha hi galat time pe aata hun… jab bhi aap dono jhagda kar rahe hote hain mai tabhi pahunch jata hun…"


"Sach me badi galat timing hai teri K*****…" raj ne badbadate hue kaha.


"Ji…kuch kaha aapne…?" Arjun ne innocent bante hue pucha.


Yash jisne ki Raj ka comment sunn lia tha aur samajh raha tha ki Arjun bhi inn dono ki tang khinch raha hai, wo badi mushkil se apni hasi control kiye hue tha.


"Nahi nahi…mai bhala kya keh sakta hun…" raj ne baat sambhalte hue kaha.


"Pata hai agar mujhe ye na maalum hota ki aap dono ki ye 3-4 saal ki bachhi hai to mujhe to lagta ki aap dono ki nayi nayi shadi hui hai… waise kitne din hue hain aapki shaadi ko?" usne Raj ki taraf dekha aur fir Naina ki taraf.


Naina: 4 saal


Raj: 5 saal


Kehkar hi dono ek dusre ko dekhne lage. Yash ne apna muh dusri taraf fer lia… usay bade zor se hasi aa rahi thi.


Arjun: Ji… mai to confuse hi ho gaya… 4 saal ya 5 saal???


Raj: Ji wo actually ye baat hai ki 4 saal pure ho chuke hain aur 5th anniversary aane hi wali hai… to mai 5 saal kehta hun aur Naina 4 saal.


Arjun: Oh… I see…


Piche se aati hui Ritu ne ye pura nazara dekh lia tha… agar situation itni tense na hoti toh wo jarur hass padti aur Arjun ki help karti Raj aur Naina ki tang khinchne me… par abhi to jaruri ye tha ki inn dono jhagadte hue bewakufon ko samjhaya jaye… ya more importantly Raj naam ke gadhe ko samjhaya jaye… aur wo jaanti thi ki ye kaam Naina ke alawa aur koi nahi kar sakta tha…


Naina ka gussa aur frustration hadh paar kar chukka tha… wo samajh rahi thi ki Arjun Singh unn dono ki tang khinch raha hai… par abhi na uske paas darne ka patience tha aur na hi Arjun Singh ko jhelne ka.


Raj ki bakwas si explanation sunne ke baad wo Arjun Singh ki taraf palti. "And I suppose ki aaj ke liye aapki ENQUIRY puri ho chuki hai Inspector. To agar aapke sawal jawab khatam ho gaye hon to hum party me jaayen??"


Gusse se laal Naina ko chehre ko dekhkar jahan Arjun hairan reh gaya wahin Raj thoda sa darr gaya. Kya pata Arjun Singh kuch kar na baithe.


Arjun: Haan haan jaiye… maine thodi na aapko roka hai.


Naina: Thank you so much for your permission. Waise bhi jitney sawal jawab aap karte hain lag to ye raha hai ki sans lene ke liye bhi aapki permission leni padegi… aur aap party ki baat kar rahe hain…!!!


Naina mudi aur chali gayi. Yash bhi Naina ke piche jaane laga par jaane se pehle usne Arjun Singh ko ek strict look dia… maano keh raha ho ki aaj ke liye itna hi kaafi hai.


Arjun (Raj se): Lagta hai aap ki wife kuch jyada hi naraaz hain… aisa chalta raha to aapka New Year toh jhagadte hue jayega.


Raj: I am sorry…wo pata nahi kyun aaj apnea ape me nahi hai.


Ritu khud ko bhadakne se rok nahi paayi. "Indeed Raj… tumhe pata nahi ki Naina kyun naraaz hai?? Tumhe to aajkal kuch bhi pata nahi hota."


Gusse se pair patakti Ritu wahan se chali gayi.


Raj: Uuuf… ye ladkiyan…!!


Arjun(Haste hue): Meri salah maaniye Mr. Mathur aur apni biwi ko dance ke liye pataiye… warna kahin aisa na ho ki aaj ki raat aapko bedroom ke bajaye sofe pe kaatni pade. After all rehna to aapko unke sath hi hai."


Raj ko wahin khada chodkar Arjun party hall ki taraf badh gaya. Raj ko thoda waqt akele chahiye tha… sochne aur samajhne ke liye. AUr ye baat Arjun jaise sharp aadmi ne bakhubi se notice kiya tha ki Raj jitni jaldi khud ko samjha payega utna hi iss rishte ke liye achha hoga.

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PIYA itni uthal puthal me jag chuki thi. Usne khud ko apni Mummy ke kandhon pe paya… Par na jaane kyun usay aisa laga jaise uski maa ka dhayan kahin aur tha.


Naina ko tab hosh aaya jab usne PIYA ko apni godh me machalte hue mehsus kiya. Usne turn karke dekha… PIYA jag rahi thi aur usay dekhkar muskura rahi thi. Naina ki ankhon me fir se aansun aa gaye… par usne khud ko sambhala aur PIYA ke sath khelne lagi.


"Hey PIYA… utha gayi baby…? Disturb kiya na maine??"


"No…. aap ro kyun rahe ho??"


"Kahan beta… mai to nahi ro rahi…" Naina ne apne aansun pochte hue kaha.


"Jhuth… aap ro rahe ho… papa ne fir se kuch kaha… very bad…"


Naina khud se badbadane lagi. "Yahi to problem hai PIYA ki tumhare papa ne kuch nahi kaha… kuch kaha hota to aisi naubat hi nahi aati."


Piche se aate hue Yash ne Naina ko badbadate hue sunn liya. Kuch sochte hue wo muda aur hall me kisi ko dhundne laga. Thodi hi duri par usay Ritu aur Arjun ek dusre se baat karte hue dikhe. Wo unki taraf badh chala.


Yash: Mujhe aap dono ki madad chahiye.


Ritu: Kya hua?


Yash: Kya chahti ho tum? Ki New Years Eve pe Raj aur Naina ek dusre se muh faila kar baithe rahe?? Tum jao aur jakar Raj ko dance ke liye manao. Arjun… if you don't mind tum thodi der ke liye PIYA ko sambhal sakte ho?


Arjun: Sure Sir, aap Mrs. Mathur ko sambhaliye. Unke bachhe ko mai dekhta hun.


Kehta hua Arjun wahan se chala gaya.


Ritu ki ankhen hairani se faili hui thi… "Mrs. Mathur………….. kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Naina: Nahi Yash… mujhe dance nahi karna… aur waise bhi PIYA ko kaun sambhalega?


ARjun: Uski fikar aap na kijiye Mrs. Mathur. Laiye aapki pyari si beti ko mai dekhta hun… aap ye sham enjoy kijiye.


Naina ke kuch bol pane se pehle hi PIYA uski godh se Arjun ki taraf jhuk rahi thi. Muskurate hue Arjun ne PIYA ko apni godh me liya aur jakar ek kone me khada ho gaya jahan se pura hall dikht tha. Ab dance ke liye maanne ke alawa Naina ke paas koi chara nahi tha.


Yash: May I… have the pleasure?


Na chahte hue bhi Naina ke chehre pe ek halki si muskaan aa gai. Usne Yash ka hath thama aur dance floor ki taraf badh chali.


Raj thodi dur khada ye scene dekh raha tha. Na jaane kyun par Naina ka Yash ke sath milna julna usay achha nahi lag raha tha. Usay dhyan hi nahi raha ki uske piche khadi Ritu uske expressions ko bade gaur se dekh rahi thi aur hasi dabane ki koshish kar rahi thi.


Ritu: Raj… chalo mere sath.


Raj: kahan na Ritu mujhe scan nahi karwana.


Ritu: How do you expect ki iss party me mai tumhara scan karwaun??


Raj: (Chidte hue): To fir kahan jaun?


Ritu: (Raj ko dance floor ki taraf khinchte hue): Dance karne.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein

Yash stepped forward on his left foot while Naina following his steps stepped back on right.


Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga (2)

Yash closed the left foot on right foot while Naina executed just the opposite matching his steps with ease.

Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)

Salsa was a dance of passion where the dancers had to feel and experience the music. And Yash had always always topped his feel for rhythm with his love for his beautiful wife. But now, as he paid attention to the music he kept on looking at the other couple thinking of the beat when he would effect the change in partners.

Steppin slow oh his left foot he raised his left arm for his partner to turn. After executing the perfect turn he left her hand for a change in partners and Naina collided with Raj. She froze in her moves.



Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai (2)

He looked at her once, then grabbed her waist and pulled her closer. Naina averted her eyes for the fear of him realizing how hurt she had been with his actions.


Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

Har ghadi har ghadi teri yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Raj looked at her darkly. All thoughts of making up with her had left his brain when he saw that she was enjoying the dance with Yash so much.

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka (2)

Naina cursed herself. She shouldn't have listened to Yash. He twirled her around twice before pasting her back on his chest. His contact was having a strange effect on her.

Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai (2)
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai

Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Naina ki ankhon me baar baar Raj ki tuti hui shakal ghum rahi thi. Aur uske kano me Ritu ki awaaz gunj rahi thi.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)

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Arjun: hey Beautiful….!!!

PIYA: Ma….ma…..

Khilkhilati hui PIYA ne Arjun ke balon ko apni muthhi me pakad kar khincha.

Arjun: Ouch… meri girl friend to badi badmash hoti ja rahi hai…. Kaisi hai tu?

PIYA: Aap kahan the itne dino tak?

Arjun: Sorry sweetheart…mai busy tha… kaisi hai meri girl friend…?

Jawab me PIYA khilkhilai aur Arjun ke gaal pe ek kiss kiya. Muskurate hue Arjun ne bachhi ko apne gale se laga liya.

Arjun: I have missed you so much Snigdha….!!!

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Ritu aur Yash ne uss raat RN ko jaane nahi diya tha. PIYA ko apni godh me lekar jaane se pehle Ritu Naina ke paas aayi thi.

"Mai jaanti hun kit um Raj se naraaz ho…. Par Naina… usay jitna iss waqt dantne ki zarurat hai utna hi zaruri ye hai ki koi usay samjhe…. Uske paas rahe…. Tum samajh rahi ho na ki mai kya keh rahi hun?"

"Haan Ritu…mai samjh rahi hun. Tum fikar mat karo."

Ritu ke jaane ke baad Naina ne dhire se Raj ke room ka darwaza khola. Wo window ke saamne khada tha… usne change bhi nahi kiya tha… chup chap khada bahar dekh raha tha.

Naina dhire se aakar uske paas khadi hui. Kaafi der tak dono chup rahe. Raj ne Naina ko shayad dekha nahi tha… shayad dekhkar bhi andekha kar raha tha.

"Kya soch rahe ho Raj?"

"Tum jana chahti ho na…. chali jao Naina…. Chali jao meri zindagi se dur. Mujhe koi shikayat nahi hogi. Jab kisi ne mera sath nahi diya to tumse kyun kuch expect karun mai…"

Naina ne usay gaur se dekha… Raj ne apni ankhen kas ke band kar rakhi thi… dard se uska chehra bhig gaya tha. Naina se uski aisi halat dekhi nahi ja rahi thi. Aage badhkar Naina ne kas ke Raj ko hug kiya.

"Ek baar… bas ek baar meri baat maan ke dekho Raj. Mai tumhe dhoka nahi dungi. I promise."

Raj ne koi jawab nahi diya… bas Naina ko apne se dur kiya aur room se nikal gaya.

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Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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" Nainaaa!! tum yeh mujhe...", Raj screamed while being pulled towards the hospital entrance, " KAHA LEKAR JA RAHI HO TUM MUJHE !!???"

She gave him a look...

" Dikhayi nahi deta ya tumhari moti buddhi ko yeh samajh nahi aata?"

" Excuse me??", Raj asked bewildered.

" Tum chahte ho na main chali jaun?", she asked him trying to be unemotional, " Chali jaungi main…lekin tumhare MRI ke baad."

" Tum mujhe force nahi karsakti."

" Bilkul karsakti hu."

He yanked her closer…

" Kis haqq se haan? Kis haqq se?", he said quite harshly.

She too stared back and said in firm voice…

" Haqq…! Haqq toh hai…mujhe haqq hai. Dosti ka haqq…hamdard hone ka haqq ….", she held his hand gently, " Aur tum yeh test karwaoge…Apne marzi se na sahi, Apni Zimmedari ke khatir…"

" Zimmedari??"

" Hmm…", She smiled, " Main aur Piya….Hum tumhari zimmedari hai…Tumhari life mein jo kuch hota hai, uska seedha asar hum dono par bhi padega, yaad rakhna! Agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh…. Piya.."

He smirked sadly…

" Agar mujhe kuch ho bhi gaya, toh tum Piya ka bahot achchese khayal rakhogi, main jaanta hun."

" Aur mera khayal Raj?", Naina asked at once.

Raj ko uski awaz bhari lag rahi thi.

" Mera khayal kaun rakhega Raj? Main toh akeli ji rahi thi na…fir tum aaye…aur…", Naina ne apne aansu chupane keliye apna muh fer liya….

Raj ne halke se apna haath Naina ke kandhe par rakha…Aur usse apni aur moda…

" Raj…", Naina said with great difficulty.

" Shshh…", He put his finger on her lips, " Chalein….appointment ka time hogaya hai."

She nodded…

Raj stared on at her as they walked towards Ritu's cabin….

Abhi mujh mein kahin

Baaki thodi si hai zindagi

Ritu got up abruptly from her chair…too shocked to react !

She couldn't believe, Naina managed to bring Raj here.

She ran upto Naina and hugged her tight, while she laughed at her reaction. Raj looked on at Naina's relieved laughter…

Jagi dhadkan nayi

Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi

" Arey Waah Raj !!! Mere itna kehne par bhi nahi maane ..! Aur Naina ne kaha toh maan liya !!", Ritu said faking annoyance, " Not fair !!"

But Raj ka toh jaise dhyaan hi nahi tha…He was looking at Naina nonchalantly.

Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai

Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera

" Raj !!", Naina shook him a little..

" Huh???"

Ritu shook her head and directed them towards waiting area of MRI department, where his case history was to be taken…

Ab hai saamne

Ishe chhuu loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa

As they walked, Naina sensed his nervousness…

Usne dheere se Raj ka haath thama…. Raj looked at her surprised…Ek ajeebsi khushi…ajeeb sa sukun mehsus karr raha tha woh….

Khushiyaan choom loon

Yaa ro loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa

Raj changed into hospital clothes and sat besides Naina as they waited for his turn...

Naina was sitting, holding his hand firmly, all throughout the wait…passing him whatever confidence she could….

Hoo abhi mujh mein kahin

Baaki thodi si hai zindagi

Raj kisi soch mein dooba hua tha…jaise usse waqt aur jagah ka hosh hi na ho….

Aur na usse iss baat ka hosh tha…ki koi usse nihaar raha hai…

Naina jaise iss har ek pal ko apne andar sama lena chahti thi…jaise woh Raj ki chavi ko apni aankhon mein basa lena chahti thi…hamesha keliye…

Kitni akeli thi who apni zindagi mein…aur iss akelepan ka ehsaas us tab hua jab Raj uski zindagi mein aaya…nahi…who Raj ki zindagi mein aayi…nahi..nahi…yun kehlo ki woh dono ek dusre ke zindagi mein aaye…

Ek dusre ki zindagi ka atoot hissa ban gaye….

Lekin shayad woh iss baat se ab bhi anjaan thi…ki Raj bhi aisa hi kuch soch raha hai….

Dor se tooti patang jaisi

Thi yeh zindagaani meri

Aaj hoon kal ho mera naho

Har din thi kahaani meri

Ritu Raj ko lene waha aayi….Raj MRI room mein jaane keliye khada hua…Saath saath Naina bhi khadi hui…

Jaise hi Raj ne room mein enter karnekeliye kadam badhaya, toh Naina ne kass ke uska haath thaam liya…

Raj muda…Naina ki ore…

Naina ki aankhon mein wahi dard tha…jo iss waqt uski aankhomein tha…aur saath saath uss ek darr dikhayi de raha tha… shayad…

Raj ne jaise uska haath chudana chaha, toh Naina ne usse aur bhi kass ke thaam liya…

" Rr..Raaj…"

Jaise woh usse jaane hi nahi dena chahti…

Ek bandhan naya peeche seh ab mujhko bulaye

Aane wale kal ki kyun fhikar mujhko kyun sataa jaaye

Ritu smiled…

" Naina…agar tum chaho toh tum bhi andar baith sakti ho…just that for a precaution tumhe apne ears mein cotton plugs daalne honge…."

Raj looked at Naina as she smiled at Ritu gratefully.

Ik aisi chubhan, iss lamhe mein hai

Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera

Raj felt dizzy with the happiness as he lied down in the MRI counsel…with Naina sitting nearby at a distance on a chair…

Ab hai saamne.. isse chhoo loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loon zara

Khushiyaan choom loon

Ya roh loon zara

Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara

They were done with the test…

Ritu pushed her buttons and requested the radiologist to look into it immediately…

They would wait for the official report…but if they could just know….

She asked Raj and Naina to wait in her cabin.

Raj observed Naina as she was sitting nervously….

He smiled… Usse Naina ka care karna achcha lag raha tha…

Hoo... dhoop mein jalte hue tann koo

Chhaya pedh ki mil gayi

" Pehle toh badi jhansi ki Rani bann rahi thi…ab kya hua ?"

Naina ko uska mazak achcha nahi laga…usne gusse se Raj ke paas dekha..

" Ab aise ghurne se kya faida? Test toh tum karwa chuki ho ! Main jaanta hun ki kis tarah maine apne aap ko sambhala hai inn dino mein….Meri samajh mein nahi aata, ki baar baar meri maut ka farmaan kaunsa sukun pohochayega tumhe aur Ritu ko?"

Aur isse pehle ki woh kuch aur keh paata, ek zordaar tamacha pada uski gaal par…

Naina was shivering with rage !

" KUCH NAHI HOGA TUMHE, SAMAJH GAYE TUM ?", she screamed.

" Arey…dheere…", Raj apna gaal sehlate hue bola, " Yeh hospital hai..aisa chillana yaha allowed nahi hai…"

" You are Impossible !!"

And she turned her back to him, to hide the tears flowing from her eyes…

Raj pulled her into hug… A hug to comfort both of them…

" Darr gayi? Arey agar tum darr jaogi toh mujhe haunsla kaun dega?? Aur ghabrao matt…ab toh mujhe pura yakeen hai ki mujhe kuch nahi hoga…! Tumhare iss roop se toh bhagwaan bhi darr gaya hoga!"

Naina ki hassi nikal aayi…aur woh dono betahasha hasne lage…

Roothe bacche ki hansi jaise

Phuslane se phir khil gayi

Kuch aisa hi mehsoos dil ko ho raha hai

Barson ke puraane zakhmon pe marham laga sa hai

" RAAAJJJ", chillati hui Ritu andar ghusi..

Raj ne jhat se Naina ka haath thaam liya… usse uske sahare ki sakht zaroorat thi…

Naina ne apni aankhe kass ke bandh karli…

Raj ne dekha Ritu ko…

Uske chehre par hassi aur aansu ka ajeeb combination tha…

" Ritu…"

Ritu suddenly hugged him tightly.

" Idiot.,..dufferr…nahi maante na meri baat ! Jaante ho main kitna pareshaan thi?? Par tumhe meri fikar kyun hogi? Tum toh apni hi duniya mein raho..… Ritu pareshaan rahe toh rahe…! uski zindagi hell bane toh bane !"

Raj aur Naina ki samajh mein nahi aaraha tha ki exactly hua kya hai…

Naina asked Raj to wait…let Ritu calm down first…

When suddenly Ritu hugged Naina…

" Thank you…thank you…thank you sooo much !!! Iss gadhe ko yaha tak laane keliye…"

Naina ritu ki ore hairani se dekh rahi thi….usse bass woh sunna tha jiski prarthna woh bhagwaan se har pal kar rahi thi…

" Nahi samjhe??" , Ritu asked wiping her tears, " pagal…tumhare reports normal hai !!!"

" KYA???", Raj and Naina screamed at once, while Ritu nodded happily !

Kuch aisa asar ,

Iss lamhe mein hai

Ye lamha kahaan tha meraa

" Parr…yeh kaise..i mean…pehle waali report mein toh…"

" Batati hu…jaise hi hamare radiologist ne kaha ki tumhare brain mein tumour ka namonishan nahi hai…toh maine tumhare pehle waale hospital mein contact kiya…unse puchne par unhone bataya ki waha stored report ke mutabik tumhe brain tumour hai… fir maine unse request ki woh unke system pe stored tumhara previous test firse dekhe..toh pata chala ki woh normal hai!! Galati se tumhe kisi aur ki films di gayi thi…!"

Raj didn't know what to do…He looked at Naina, who was crying incessantly….

He felt Ritu's hand on his shoulder…

" Sambhalo usse Raj…", she said, " usse iswaqt tumhare sahare ki zaroorat hai….main kuch der mein tumhe cafeteria mein milti hu.."

And she left the room…

Raj walked upto Naina…

Usne dheere she uska chehra thama…aur uske aansu poche…

" Raj…" , Naina said only this much and the next moment Raj took her in a crushing embrace…

Ab hai saamne.. isse chhoo loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loo zara

Khushiyaan choom loon

Ya ro loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loon zara



Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello All...


I know ... I know... I am late with the update... And it had nothing to do with writer's block. In fact the part was almost ready... the only thing which held me back was the fact that I didn't want to write the dance sequence between RN... I guess here goes my title of a choreographer for a toss... Mana... you will have to change it now...😉


It took all of Priya and Mana's pestering and threats to finally update this part... and now I am thinking what to write in the next part... But enough of my ramblings... I will leave you all to peacefully read the update and drop in your comments...

And the LIKE button is always at your service... especially designed by IF for writers like us...

But before I leave you all... A special thanks to MANA for penning down the scanning scene... I wouldn't have been able to write it at all... M hopeless at hospital scenes and so I approached the master.😆

And thanks too Priya for posting the last update on my behalf.

On a last note... M glad Yash and Ritu went down with you so well... as did Mauli and Samir. I stole this couple from an old serial titled Sakshi which used to air on Sony TV a long time back. The hero there turned out to be a villian and the show stopped sometime after that but the couple stuck in my mind...

uh.. uhh... M rambling... probably too tired even to hold a proper conversation... So I will stop now...🥱

PMs will be sent tomorrow...

Luv
Guglu
Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part
What a relief..Raj is all well
continue soon

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