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Posted: 13 years ago
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It 1.50 am...and me still awake to write and update this crap... I created a lot of hawa about TING LING LING...but couldnt make it upto it.. I m really very sorry... Main nanhi si jaan so stuck up with everything.. So please bear with this crap.. I wanted the next part to be on the 2nd thread but...sb yeh aisa gnda update de rahi hoon tho not expecting anything from you guys.. your gaalis and chappals are welcome now.. Chalo bass ho gayi bakwassing... This part so shifts form one POV to the Other so just look at the font colour...(Maroon for Rey and black for Kriya)

PART 10

It was 12 0'clock... she drove us to the highway...

"Care to explain?? Kaha ja rehe hain hum??"

"arre baba baaatcutter main hoon tum nahi..tumhe itne saare sawal poochne ki permission nahi hain..thats my copyright..."

"Arghhh... "

Ohh god she was impossible... And Why the hell I wasn't mad at her... I tried to wipe the dreamy expression that i bear on my face... Weirdo.. That's what she was... and the strange thing was she didn't even know how cutely she makes these weird statements... I straightened myself as soon as I realized that I have been staring her while she was lost in her driving.. I looked outside the window...

I didn't know where were we heading towards? I just decided to go with the flow of my heart.. I just wanted to follow it regardless where it would take me... I was taking him along on this aimless journey... I really didn't have faith in anything...neither had I hoped for something then... I knew nothing...where I would take him? What would I do? What would I say to him? I sensed his eyes stuck on me and I felt blood in my veins quickened towards my cheeks... He looked away... I looked at him and chuckled... The staring wheel in my hands was practically moving at its own... as my gaze narrowed on corner of his eyes... Thanks to universji, He looked back to disturb my stare... Otherwise we would have meet with one another accident.. And i wouldn't have afforded it... I quickly shifted my focus towards the staring...
"tum kya meri bachi khuchi memory bhi mujhse chinana chahti ho...dhyaan kaha hain tumhara?"
"nahi iss bar mujhe apni memory loss karwani hain.. Dekhna hain mujhe kaise lagta hain memory loss ke baad"
"have u lost it? Bakwass mat karo...ab bataogi bhi ki hum kaha ja rahe hain?"
She didn't say a word instead she put on the radio... The rj barked
"now we have reached to the last song of the show... Aur jane se pehle ek chotisi tip aapki boring life ko interesting banane ke liye… every night before you sleep make sure you do at least one crazy thing in a day… sunanane mein shayad thodi bakwas lagti hain idea.. if yess then go ahead and do it… you'll actually feel good… koi bhi crazy cheez jo sunane mein ekdum bakwas lagti can actually make you smile….and belive me guys every day will become a rocking a day… coz you never know yeh world ek aisi jagah hain jaha pata nahi kisisbhi bakwaas cheez mein aap ki million dollar smile chhupi huyi ho.. tho isi baat jate jate Rockstar film ka ye gaana suniye… Main milti hoon aappse kal isi tym isi show pe…good night..sleep tight…don't forget to do the crazy thing… a little shittle bakwas can give you back the million dollar smile….

I was least interested what did the RJ was bakwassing?? I was looking outside thinking of the dream that I had in the morning… they both resembled angels in the sky… So pure and divine… each turn they took..each movement they did were simply perfect.. Their dance that spoke passionate story of rhythm could not be explained in words..they were so damn blissful to watch.. the existence of the very thing that they had between them was unbelievable.. as if they were reading each other's mind… The word "Chemistry" that I heard numerous times actually held its meaning in their dance.. For the first time in my life I could see what did the word "Chemistry" meant… And I believed this kind of perfection in chemistry can be there only if the two of them are truly and deeply in love with each other… And if Kriya was the girl in the dream..the guy must be me myself…. then where did the divine thing that possessed between two of them disappeared now? Why the two of us were still struggling with our relation? Why wasn't I able to accept her? Why did I feel that I don't love her? Why I couldn't see anything between us?? Ohh Gosh..Another chain of question.. I need to stop thinking otherwise these creepy questions would kill me for sure…. Suddenly she raised the volume of the stereo…I heard the RJ's voice getting lowered and the first sound notes of the song became audible… It broke the train of thought.. I turned to see her smiling and her eyes twinkling.. I skipped a heartbeat… the curve of her lips made me curving my lips too…I laughed at myself when I realized that I was smiling for no reason…I didn't even ask her why was she smiling…. I kept staring her.. I didn't know why but I felt it might rain soon though it was month of Feb…. Did she read my mind? Cause the very next second she held her hand out of the window to check..

(Play the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggmQwXHrW6M )

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

She suddenely took a U-turn and before I could understand anything we reached the sea side road… The road was somewhat empty.. The city that never sleeps was resting in the dark blanket of night... We were at Marine drive.. The most beautiful place in Mumbai… The Concrete road curved along the sea and the street lights stood adorning the place… the billowing wind teased her displacing her hair strands over and over again… I tried hard to suppress the urge to pin them behind her ears… The sound notes filled the different rhythm in the air…

It felt as her smile danced on her lips to the rhythm of the words..Ting ling ling… TING LING LING…. I chuckled at the stupid lyrics… But she was enjoying it to the fullest… I couldn't understand what did it mean? She pulled over the car at the sea side.. and stepped out of the car.. she yanked the door open for me… I stepped out...

The shorful city of Mumbai bears this peaceful place in its belly… and there it appears in the darkness of night spreading its magnificent jewels… the only place in the dream city of mine where its peaceful enough to let the nature speak volumes... And i stood there trying to get the peace in the storms of my life...no not my life... Our life... I could read his emotions... The confusions that he bears inside...the confusions that i sometimes left behind..they all appear there on his face..crystal clear... I wanted to wipe away those confusions... I knew it would take time...but for the time being I wanted him to forget all those confusions... And to live the present moment that stood there inviting us... I didn't have answers for all his confusions but right then what was important was the million dollar smile that my heart craved for... It's the twinkling glitter in his eyes that I missed the most... I dragged him along to the concrete path that divides the street from the sea side... We stood there holding hands facing the billowing wind that kept hitting our faces hard... I sensed the embrace of his hand around mine got hardened sending thousand butterflies in my tummy..i struggled with the wind to stretch the curve of my lips from ear to ear...

I turned to watch the heavenly grin spread across her face... suddenly I felt the urge of closing the gaps between us was taking over me.. I gulped trying to get some control over it... the song that she played on the car stereo still struggled with the naughty wind trying to become audible... My heartbeat paced up as she brought her face close to me... I couldn't figure out what was she up to...

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

Her gaze narrowed on me... her face inches apart... suddenly the poised expression transformed into another grin on her face... she moved her brows rhythmically over the the lyrics of the song that hardly held some meaning... But still she managed to make my eye stick with her 'oh so cute gestures'... the weirdo baatcutter was on different planet altogether... For a second I felt she was drunk... but she was not... The little weird thing didn't need alcohol to get talli... then i realized the stupid song lyrics were acting as alcohol... the hangover of that Ting Ling Ling was enough for her to reach the other planet of her own.. but it felt good to see the naughty smile that curved along her lips...The other planet seemed happier.. I wouldn't have bother if she would have decide to stay on that planet lifelong.. i just wanted her to give me the address so that me too could reach there... My mind unconsciously underlined the thought that she was a thing without which there would be nothing and with her it would be everything...

Katiya karoo
Katiya karoon
Tera roop katiya karoon
Tera roon tere roon
Tera roon roon roon roon

What could have been the crazy thing where the million dollar smile hid itself? I was thinking hard to get this answer...and while travelled back to the old memories down the lane.. I met with Kriya... The crazy little thing... The adventurous Miss Ghai... And there lies the answer to my question... just be the old Miss Kriya ghai... Only she could get back the million dollar smile... And Miss kriya Ghai wanted to dance with the waves that were thudding against the rocks...

She swirled around taking turns around me... I checked around if there was anybody to see her dancing like that... I sighed as there wasn't anybody in senses to see her... The entire scene was typical bollywood drama.. and I hated it...

Sari raate katiya karoon
Katiya karoon
Katiya karoon
Sari raate katiya karoon
Katiya karoon
Katiya karoon
Sari raate katiya karoon

She dragged me along to the middle of the road... She wrapped her hands around the street light poll and danced around it... I heard the sound of band coming towards us.. i dragged her away from the light pole...

Saara din sochan
Vich langda
Tere lai hun jeeyun te marun

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

We looked towards the direction of the sound.. after few seconds the baraat became visible.. yeh another grin spread across her lips...She looked at me...By the time I have understood what was she upto... I nodded my head to say NO..but before i could say anything...

Eh tan mera……a…
Charkha..a.. hove
Hove ulfat..
Yaar… di…
Chitta roop…

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

Tinga linga linga linga
Linga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga
Tinga linga linga linga

Nachdi phiroon
Tapdi phiroon
Keeli main
Napdi phiroon

Hadh karoon
Hadh karoon
Hadh karoon roon roon roon..

Yara bulle
Lutiya karoon
Lutiya karoon
Lutiya karoon

Yara bulle
Lutiya karoon
Lutiya karoon
Lutiya karoon
Yara bulle
Lutiya karoon

Mainu dar hun
Naiyo jag da
Tere lai hun jeeyun te marun

She reached there in the baraat... She was dancing in the middle of the all the strangers... She did all those shaadi dance steps with them as if they were her old frnz... She danced as if nobody was watching her... But she didn't know my eyes still stuck on her... they follow her everywhere she went...She travelled a distance with that stranger baraat... and I kept following her like her tail to stop her doing so.. But the crazy ittle weirdo was out of control.. I wondered If she knew what she was doing then.. and this was the case when she wasn't even drunk...what if she actually gets drunk... I tried getting her back to the car..Instead she pulled me along to dance... now there wasn't any option left.. I lifted her up in my arms..and started walking

Katta roon….o….
Katta roo……

Main sari raat katiya
Katiya karun
Sari raat katiya
Katiya karun
Sari raat katiya
Katiya karun
Sari raat katiya
Katiya karun

I walked some steps... she wrapped her hands around my neck... My gaze met with hers... Our heartbeats pacing up... my intense gaze poised on her.. A drop of rain kissed her lashes as she lowered them...she widened her hand in the air to check if it was actually raining... she hopped on the ground... It actually started raining through the grey skies over the sea...

Main saari raat katiya
katiya karun
Saari raat katiya
Katiya karoon…uvu…uvu….

The pleasant rain was falling down on our shoulders we look ahead as the bright, yellow, gold lights of the Queen's Necklace contrast with the night sky and glimmer as bright as magical, yellow jewels... but the most magical thing was the curve of his lips that spread wide across his face from ear to ear... what adorn the beauty of the moment was my million dollar jewel that was hiding itself behind the confused question mark he always bears on his face... I thanked Universaji to give it back to me what I need the most...

I stretched my hands wide to receive those pristine pearls Universji bestowed upon us... I closed my eyes and let myself drench into those pearly beads..

I closed my eyes to sense the pleasure of getting drench in the rain.. The pure pleasure danced across the body as every drop of rain kissed my skin... Suddenly the drops came over me from different direction... I opened my eyes to see her swirling around .. as she swirled some of the drops from her hair escaped to touch my face...I wiped it away... with her every turn she was coming closer to me... and the next second her delicate frame collided with my body...

I opened my eyes to sense him standing before me... My hands gradually went down.. I found my heart hopped out on my hands... I looked gently in his eyes.. I could smell the musky scent as it gracefully wafts up to my senses. .. I blinked my eyes just for a moment...

Her sweet scent caressed my senses as we both were mere breath apart from each other... I gently looked into her chocolate eyes...

I could feel his body and soul wrapped around me..caressing each and every part of me without even a slight touch...

I reached my hands up his shoulder and travelled it till his cheeks... I felt the hair on my back raced up and down my spine at the first touch... I felt as if I was a teenager again... It felt megical... The naughty wind around turned placidly into a warm breeze but it had nothing to do with the heat that blazed a trail beneath the touch of my hand... I felt my heart melting in the warm breeze around... I closed his eyes with my palms... The rain kept bestowing its love upon us... I wiped the drops of rain that lingered on his lips with my thumb...

I shuddered as her thumb travelled across my lips... I sensed the need to pull away from her... But for the time being I could only control myself to not to pull her closer...

I cupped his face in both hands making him lean closer on my hands.. His hands encircled my slender waist... He leaned in eagerly yet leisurely.. As his mouth descended towards mine..I caught on breath realizing what was about to ensue... I dab my lips with the pad of my tongue... Our lips brushed slightly... I drew back to watch him so ready for the kiss... i smiled secretly and lean back towards his lips... I softly trace his upper lip with the warm tip of my tongue... i heard him caught breathe... I run my tongue dappling it around the fullness of his upper lip carving it around the corner and tracing along his lower lip... I heard the subtle groan as my tongue delves little deeper...

Suddenly, I struggled with my senses as he drew back... I opened my eyes to see the guilt on his face... Ohh god... he stepped back... his eyes refused to meet with my gaze... He went inside the car and shut the door behind...


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Posted: 13 years ago

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yaayy first to comment...
kuch to faayda hua itni raat ko kaam k beech tere thread ko stalk karne ka...
i just came onl9 to check dis only k tune aapna ting ling update kiya hai k nai...n finally u updates...
n kya mast ting ling tha...
tu na ek number ki luchchi hai... rockstar ka ting ling daalke tera ting ling ho gaya na...
okk nw on a serious note...me luvd the update...as usual main yeh har baar kehti hoon shayad...baby it's an awesome blossom update...me likey likey...
kria ka pagalpan...n hayye rey ka usse tirchi nazar se dekhna...me to full on fida... it reminded me of our old glory days...
n the kiss ...jo hote hote v reh gaya...its just too good...
u just left me thinking...rey k dimaag mein abhi kitne conflicting khayal aa rahe honge...
now sun next update jaldi karna...tere iss thread ko complete karne ki bahut koshish ki hoon...n aaj k update k baad to yeh complete ho hi jayega...par ab sachchi mein ek ting ling wala update dena...
and thanx fr such a wonderful update...sone se pehle tera update...kya baat hai...ur writing is alwaz a treat...luvd dis update and luv u too sweetieee❤️❤️❤️
jhappi 🤗 fr u fr such a superb update...
Edited by sukanyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww awsomme man really nyc oh damn he mmoved bk wen is dis guy ever gnna accept yaarr btw whn next update plz do update fast and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
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UNRES
Finally ting ling ling updatee!!!
it was absolutely awesomee! the way you described kria and rey rediscovering their love for each other was amazing!
and the kiss was breath taking!
i know tu hamesha busy rehti hai but im soo happy you took the time to update! and that too such a beautiful update!
Love you prenu 🤗
Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing loved it amazing it was too amazing and it was enough to cheer me up a little thanks a lot for this
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

OH TING LING KI MAAA

UPDATE KARRR


AUR KITNA TADPAYEGI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?


TADAP TADAP KE IS DIL SE AAAH NIKALTHI RHI

YEH SAZA DI PRENU NE..

KI MEI MARRR GAYIII HAAN TERE FF KE LIYE MARRR GAYIII




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arre luchchi ab mujhe TING LING LING ki maa bana diya.. main ab tak kunwari hoon samjhi...Ting ling ling ki bachchi hi samajh le tu...
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Awesome update...luvd it ...bt last may y d hell did rey back off...i mean kuc b ho she's his wife ...plz update nxt part soon...waitng fr it egrly...
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dat was awesome update.
rest comments 2morrow.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update.. kria ki masti was fun... and kiss jo ki nahi hua jus bcoz of rey wth yaar rey ki prob kya hai.. har baar kria ko hurt karta hai.. hai toh vo uski wife hi na so wats a prob. pata nahi uski memory kb vapis ayegi and kb hume humari real romantic rey milega... Update nxt part fast..

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