Tuze bhula diya updated part10 - Page 30

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OMG...OMG...OMG prerna its too hawtt n sensuous...i cn't blieve while reading dis some electric current is flowing through my body...n cn't blieve dat you wrote suhagh rat...dere 1st nite scene...luv uu yr

in strtng i was thnking may b aaj b rulaygi ye coz strtng part is too emotional...wen mirror is scattered n da way u write each n evry scene of past of kriya is jst too awsumm...HATS OFF to u yr...or b jyada badi fan ban gyi hu mai teri 😊

n den jaise age age badi i was shocked...i hw cn u write soo well...soo perfect...true nw dere is no kriya no reyaansh...only n only KRIYAANSH...n rey is soo dam romantic n hawtt in dis part...Oh MY GOD ab tk digest ni ho ra...i m gng to read dis 2-3 tyms more

n thnx alot 4 such awsumm amazimg fab mindblowing hawtt part...luv uuu soo much...n a big * HUG*...n lots of kisses( mind u only on cheeks 😉 ) to u... 😊

Originally posted by: sukanyaa

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WOW...its so sensuous and hawt...

dont know wat else to say...after reading it fr the 6th time...the only word dat comes frm my mouth is AWESOME...i already told u dis preru...its really superb rey...

tujhe to abhi ek jhappi🤗 dene ka mann kar raha hai...chummeshwari update sweetie...

so passionate and amorous...n so well written...hawt n sexy ...yet so simple and innocent...loved it to the core...

the way u hav written it is really too good...the love between them is clearly visible through those steamy n hawt sequences...

n really luvd the way how u potrayed it dat its not lust bt the desire to feel his love , touuch...awesome...

and really thanks for such a superb, fantabulous update...

luv u preru...❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: chsripriya

no words yaar hot hot and super freaking hot and i could feel the love amazing and absolutely mindblowing plz update soon and thnx for pm me

OMG...it ws so hawttt n sensuous...luvd it...dnt hav wrds 2 xplain...out f d wrld...amzng...kya baat hai...lovely...:)

awsome...loved ur writing style...so sensuous!!!

its super awesome...
u wrote each n every line very brilliantly...
it was like the magic..
n the thoughts were beautiful.. just beautiful...
loved it totally...from beginning to end ...👍🏼

Prerna I have to say I really respect you after reading the scene of their wedding night. U could have made it cheap and obscene but instead it was passionate, romantic, innocent and pure. I really love you for respecting the characters enough to describe that moment so beautifully. I literally had goosebumps reading your update...just the other day I was thinking ki tera update bahut dino se nahi aaya..and aaj tera update finally aaya :D...prerna can't wait for the next update is all I can say. Thanks loads for the PM...and kudos to being such as amazing writer!