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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear,,

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

awesome teaser...

loved it...

continue soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

dear...😛

4 pming me dear..😃..

ur all updates r ...😳

me just dear...👏👏

4 ur hard work..⭐️.

keep the job up dear..👏..

4 short comment...😕

keep

ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Thanks friends 4 ur likes and comments.

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Part 46

In dev room

Dev : meera, tum kha thi, ab tak,
Maine kha tha na mein fresh hone ja rha hu,
Tumne abi tak mere kapde nhi nikale
Meera : abi deti hu dev
He held her wrist.
Dev : meera tum thik ho na
Meera : hmm
Nakul knock on door.
Dev : nakul andher aa jao
Nakul : dev sahab, wo geet madam
Meera : kya hua geet ko
Nakul : geet madam khi chli gyi hai
Dev : ye tum kya kh rhe ho nakul
Geet yhi khi hongi, ghar me
Nakul : nhi sahab, humne unhe khud ghar se bahar jate huye dekha tha.
Meera : tumne geet ko roka kyun nhi.
Nakul : maine koshish ki thi, pr unhone mujhse na kuch kaha,
Aur na hi meri baat suni.
Meera : dev geet itni raat ko kaha chli gyi
Dev : meera tum chinta mt karo
Nakul geet ne kuch to kha honga
Yaad krne ki koshish karo
Nakul : geet madam ne bs "maan" kaha, aur chli gyi
Aur wo kisi se phone pe baat kr rhi thi.
Meera : khi maan veerji ka to phone nhi tha.
Dev : meera kash asa hi ho,
Par is waqt hume ye pata karna honga, geet is waqt kahai hai.
Meera : mein usse phone krti hu
Dev : hmm
Both enter in hospital room. Maan look directly in geet's eyes and hold her hand in his. The love that was getting reflected through his eyes made geet to forget everything.

"ek pal mein hi, saare dard mit gaye,
Ek pal mein hi, pyasi darti pe saavan ki bundo ne tapas ki agan ko buja diya,
Ye kaisa pyaar hai...
Jo ek pal mein, milta hai,
Aur ek pal mein hi..kho jata hai.."
Maan : geet, itni yaad aa rhi thi meri.
she try to moved out but he held her wrist.
Maan : bolo na geet
Maan twirled geet, bringing her back to his embrance. Geet smiled and rested her head on his chest.
Maan : itni yaad aa rhi thi meri.
Geet turned, rest her hand on his shoulder and look directly in his eyes.
Geet : "din din sa nhi lagta,
Raat bi raat nhi,
Suraj fika se, aur chand pila sa,
Hassi hotho se sukh gyi ho,
Aur aansu palko ko sukhne nhi dete "
Maan caresses her face, geet smiled as a tear rolled out of her eyes.
Geet : is intzaar mein, aap kb wapas ayenge,
Aap wapas aa gye hai na.
She placed her palm on his cheek.
Aaj wo pass tha, fir bi kho dene ka ehsaas khi na khi aaj bi tha
He take her hand and kissed on her palm and kisses her eyes. Maan's simple touch always had a magical effect on geet. She starts blushing. She hugged him.
Maan : suraj ke bina din nhi ho sakta
Aur chand ke bina raat
Aansu ke bina hassi
Aur duriyo ke bina nazdikiya nhi ho sakti.
To fir tumhare bina meri zindagi kaisi ho sakti hai.
She come out from hug and she took his lips with in hers and started kissing it passionately. Maan to responded to the kiss very soon. He entered her mouth and started relishing it. He was exploring every corner of her mouth and very soon their tongues enjoying a kiss, but both break the kiss due to lack of air.

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

ORIGINAL POSTED BY...

seemamary

If i am not wrong geet is pregnant hope she tells maan soon.

YES DEAR GEET IS PREGNANT...WO MAAN KO BHI BHUT JALD BTA DENGI...JUST WAIT AND WATCH...I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

ORIGINAL POSTED BY...

tushti-kiran

I bow in front of their love...

how much they care for each other...

don't even feel their own pain...

thanx for pm...

YHI TO KHAS BAAT AHI...HAMARE MAANEET KE PYAAR KI...JHA WO APNE PYAAR KE BAARE MEIN JYADA SOCHTE HAI KHUD SE...😊

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

awsome update

waiting for maan reaction wen he got to know dat geet is pregnant

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

superb update
loved it...

Geet : "din din sa nhi lagta,
Raat bi raat nhi, Suraj fika se, aur chand pila sa,
Hassi hotho se sukh gyi ho,
Aur aansu palko ko sukhne nhi dete "
is intzaar mein, aap kb wapas ayenge,
Aap wapas aa gye hai na.

Maan : suraj ke bina din nhi ho sakta
Aur chand ke bina raat Aansu ke bina hassi
Aur duriyo ke bina nazdikiya nhi ho sakti.
To fir tumhare bina meri zindagi kaisi ho
sakti hai.
(missingGHSP and maaneet so much)

Waiting for next
cont.soon

thankx for lovely part nd pm

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