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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

beautiful update...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

maan n geet atlast met each other...its really wonderful...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

awesome one...

thank God they are together now...😛

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

hey sweetu, just read both the work.
Will hit 'like' too, on both the thread, soon.

Superb as always. Loved it.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

...😃

4 PMing me..dear...😳

ur updates...😊

keep the up dear..👏..

dear...

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lov,❤️

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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priyanshi15

@priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Part 45(a)
Naina : maan
Geet
Finally ye dono mil gye
Mein abi rajiv ko btake aati hu.
His eyes reflected what he want. Both move outside from his crowd and go back in his room.
Maan lifts her face holding her chin.
Maan : geet, tum thik to ho na
Geet : maan ab apki geet bilkul thik hai.
Maan wiped her tears from his thumb.
Maan cares her face and kisses her eyes.
He saw her bleeding hand than her dupatta, it was a complete mess.
He shouts on her "who gave you authority to hurt yourself , you didn't even think about me."
Geet : maan, wo
Maan : chup bilkul chup
Mein tumse kuch pal ke liye dur kya hua,
Tumne apni kya halat bna li
Geet : ye baat mein bi kh sakti hu.
He lifted her in his arms and placed her on bed.
Geet : maan mein thik hu,
Aap aaram kijiye
Maan : geet wo to mujhe dikh hi rha h
Tum kitni thik ho
Geet tumhare hath se khoon bh rha hai, aur tum kh rhi ho, thik ho
Geet : maan , bs wo chotti se chot lag gyi
Maan : kaise aur kab
Geet : wo
Sayad jb mein ghar se nikli thi
Nhi..
Sayad
Wo
Maan mujhe yaad nhi aa rha hai
Maan : geet tum itni laparwah kaise ho sakti ho
Geet : maan, plz aap baith jaiye,
Aapki tabiyat thik nhi hai
Maan : chup bilkul chup
He shouts "nurse"
"doc."
Nurse and doc. Come into his room.
Doc : what happen
Why you are shouting?
It is hospital not your home.
Geet laughs.
Maan : tumhe hassi aa rhi hai
She nodded.
Geet : maan singh khurana ko bi koi daat sakta hai,
Itna acha mauka hai
Maan : geet
Doc : kya hua
You have any problem.
Maan : yes
Doc : tell me
Maan : doc. Meri wife ko dekhiye, usse kitni chot lagi hai
Doc : nurse inhe examine room me leke chaliye
See below
Part b coming soon

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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priyanshi15

@priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Part 45(b)

He again lifted her in his arm.
Doc. : ye aap kya kr rhe hai
Maan : kya kr rha hu matlab.
She is my wife.
Doc : dekhiye aap abi weak hai, apki tabiyat kharab ho sakti hai.
Inhe niche utariye
Maan : mein thik hu.
Geet : maan jaise doc. Kh rhe hai, aap plz waise hi kriye
Maan : geet tum smjh
Geet : maann
Maan :Dra kyun rhi ho
He make stand her on floor.
Maan : chaliye
The doctor starts treating geet injuries.
Maan looked at geet as he thought she might have felt the pain.
But geet was only smiling
Her heart was smiling. She was satisfied and happy to see maan in front of her eyes.

" zameen thi pyasi
Na jane kitne waqt se
Barish ki ek bund ne
Virane me phool khila diya "
Doc : maine dressing kr di hai
Aap kal fir dobara dressing krwa lena
Aur pain ho to ye med. Le lena
Maan : ok doc.
Doc : Mr. khurana, ab aap bi apne room me jaiye, aur aaram kijiye
Abi apke doc. Aate honge
Maan : geet chale
Geet : hmm
Both goes into his room.
Nurse : kitna pyaar karte hai ye apni wife se
Khud ki halat thik na hote huye bi, inhe apni parwah nhi hai
Doc : hmm
In khurana mension
Meera : dev aaj kitna mja aaya
Thanks dev
Dev : thanks, kis baat ke liye meera
Meera tum meri dost ho, aur mein apni dost ke liye, kuch bi kar sakta hu.
Meera : hmm
Dev : acha meera, mein abhi fresh hoke aati hu.
Meera : hmm
Meera Monologue
Pata nhi dev, mein kbhi tumhari dost se aage kuch ban bi payungi ya nhi
Ek pal to mujhe lagta hai..
Jis tarah mein tumhe chahti hu
Tum bi mujhse pyaar krne lage ho..
Par dusre hi pal tum hamare rishte me bs dosti khke whi rok dete ho,
Kb tak
aakhir kab tak
Hum apne pariwaar ke aange ye dekhaiyange
Humne is rishte ko sawikar kr liya hai
Tum meri parwah krte ho,
Pr mujhse pyaar nhi..
Jb tum mujhe apni baaho me lete ho
To ye dil chahta hai,
Wo pal bs whi thm jaye..
Aur mein tumhari bahoo me bs yuhi sma jayu..
End Monologue
Dev : meera
Meera : ayi dev

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

hayeee me shoo happy
mele maaeet mil gye yeee😃
lvly updt lvd it...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

beautiful updates...

sahi mein maan aur geet ka pyar toh iss duniya ki bahar ki duniya ki hai...dono hi khud itne jakhmi hai...magar dono ekdoosre k bare mein hi soch rahe hai...amazing...

really loved it...

thank u so much for d lovely updates n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...