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BarunSobtiLover

@BarunSobtiLover

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I love your OS', smitar, have read most of them!! They're damn good!

Loved this one! Really well written! Read the new tagline, would go well with your story! I wish something similar happens!

Please do keep writing more! I'm living on OS' only these days...

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merrydock

@merrydock

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

please do continue and pm the update. its difficult to keep track of OS, loved the feelings you discribed, he rejoyces in her joy, and he is her shelter from the storm. ah snake, ah shayam or whatever! in Arnav style

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow nice way to bring out shams truth

Hopefully she tells him

So nice when she found calm just by coming to his room wow soulmates they r

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kohli4ever

@kohli4ever

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

A very nice OS...plz continue...plz pm me updates your writings..thanx

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humhemeghna

@humhemeghna

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

I loved the part where he is looking at her in his bedroom and his thought of somebody mistreating her under his roof. Lovely emotions.

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random94

@random94

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Please do complete it with part 2 snd so on. Really well written

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Great OS!!

i think Shyam may try to corner her again during the ceremonies and all!! i loved how she found comfort around Arnav's stuff!

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Another part plzzz :) loved it

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

That was amazing! Very beautifully written😳 Continue soon!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

A superbly written OS hun.

Loved it.

The sense of security Khushi feels being around Arnav is truly overwhelming.

Fab stuff sugar.

⭐️

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