maneet: do i deserve ur love? ch 15 pg 138 - Page 54

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THEY WERE ON THE PHONE THE WHOLE NIGHT

GEET IS FINALLY CHEERFUL

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pari got ready for the college n left. The whole day was so peaceful for both geet, pari, maa n maan. Here maan is thinking about geet n geet is thinking about maan.

Here maan is sipping his coffee in his cabin n thinking about geet. His phone rang. He picked the excitedly thinking it might be geet.

Hello told maan excitedly.

Hello maan told adi. (hehehe maan its not geet but ur friend adi 😆).

Adi tum bolo told maan.

Ha main. Kyun?? r u waiting for any other call teased adi.

Main other call, what rubbish told maan.

Dont lie maan, geet ne kal tumko call kiya tha na.

Tumko kaise pata?? r u trapping my phone. 😡

Yeh tho hadh hua maan. Main bas aise hi pooch raha tha.

Acha?? but how u know that its geet u can guess any other name na.

Hmm geet took ur number from pinky, so ofcourse pinky told me.

Acha.. thik hain.

Waise I tried calling u yesterday, but ur phone is continously busy.

Busy?? nahi tho main tho bas 10 min baat ki geet se. thats it. Shayad tumara phone kuch problem hain.

Mera phone problem. Wah ji wah, yeh tho acha hain. Saale batao kya chakkar hain.

Kya chakkar? Kuch bhi tho nahi. Acha mujhe kuch kaam hain, I will call u later. K bye told maan n cut the call immediately.

Arey arey maan suno told adi but its too late maan cut the call.

Pinky who listened their convo burst out into laughter.

Wow wow wow, I cant believe this. First time bhai is lieing. Really kuch tho baat hain.

Ha pinky mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hain. Dekhte hain kya hoga.

Hmmm I want both maan bhai n geet happy.

Ha pinky, even maan will have family. I know how he suffered in his childhood, no one was there with him, he was alone but he is happy. Really he knows how to face all the struggles in the life. But ab aur nahi, he should be happy.

Dont worry adi, he will be happy. Ab yeh senti baatein karna band karo pouted pinky.

Ok ok chalo lunch karte hain.

Here maan is teaching steps to his students. He is teaching salsa today.

Guys I wanna see the steps which I taught u now. So ready?

Yes sir.

One by one. Not in group I mean pair.

Fine sir..

one boy n girl came on to the dias n started dancing.. their moves to the music are prefect. When the boy lifted that girl in the air n then her waist moves were awesome. Maan is very much impressed by their dance. He is imagining that boy as himself n that girl as geet.

Maan's imagination: 😆

maan is in one corner of the dias n geet in other corner. Once the music started they both came to the middle of the dias, maan held her waist n they both r moving to the rhythm, maan lifted her by her waist n moving his waist as per the music. He made her stand on her feet, her back is facing his chest. Their hands r entwined n geet rested her body weight on one leg n bent on the other side. Maan too did the same leaning on her totally. They r in the same position for some time forgetting the whole world. Their eyes met n both are lost in each other, maan held geet tight by her waist n geet cluched his shirt tight.

Suddenly maan came out of his imagination when he heard loud sound. Then he realized that they completed their dance n waiting for maan's comment.

Maan smiled n told great work guys. Superb continue with the same spirit.

Thanku very much sir.

Maan: man u have lost it completely. U r day dreaming about geet. What will she think about me. No maan concentrate on work. He mentally decided to concentrate on work n entered his cabin.

But today maan is not maan he completely lost in geet. Yesterday's phone convo changed him completely. Before they fought with each other n maan use to think how to say sorry. But now they became friends. Suddenly someone called him

maan.

He turned n saw geet. He is surprised to see her here.

Hey geet, tum yaha??

geet? Who is geet. Sir I am rosy.

oh.. ummm sorry rosy.

Rosy smiled n told its ok sir.

Tell me whats the matter.

Sir for next 10 days I cant come to class sir.

Any problem rosy??

umm nothing sir, my dad is ot well. So have to take care of him.

Ok rosy, if u need any help or any money problem u can ask me. Dont worry he will be fine.

Sur sir, thanku sir.

Ok rosy. Anything do u want to say??

umm.. who is geet sir?

Maan is surprised by her question but smiled n told she is my friend.

Ohhh... all the best sir. Bye smiled rosy n left from there.

Maan just smiled thinking about his behaviour.

Maan: we just met 2 days back n I am not able to forget her. Geet she is just magic. Kya jadoo kar diya geet tumne maan ko. If I close my eyes then I can see your smiling face, your gussa. Pata hain geet tum gussa karti ho na bohot cute lagti ho. Woo lal lal naak, just want to pull your cheeks.

Awww maan u want to pull my cheeks came a voice.

Geet tum sach mein yaha ho?? asked maan without turning back.

Ha maan I am here only in your heart told geet.

Ha geet no one effected me in such a short span. Tum hamesha meri dil main rahogi told maan n turned to face her.

He saw her angelic face smiling at him. Maan was completely lost in her n moved forward to touch her. When he was about to touch her geet gayab ho gayi.

Maan closed his eyes n smiled n thought u r driving me crazy geet. I am hallucinating. Muje yaha acha nahi lag raha hain. Main ghar chala jaata hu.

Maan left from there n headed to his house.

On the other side pari came out of her college feeling expremely tired. Her face is so dull n pale.

Pari: oh god this head ache is killing me. Di ko phone karu. No no she might be busy. I have to wait for cab now.

She is waiting for cab just then maan is going on the other side in his car. When he saw pari waiting for cab on the other side of the road. He turned his car n went near her n got out of the car.

Hii pari.

Hii maan bhai. How r u?? asked pari but he can easily sense the dullness on her face.

I am fine pari. But r u fine? Tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na?? asked maan.

Nothing bhai.. thoda sa head ache told pari.

R u waiting for ur di?? asked maan.

No bhai cab ke liye wait kar rahi hu told pari.

ok.. come I will drop u.

no bhai its ok. Aapko parshan kyun?? I will go.

Kyun pari muje tum apna bhai nahi maanti told maan making sad face.

Nahi bhai aisa nahi hain.. main bus aise hi.

Thik hain I will drop u. u tell me the route.

With no other option pari told ok bhai.

They both settled in the car n maan started driving..

pari give me the address n u rest.

Nahi bhai its ok.. aapse baat karne ka itna acha mauka mila told pari n smiled.

Maan too smiled n asked acha?? kya baat karna chati ho?

Aapko pata hain bhai I didnt even miss even a single show of yours. I too love dance very much bhai.

Wow u too love dance. Did u learn anywhere??

Ha bhai when I was in school I use to go to dance class. Par ab chod di told pari making sad face.

Aisa kyun??

dad ke death ke baad...

oh ok I am sorry.

Nahi bhai its ok.

U can learn now na??

ha bhai par financial problems. We all r dependent on di. She have to pay my college fees. Ghar ka karcha aur yeh sab tho mushkil hota hain.

Maan was surprised to hear this when he met pari in mall he thought she is a careless girl who dont care anything. But hearing what she is told is absolutely shocking for him.

Kya hua bhai??

Ek baat bolu? Tum gussa nahi karna tumari di ki tarah.

Ohh bhai main aur gussa no way. U tell.

I didnt expect that u care about your family so much.

Pari just smiled at him knowing what he is telling.

Nahi bhai.. main pehle aise hi thi but ab nahi. Pata nahi dad ke death ke baad di ko kya hua? She became so silent n she forgot how to smile. Dad n di r like best friends, she misses him a lot. Aapko ek aur baat batao?

Bolo pari.

Yesterday she met u n came na she was very dull n locked herself in the room.

WHAT?? but why?? I didnt hurt her na.

Nahi bhai aisa nahi hain. Actually u asked her na that u will get gussa very easily.

Haa main tho bas to cheer her up I told.

Hmm dad use to tell her the same. Aapne bhi kaha tha na so she became very dull. Di ne kaha ki u will talk like dad smiled pari.

Maan too smiled at her. After that they both became silent. After 10 min they reached pari's house.

Ok pari, take care if u have any problem call me. This is my number told maan.

Bhai come in na.

No pari its ok.

No bhai u have to come. Plz plz told pari n made a puppy face.

Maan smied n told ok.

Thanku bhai. Come.

Maan parked his car n both of them went into the apartment.

Pari rang the bell. Rano came n opened the door.

Pari beta itni jaldi aagaye?

Ha maa mujhe thoda sa sar dard ho raha hain isiliye.

Sar dard?? come in I will give u medicine.

Arey maa yeh sab chodo dont u invite our guest inside told pari.

Guest??

ha maa, he is maan singh khurana.

Namaste aunty.

Namaste beta. Aap andar ayiye na.

Ji aunty.

Maan n pari entered the house. He sat on the couch n admiring the house. The room is decorated with flower vases n different decorative items. Different pics pf geet-pari, geet-rano, geet-her dad and whole family photo.

Beta pani told rano n gave him water.

Thanku aunty.

Bhai what u drink coffee, tea ya juice.

Nahi pari I dont want anything.

Aise kaise bhai, first time u came here. U have to take something.

Ok ok.. coffee??

ok bhai sure.

Maan smiled n when pari was about to go she heard someone.

Mujhe bhi ek coffee.

She turned back n saw her mamaji.

Mamaji aap?? when u came asked pari excitedly.

Bhai when u came asked rano.

I am having some work in delhi so I came here. Aur aap logon ke milne ka mann kar raha tha told rano's bro.

Acha kiya aap yaha aake told rano.

U sit mamaji, I will bring coffee told pari.

Bhai, he is maan told rano.

Hello uncle wished maan.

Hello beta wished mamaji.

They had chit chat for some time. Pari \prepared coffee for all and served them.

They all had coffee.

Pari, aunty I will leave now.

Ok beta. Next time lunch ke liye zaroor aana told rano.

Ok aunty sure.

Sorry bhai di abi tak nahi ayi told pari.

Arey koi baat nahi. I will meet her next time.

Mamaji who is listening to them suddenly got alerted when he heard geet's name which didnt get unnoticed by maan.

Maan bid good bye and left from there.

Maan got into his car, just then geet entered her apartment.

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Maan bid good bye and left from there.

Maan got into his car, just then geet entered her apartment.

When geet entered her house she is shocked to see her mamaji there. After her dad's death he never came to meet them then why today. The words which her father told on his deathbed are ringing in her ears. Her blood is boling inside seeing him that person who killed her father. Fear in her eyes seeing him n anger in her eyes n helplessness that she cant do anything.

Just then mamaji saw her n asked how r u geet beta?

She glared at him angrily n was about to leave from there rano came.

Arey geet, when u came?

Just now maa.

See ur mamaji came after many years dont u talk with him. I know u r very angry on him for coming after a long time.

Nahi maa I am not angry on anyone.

Thank god geet u r not angry said mamaji smirking.

Ok u both talk I will prepare coffee for u geet told rano n left from there.

Arey geet baito na tum kadi kyun ho? Asked mamaji sarcastically.

Just then maan came there as he forgot his mobile there. But he stopped at the entrance when he listened to geet.

Y u came here? Ab kya chahiye aapko?

Arey geet shant ho jao. I just came to meet u dear. How u r n ur mother n sister.

Hum bohot khush hain. Aap jayiye yaha se. chale jayiye.mujhe aapke shakal bhi na dekhna told geet angrily..

Itna gussa geet, main 2-3 din yaha rehna chata hu.

Jab tak aap iss ghar mein ho tab tak main nahi aongi told geet angrily.

Just then rano came there with coffee.

Geet beta coffee.

Maa muje office ka kaam hain, main aur meri friend milkar karna hain. So I ill go to her place.

Lekin geet...

plzzz maa. Let me go.

Thik hain tumari marzi. Aur ha thik se khana ok??

ofho maa sirf ek din ke liye jaa rahi hu saying so geet took her bag n left from there without glaring at mamaji.she just dont want to see his face again so she left from there.

Maan hid aside so that geet not see him. When geet left from there maan called rano.

Aunty..

she is surprised to see him.

Maan beta aap?

Sorry aunty wo main mobile bhool gaya.

Its ok beta. Come.

Maan entered n took his mobile n left from there. Now he is worried about geet where she went without informing anyone.

Maan came down n saw geet nowhere.

Maan (st): kaha chali gayi. Aur wo apne mamaji se aisa kyun baat kar rahi thi. Mujhe geet se baat karna hain. Par wo kaha chali gayi. Ha I will call her.

Maan tried her mobile its ringing her she is not picking her phone. But maan's heard her mobile ringing.

Geet ka mobile yahi kahi baj raha hain. I will search her.

He went inside the parking lot still tryng her mobile. He was moving forward and her cell ring is getting clearer.

Maan spotted her, he was shocked to see her in that condition. She sat in the corner n hugged her knees tight n was crying bitterly.

Maan was hell shocked n worried seeing geet like that. He sat on his knees in front of her n kept his hand on her shoulder.

Geet called maan.

Geet looked at him, her face is covered with tears. She is just looking at him blankly without any emotions.

Geet, geet kya hua?? tum ro kyun rahi ho??

maan said geet n hugged him tight.

Maan wo.. aagaya phir se. he came back.

Who geet?? nothing will happen to u geet. I am there for u.

plzz maan I dont want to stay here. Plz take me somewhere. Plz maan requested geet still hugging him.

Shh geet main hu na. Chalo we will go from here.

Sachi?? u will take me from here na?

Ha geet. Chalo.

Maan stood n made her stand. He placed his hands on her shoulders protectively n made her sit in the car. He put the seat belt on n started the car. The drive was so silent only the sobs of geet are heard. But maan didnt say anything.

Maan (st): let her cry I dont want to say anything now. I dont know whats the matter but she is holding back her pain in her from long time. But today it is coming out. Let her feel light, if I console her now she can never come out of her grief.

After some time geet stopped crying but it is raining heavily outside. Suddenly he car stopped. Geet looked at him n asked what happened maan?

Dont know geet I will see to it. U wait in the car.

But maan its raining heavily told geet.

Dont worry geet, I will just check n come.

Ok fine.

Maan got off the car n opened the bonnet of the car to check whats wrong. Maan dont know whats wrong with the car.

Geet is watching out of the window enjoying the rain with a smile on her face. She is remembering all those moments which she spent in rain with her father.

~~flashback~~

geet is 10 years old. It is raining heavily. Just then geet came from school, kept her school bag aside n she started playing in the rain n dancing streching her arms.

Suddenly her dad shouted from inside.

Geet beta come inside. U will catch cold if u play in rain.

10 years sweet geet didnt listen to him n continued playing. Seeing her not getting into the house. He bought umbrella n came outside.

But he smiled seeing his daughter dancing in the rain. He throwed the umbrella aside n took her n his arms.

Dad u too play with me. Its so nice here told geet in her sweet voice.

Dad n geet started playing, dancing n getting fully drenched in the rain.

Rano came there n was shocked to see them.

Yeh aap dono kya kar rahe ho? Chaliye andar chaliye.

Maa u too come na told geet.

Ha ranoji aap bhi ayiye told dad.

First u two come in. hayee rabba yeh kya kiya aap dono ne. agar sardi hua tho.

Kuch nahi hoga maa.

Mohinder n geet dragged her in the rain. she too started enjoying with them. after sometime she dragged them inside. N dried their hair. Geet n dad r just smiling at her while she is giving angry glare for making her get wet in the rain.

~~flashback end~~

geet had tears in her eyes, she came out of the car n stretched her arms n told miss u dad.

Maan saw her n told geet u go inside u will catch cold.

Geet saw him n smiled with teary eyes. Seeing her tears maan got worried n went to her n asked

geet, r u fine?

Yes maan I am fine. Maan aapko pata hain I wont do friendship so easily with anyone. But aap kitne ache hain. Jab main aapse baat karti hu tho mujhe bohot acha lagta hain. After many I smiled because of u, I talked with u whole night, that was very unusual told geet getting emotional.

Maan is just staring at her seeing her innocence.

Maan u will never leave me na? Asked geet with HOPE in her eyes.

Maan was just lost in her face n was shocked to the hope in her eyes.

Never geet, I will never leave u n go. Its my promise geet.

Thanku so much maan told geet n hugged him tight.

Maan too hugged her tight, because now she need him, his support. From many years she is suffering from loneliness, ofcourse her mom n sister are there but she never expressed her emotions to anyone. But when time comes somewhere, somehow, to somwone they have to express. Today the day has come, unknowingly she started believing him. He came to her life like a small ray of hope.

They broke the hug n maan told geet we need a machanic, now no one will be there I think. We will see for nearby shelter.

Geet just nodded feeling embrassed for hugging him but she didnt felt wrong. She felt safe in his arms as if she belong there.

Maan took some packet from the car n they started walking. After like 30 min walk they found a small hut. They reached there n maan asked andar koi hain

they didnt any response. He slighly opened the door n found no one.

Come geet lets go in.

maan we dont know whose house is this?

Geet its raining heavily n we cant stay outside right??

ok maan told geet uncomfortably.

Geet dont get tensed just for few hours.

ok..

they both went in n saw there is one small bed n a chair there.

They both r fully wet n geet is shivering due to cold. Maan saw that n he gave the packet to her.

Geet these r my clothes change into this.

But maan for u??

no problem geet. I have 2 shirts I will keep them for emergency.

there is a small partition in the room. Geet went there to change.

Here maan too changed into pants n vests.

After some time geet came out wearing his shirt which cae upto her knees. She is pulling dowm to cover but its no use. She is feeling so awkward standing in front of a guy in his shirt.

Maan saw her n was lost in her beauty. Her slender legs, her milky skin, shivering lips n her wet hair, few strands of her hair r falling on her face tickling her senses.

She sat on one corner of the bed trying to cover herself. Maan saw her condition n took the blanket which is there on the bed n covered her.

Geet was surprised with his sudden action n smiled at him.

Now her respect on him increased thousand folds.

Both are feeling so akward so maan decided to lighten the mood.

So geet how is your job going on?

Geet sighed in relief n told good maan. But its so hectic.

Oh.. where did u complete ur studies geet?

5 years back we came here n I completed my studies here only. After that job. I dont want pari to suffer like me.

Thats good geet.

Geet smiled n asked waise why did u choose dance when there r many other options?

Why geet dance karna koi paap hain kya?

Ofcourse not maan. See now a days we see many engineers, architects n many others.

Yes geet even I completed my architecture n worked for a company for 6 months. But I felt bored like morning 9 se leke 7 tak. Routine life I want to try something different n I love dance from childhood, its my dream to become dancer. N now I am here.

Thats really great maan. How did ur family react when u said about ur decision?

I have no family geet. I am an orphan n spent my childhood in orphanage.

I am so sorry maan.

Dont be geet I am happy in my life. I treat people around me as mine.

Being such a great dancer also u r so down to earth.

I am like this only geet. Waise can I ask u something?

Geet smiled n told ha maan. Wow its really miracle the great maan singh khurana is taking permission before talking.

Very funny geet.

Poocho maan..

wo.. wo.. sorry geet actually I heard ur talk with your mamaji.

Geet is shocked to hear this.

Aap? How??

actually I came there to drop pari n forgot my mobile.

oh..

kya hua geet?? why u talked with him like that??

tears formed in her eyes n dont know what to tell. Kya geet apne dard ke baareme bol payegi. The hard truth of her life.

Precap: will geet able to say the truth.

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