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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Mitu !
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wondaful update luvd it
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for pm di
grt part
angad it seems is fallin for mahi...hope he founds out that they r twins and luvs kripa only.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay...so i finally read first two chapters n they are amazing...n i really like how the story is completely diff from ur previous one...i like gauri/ pratham...n mahi the stubborn child...I still have to wait for Angad's entry...i am curious to know how this will play out..n i have feeling that prithvi might fall for kripa?..i dont know yet..I hate my busy schedule this sem. will try to read n comment on other parts soon! :D

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I just finished reading rest of ur ff...n i love the way story is moving...so i just answered my above question...Prithvi likes tanya...but mahi prob. thinks that there could be something more bw Kripa and Prithvi other than friendship. I find Mishti annoying in this ff as well..n Angad...lol i love his character in here...n his thoughts about Indians living in US...lol...i may be guilty of some of those accusations. I love kripa n mahi's bonding n it seems like that shabd n Mahi will hit off soon..oh n in the last part..angad mistakes mahi to be kripa...I wanna see his reaction when he finds out that Kripa has a twin. And one thing that came to my notice was that...Angad wants a girl like Mahi and Shabd wants a girl like Kripa. Really curious to know how their opinions on girls will change..especially since Kripa and Mahi both look a like. plz continue soon n thanks for the pm! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 9
nice part...
Prithvi saw through Mahi...
Angad noticed Mahi thinking shes Kripa...
their dad is so strict...
cont soon Di...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazin update di...
m so glad u continued
cont soon...n thnx 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Deepa, nine2, Jria, Himali, soni4eva, love_kyph, simply.me, monu, Rihanna4all, meghasharma and all other silent readers...! I know it's been long since many of you read this ff. I hope you all caught up...Thanks for your compliments and hope you love the next part as well.
Sorry, don't have time to reply you all individually! But I love to read your comments, and your views about the way the story is progressing..
Lots of Love
Mitu.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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saawan barase, tarase dil kyon naa nikale ghar se dil
barakhaa mein bhee dil pyaasaa hai, ye pyaar naheen to kyaa hai
dekho kaise bekaraar hain bhare baajaar me
yaar yek yaar ke intajaar me
Angad could not stop himself and opened the door to see her sing……..
And stopped in his tracks…..her eyes were closed and a smile on her face, when she concentrated on the music and song……
Her voice floating in the silent house…….Everyone was was listening to her rooted in their spot……Prithvi busy in his guitar...no one noticed his presence in the room…..But Angad's eyes were solely towards Kripa…….her face glowed due to the overhead light…..her soft mouth curving in small smiles…..her beautiful voice flowing through the room…..Her earing touching her neck and shoulders when she moved her head…..She looked so sensational…….
yek mohabbat kaa diwaanaa, dhoondhataa saa fire
koee chaahat kaa najaraanaa, dilarubaa ke liye
chhamachham chale paagal pawan aaye majaa bheege balam
bheege balam fisale kadam barakhaa bahar me
saawan barase, tarase dil kyon naa nikale ghar se dil
barakhaa mein bhee dil pyaasaa hai, ye pyaar naheen to kyaa hai
dekho kaise bekaraar hain bhare baajaar me
yaar yek yaar ke intajaar me
The last line when she completed she smiled and opened her eyes……thoroughly enjoying singing it…..and her eyes met Angad's…..For few seconds they were all alone in the room….Lost in eachother…….till they heard Prithvi continue the song with amusement…..Never had he seen his brother enjoying hindi songs……Kripa looked up startled at Prithvi who was smiling at her and singing the remaining song…..
yek haseenaa idhar dekho kaisee bechain hai
raastepar lage kaise, us ke do nain hai
sach poochheeye to mere yaar, donon ke dil beikhtiyaar
beikhtiyaar, hain pahalee baar, pahalee bahaar me
Kripa blushed at the wordings, with Angad looking at her so closely………Prithvi then indicated her to continue and Kripa started singing the remaining song…….ending it with her eyes down……her face was all flushed….as she could feel Angad staring her all through the song….
saawan barase, tarase dil kyon naa nikale ghar se dil
barakhaa mein bhee dil pyaasaa hai, ye pyaar naheen to kyaa hai
dekho kaise bekaraar hain bhare baajaar me
yaar yek yaar ke intajaar me
Harshini and Aliyah started jumping and cheering them……..
Aliyah: Vow man…..I don't know how you both manage to perform so wonderfully even without practice…….That was one amazing performance……..Kripa looked up at Angad a little awkwardly….and smiled a little……
The door opened and Shabd and Mahi entered the house….
S: Did we miss some thing….he asked when Aliyah was praising them……..
Aliyah: Shabd you have missed the best performance in the history…..she said chuckling…..
S: Hi Angad……Really…..not fare Kripa……We want to hear it too…..
Mahi came forward with a grin….
M: Me too…..and that is when Angad stood there rooted, looking at both……
P: What happened bro…….prithvi asked chuckling……Confused? Meet Mahi Sharma….Kripa's twin…..he said grinning…..
A: I did not know you had a twin….he said looking at Kripa…..that were his first words
M: So now you know…..Mahi Sharma, she said forwarding her hand….grinning…..
A: Angad Khanna…...he said shaking it….smiling at her slowly, but still very much shocked…..He looked at Kripa after a while……Her cheeks were all red and flushed……His sharp eyes could then slowly see slight differences in their features……..Though they were rarely visible, he could see that Kripa looked far more innocent, as well as a little more involved in Indian culture………..Her face reflected her feelings, while Mahi was more like a modern version of her………She looked matured as if she knew what she wanted……..Though both looked confident as well as stubborn, they had different kind of confidence as well as stubbornness in them……..Mahi it seemed like had a little arrogant type of personality, like I know everything kind of, but Kripa's felt slightly understanding nature……… He came out of his trance, when Mahi started saying something………
M: Now back to Kripa….I want to hear you sing too…….Its been so long...she said grinning…..
K: No mahi…..I am tired….chalo ghar chalte hain…..she said, a little flustered…….
M: Don't be a spoilsport, Kripa…..common..….
A: Yes Kripa….I would like to hear it too…..Angad said slowly…..Surprised everyone looked at him including Kripa…..What I am serious…..He said frowning at their immediate response………
Prithvi grinned looking at Angad….Others grinned too….and knew, no one could resist hearing Kripa sing….they chuckled and sat back…
P: Common Kripa….we need to give them a good show…….Aaj mere iss American bro ko Indian music ka swad chakate hain……….he said grinning……..choose the song, he said to Kripa…..kripa nodded slowly and blushed when Angad looked at her…..She looked through the songs to choose one….
H: Kripa….one more romantic version…..please…..Kripa blushed again….and kept looking….
P: Let's sing this one from Ghulam….he said…..grinning….Kripa looked at the song and bit her lips, but slowly nodded….Common start and I will continue……
Kripa smilide and slowly started singing looking down.…….
(Jaadu Hai Tera Hi Jaadu, Jo Mere Dil Pe Chhane Laga) - 2
Deewaane Mere Yeh Toh Bata Kya Kiya Tune, Mitha Sa Dard Hone Laga
Prithvi grinned and sang the next lines……
(Yeh Kya Huwa, Pehle Na Aisa Hota Tha, Main Hoon Kahaan Main Jaanu Na) - 2
Koi Mujhe Itana Bata De, Ghar Ka Mere Mujhko Pata De
Maine Toh Yeh Jaana Na, Hota Hai Kya Intzaar
Mera Dil Kyun Maane Na, Mujhko Toh Ho Gaya Hai Pyaar
Kripa got up and continued looking other side, not wanting to face Angad…..
(Main Chain Se Pehle Raaton Ko Soti Thi, Tune Meri Nindein Luti) - 2
Yeh Rog Kya Tune Lagaaya, Deewaanapan Kaisa Jagaaya
Prithvi smiled and continued next thouroughly enjoying…
Jaadu Hai Tera Hi Jaadu, Jo Mere Dil Pe Chhane Laga
O Jaana Meri Yeh Toh Bata Kya Kiya Tune, Mitha Sa Dard Hone Laga
Kripa laughed a little at his enthusiasm and continued…….They were both absorbed in the music to noctice any one……..
(Yeh Kya Huwa, Pehle Na Aisa Hota Tha, Main Hoon Kahaan Main Jaanu Na) - (2)
Koi Mujhe Itana Bata De, Ghar Ka Mere Mujhko Pata De
Prithvi was good with his guitar and Kripa tapped her leg at the music looking at the his hands, playing the instrument and continued…….
Jaaneman O Jaaneja Kya Hai Iraada Bata
Chhune De In Honton Ko Honton Se Mere Jara……she blushed looking down…
Prithvi chuckled looking at her red cheeks….
(Kya Khoob Hai Main Bhi Kaisa Deewaana Tha, Kyun Ishq Se Anjaana Tha) - 2
Paagal Mujhe Tune Banaaya, Chaahat Hai Kya Mujhko Bataaya
Kripa smiled and continued as he had started understanding her so nicely…
(Jaadu Hai Tera Hi Jaadu, Jo Mere Dil Pe Chhane Laga) – 2
Deewaane Mere Yeh Toh Bata Kya Kiya Tune, Mitha Sa Dard Hone Laga
Prithvi continued……
(Yeh Kya Huwa, Pehle Na Aisa Hota Tha, Main Hoon Kahaan Main Jaanu Na) - 2
Koi Mujhe Itana Bata De, Ghar Ka Mere Mujhko Pata De……..
Kripa kept looking down every so often, blushing while Angad stared at her without blinking memorized by her voice…….
There was a loud cheer around the room…..Mahi grinned and got up jumping and hugged Kripa…..
M: Vow I can't believe it……Kripa….I had no idea that you are so amazing….Kripa chuckled……
K: In teen salon mein tum hardly 3-4 baar ghar ayi ho, who bhi dun pandhra dinon ke liye…..tumhe pata kaise hoga? She said chuckling…...Mahi made faces at her and they both chuckled….
H: Mahi….Tum ne inki 15th August ki performance miss kar di….Dekhna chahiye tha…….It was just suberb….people were going crazy on that day……she said laughing…..
S: Really Kripa, you should start stage shows…..you are beautiful and your voice is amazing as well…..and you can dance……
Angad regreted the day, he had left the program…..he could have seen it too….only if…but he sighed and got up……No way, not for all 4 hours, there was no way he could have gone through that torture……….He thought frowning……..He looked at the time……..He had flight in 3 hours and needed to rush…..
Kripa's eyes met his, she smiled as, he gave her thumbs up sign and went off the room unnoticed by others, when everyone was talking….
Kripa and Mahi said bye and walked towards their home after few minutes…….
M: Miss. Kripa Sharma…..I did not know you had so many admirers….she said grinning….Josh, Shabd, Prithvi….and not to mention the one eyeing you…..Angad Khanna……ha ha…..
K: Mahi….enough….Josh ek flirt hai…..Shabd sirf yahan ata hai, kyun ki woh Prithvi ka friend hai, Prithvi ki already girl friend hai, aur Angad, woh pehli bar humara gana sunane aya hai……..he never comes with all of us…..Stays away from temple, as far as I know….that's it…..we just met a couple of times….so, don't get all your hopes up….she said smiling sweetly at her…..
Mahi made faces at her and went in……
Surya was sitting there on the table…..with Gayatri, drinking his tea……Kripa smiled as soon as she saw him…..He smiled at her and asked her about her day….after a while he looked at Mahi….
S: Mahi….baitho….he said sternly….Kripa looked at them frowning…..She looked at Gayatri asking what the matter was….Gayatri kept a hand on her lips and told her to stay quite…..So, tell me…..what was so important, that you had to go so urgently to university….
Mahi without a hesitation, explained to him what she wanted to do…..about the exam for the scholarship…..etc…..
Surya looked through the papers and talked to her for a while…..He was still angry on her stubbornness…..but Gayatri had calmed him down and told him to listen to her and see what she wants….and think over it…..Surya agreed and was trying to look through it…..
Finally, once pratham came home, and discussing this with him, he gave permission to give the scholarship exam…..But told her that, he would never again tolerate any type of carelessness on her part….Mahi agreed a little reluctantly……saying she will take care that it does not happen…..
She sighed and went to her room and closed her eyes….God why did her parents behave as if she was a baby……for Gods sake they should know, that she could take care of her self…..she shook her head and slowly fell asleep soon enough…
Kripa came and saw Mahi sleeping peacefully….She must have been tired…..she thought with a smile….She covered her up and switched off the light closing the door lightly…..Mahi smiled snuggling in the bed, seeing Kripa going out….and fell asleep again….
Kripa on the other side, kept thinking about Angad….he had stared and stared at her all the time she was singing…..She should get annoyed….but for some reason, she wasn't……she felt the attraction between them strongly and was struggling hard not to think about it…..it was so weird that they had hardly met 3-4 times….she sighed and closed her eyes and fell asleep too….
Days went by…..Mahi met Shabd couple of times and got the information she needed, including getting students
visa, etc….she started studying for her exam which was in 3 days….Kripa became busy in classes….Thankfully she did not meet Angad from last 4-5 days and came to know about his business trip from Prithvi later…..
Pratham took Mahi to her exam and Mahi passd with flying colors…….Kripa was happy about it and she hugged her and said so……
It was evening and she, Mahi and Prithvi were going to Josh's house, as his mom had called them all for Aliyah's birthday…….
M: Kripa…..I am tired…….Please…….tum jao…….mein aaram karna chahti hun……….
K: Mahi chalo na…….Aunty ne tumhe bhi le ane ke liye kaha…
M: Kripa…..tumhe pata hai na ki mein kitna bor ho jati hun aise functions mein…..Please……
K: Ok……chal phir mein nikalti hun…….Sure you don't want to come?
M: Haan….tum jao…..Kripa sighed and said bye, when she heard Prithvi's car…..
They reached Josh's house……Kripa was surprised that there were hardly 15-20 friends…….. Aliyah had said
that she wanted to invite all her friends for the party, and she knew that she had many……..and Josh was so wealthy, so expected some thing big…….But, it felt good, without loud music and everything……..
Josh came to her, as soon as he saw her…….
J: Hi Miss. Beautiful……..!! He said grinning…….Kripa blushed a little……..So, where is your twin…..Miss……?He asked a little confused…….
Kripa chuckled, when Angad came from behind and said………
A: Kripa……..Josh raised his eyebrow and Angad smiled and looked at Kripa……Miss. Kripa…..he said slowly……….Kripa smiled and blushed, looking down, surprised that he could make out the difference, even though Josh and she had met many times……..
J: And how do you know? He asked frowning…..Angad shrugged smirking and looked at Kripa…….Kripa? He asked looking at Kripa…….and she nodded……..He grinned……Care for a dance……? Kripa shook her head………
P: Yaar tu phir se chalu ho gaya…….Prithvi said coming in with a frown……Usse kabhi to akela chod de……..
J: Kya karun Prithvi…….hay ye ada, ye awaj aur ye khubsurat chehra…….Dil hai ki manta nahi…….he said grinning…….Kripa laughed at him, and went to Aliyah leaving the three at the door………Josh kept looking at her with a sigh and Prithvi tapped on his shoulder…….Josh frowned and looked at him……..
P: Uske papa ko pata chala na ki tu uspar line mar raha hai to ghar se nikalna bandh kar denge uska…….he said frowning……..
J: For your information, my intentions are quite honorable…….Isiliye mummy ne isse party pe bulaya hai…….Prithvi looked at him wide eyed……….And josh started chuckling…….. Cool down yaar…..Are pehle kudi to milne de, phir ma ko bhi manaunga…….
P: Woh hi kyun……Mahi bhi to hai……..
J: Nope……Pehli baar jisse dekha…..bas dil usika ho gaya…..bhagwan deta hai to chaappar phad ke deta hai……Ek ki jagah do de di…….Mere sath kisi aur ka bhi naseeb khulne wala hai…….Josh grinned putting a hand on Angad's shoulder……
Angad frowned at Josh…..
A: Man…..you should concentrate on your career at this point, rather than girls…..he said, not liking the way
Josh kept staring at Kripa……….
J: Are Angad yaar……job aur career to chalte rehte hain…….par aisi kudiyan nahi milti…….haath se nikal gayi na sari umr pachtana padega….…he said grinning and leaving him……..Prithvi just shook his head and followed him, but Angad frowned at Josh, hating it that he was persuing Kripa so much……He looked up and saw him grinning at her and she chuckling at some thing he said……..Her eyes then met his and she looked away for a second……..He shook his head, thinking why he was thinking about all this and then went to take a drink for himself………Rather than telling Josh, it was he who should concentrate on the Job and career…..He thought frowning…….
Al: Kripa ek gana suna na…….she said smiling……..
K: Allu, mujhe dekhte hi gana kyun yaad ata hai tumhe………she said chuckling…….whenever they met, they would be behind her to sing……..
Al: Jadu hai, tera hi jadu…….she started singing with a grin……and Kripa started laughing at her…..Angad
looked around, when he heard her laughter………She looked so beautiful, carefree, when she laughed……..he thought drinking and staring at her……
P: Aliyah….This is not fare……..Har saal to mujhe kehti ho…..aur aab…..he said frowning at her…..
J: Are tu nahi samjhega…….Kala ko aur khubsurti ko parakhna padta hai…..He said looking at Kripa….
K: Mr. Josh….can you please stop…….she said sweetly…..
J: Yes Maam…..he said bowing and grinning at her…….Kripa chuckled….
P: Tu nahi sudhrega...he said shaking his head…….
Al: Thik hai Prithvi….chalo sath mein gao…..and please Kripa mana mat karo…..she said making faces……Kripa slowly nodded…..her eyes constantly looking at Angad, while he was busy drinking……..
J: Abe Angad, yahan aa na……what are you doing there man……all alone……he said frowning and going to him, when he found Kripa looking at him…..Shabd joined them too at that very moment.………He looked at Kripa and then looked around…….He was not sure who she was Kripa or Mahi…..but then thought about what Kripa had said……She wore traditional more….so may be Kripa…..
S: Hey Aliyah…….Happy Birthday……..he said hugging her and giving her the gift……..
Al: Thanks Shabd…...
S: Kripa…..Kripa looked up and smiled and he sighed……..Mahi nahi ayi….?
K: Nahi, uska aaj exam tha, aur thak gayi thi…..to nahi ayi…..
S: kaisa hua exam……..
K: Bahot acha tha……she might join the college soon…….
S: Are wah…..yeh to achi baat hai…..mein ne bhi wahi college join kiya hai….Kripa looked up surprised…..Mahi ne bataya nahi? I am joining there for MBA and then planning to continue Phd Program after that…….
K: Vow…..congrats……Phd ke liye to kafi saal lagte hain na………
S: Thanks…..Haan…..waise pehle Masters finish karlun, phir aram se karunga Phd…..It might take around 4 years after MBA…….Let's see….Tumhare kya plans hai?
Kripa shrugged…..
K: Abhi to classes mein busy hun…….Singing and dance classes mein bahot bache enroll hue hain…..To mein soch rahi thi, ki aur badh gaye, to koi jagah rent karlun…..She said smiling…..
S: Not a bad idea…..waise bhi mandir tumhare ghar se dur hai…….
Al: Kripa……….agar tum donon ki career ki batein ho gayi to thoda gana vana ho jaye……This party is proving
to be a huge bore…….I should have listened to Josh and given a party in club or some thing…..she said frowing…….
P: Are Aliyah………itna ghussa kyun ho rahi ho…..Chal tera Guitar le aa…..Jaldi…….He said looking at the door…….There was still no sign of Tanya…..he sighed……
Prithvi then grinned and started the song………Taking Aliyah in his arms and started dancing with her…Aliyah laughed and followed him……….Harshini too pulled Shabd and the 3 other couples, who were Aliyah's friends too grinned and joined them..……Angad kept looking at Kripa who was smiling shyly standing a little far…………
Hey hey oh ho ho ho ho
Hmmm hmmm la la la la la
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Tu bhi sun bekhabar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Aayi hai chaandni mujhse kehne yehi
Aayi hai chaandni mujhse kehne yehi
Meri gali mere ghar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Tu bhi sun bekhabar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
la la la la la la la
Kya kahoon kya pata baat kya ho gayi
Dillagi ye mere saath kya ho gayi hai
Ek ishaara hai ye
Dil pukaara hai ye
Ek ishaara hai ye
Dil pukaara hai ye
Isse chura na nazar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Prithvi then indicated Kripa to continue and Josh went to Kripa and gave her his hand…..she smiled shyly and took it and went with him and started dancing along…….
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Tu bhi sun bekhabar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Hey hey ah ha ha ha aa
She felt too shy to look at him, so kept looking down while singing……..Her eyes kept looking at Angad once in a while…….
Hai kaun kya khabar koi to hai magar
Sapnon mein hai kahin aata nahin nazar
Main yahaan vo vahaan
Aa rahi phir yahaan
Main yahaan vo vahaan
Aa rahi phir yahaan
Aawaaz ksiki magar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Prithvi continued with a grin……pulling Tanya with him, as he saw her coming in………..She laughed and kept her head on his shoulder……..Kripa was looking at him, when she felt Josh's arm loosen and she looked up to find, Angad slipping his hands around her waist, while Josh bowed at her with a wink and held her sister and started dancing with her…..Kripa looked up at Angad, who was holding her in his arms……….Her breathe caught, she stared at him……….
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Tu bhi sun bekhabar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
la la la la la la la
Kripa continued the song, when Prithvi grinned and tapped her shoulder…….She came out of trance and looked down and started singing……….
Jispe hum mar mite usko pata bhi nahin
Oh ho jispe hum mar mite usko pata bhi nahin
Kya gila hum karein vo bewafa bhi nahin
Humne jo sun liya usne kaha bhi nahin
Kehde zara soch kar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Hey hey ah ha ha ha aa
la la la la la la la
She shyly looked down, as Angad held her waist and swayed with the music…………Angad was just captivated by her beauty, her voice and the grace with which she was swaying with him to the song, she was singing…….He could not help but admire her beauty……..And her voice was like music……He who, had never liked anything but English songs, was enjoying this too much for his own liking………
Chaand ne kucch kaha raat ne kuchh suna
Tu bhi sun bekhabar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar kar
Aayi hai chaandni mujhse kehne yehi
Aayi hai chaandni mujhse kehne yehi
Meri gali mere ghar pyaar kar
Oh ho ho pyaar ka
Hey hey la la la la la
Ho ho hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm
Pyaar kar
Ho ho ho pyaar kar
Pyaar kar
Ho ho ho pyaar kar
As soon as the song was over……..all of them cheered and thanked Prithvi and Kripa……Kripa shyly mumbled thanks and tried to walk away, but Angad's hand were still around hers……..She looked up hoping he would loosen up and he slowly left her, she smiled at him uncertainly and then went off to where Aliyah was all ready to cut the cake……..Angad kept looking at her…..He did not know why he did what he did, but he had not liked the fact that she was dancing with Josh……..He could not see her with any one else, though he was not ready to date any one just yet, seriously…….He was confused……..He knew he was attracted, but also knew that his career was more important to him……..And frankly speaking, she was not the type of girl, he would want as a life partner...And further, he had to achieve what he had planned, and this would be a distraction……..But still he couldn'tt help himself and kept staring at Kripa once in a while.……
They all had some Italian food prepared by Josh's mom and then after talking for some time, started leaving………..
P: Kripa, tum thodi der baitho….mein Tanya ko chod ata hun, phir jate hain…..Kripa smiled and nodded……..
A: If you don't mind, you can come with me……….Angad said coming near them…….
P: Sure? Prithvi asked looking at him hopefully………
A: Agar Kripa ko koi problem nahi ho to……..he asked looking at her…….
Kripa nodded……..what else could she say…….She could see Prithvi's eagerness to be with Tanya…….Though, she was a little stunned dancing in Angad's arms……..a little flustered……
A: Chalein? He asked slowly…..
P: Bye Bro….Thanks…….he said grinning…….Bye Kripa……Saturday milte hain………he said grinning…….Kripa nodded….
J: Bye beautiful….Josh came with a grin, as they started leaving…..Aliyah too came with him to see her off…….
K: Bye Josh….Thanks for inviting me……..
J: Pleasure is all mine……..Kripa chuckled looking at him and he grinned……Always a big flirt, she thought at his words…..
K: Bye Aliyah…..Have a nice day…..she said to Aliyah…….
Al: Bye….
Angad waved at them both and slowly walked out with Kripa……..No one spoke a word……..Kripa consciously, kept pulling her duppatta up……Angad took her near his car and opened the door for her…..She mumbled a thanks, blushing for the way he opened the car for her……And sat inside…….Angad too came to his side and sat and started the car………He looked at Kripa, who was busy looking out and sighed and pulled out…….
Angad wanted to talk to her, but he did not find any topic common to talk about…….She was in music,which he did not know any thing about……Was full Indian…..and he the exact opposite…….While Kripa, she felt too shy to even look at him, after today's closeness…..The way which Angad kept staring at her…..She had been ok with Josh, Shabd and Prithvi, but whenever Angad came before her, she could not speak a word…….She did not know why she felt so conscious about him today……….The car stopped and she looked at him confused…….
Angad chuckled a little…..
A: Tumhara ghar aa gaya……he said smiling……..Kripa looked out and bit her lips…….she looked at him and smiled and slowly opened the door…….Once outside, she bent and thanked him and slowly walked up the steps……….Angad drove off with a sigh……
Edited by vamita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay me 1st
simply amazin update totally luvd it
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww..it was lovely...So both AK are being attracted towards eachother...nice...i really thought that they would have convo in the car..bt Alas..i guess its too early..n i love it how Angad can tell difference bw Mahi n Kripa...thanks for pm n plz continue soon! :)

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