IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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MAGDALENE MARIE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

hey this a really great story please do update it

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#882

This story is so intriguing...
Do update it soon.

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piyaarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

read the very 1st chapter again...
really sad for khushi's pain...
and why did payal asked her to stay back there and not to trouble arnav..
i have forgotten this story...
so starting it all over again...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#884

read chapter 2...
so there was NK too...
what was the story that lead to khushi's destruction...
whare is shyaam ?? whats his role here..??

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#885

read chapter 3 too..
shyaam's thoughts were up to the mark...
the way shyaam feels looks so damn real...

so he will come back.. and this time he's gonna hurt arnav to get khushi...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#886

chapter 4 was filled with the marriage...
atleast during the marriage he did not behave the way he behaved in the show..

by the ways the story was really going on welll... why did you stop writing this..??
please do think of completing it...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#887

chapter 5..
uh oh.. i guess it was shyaam who set her on fire... i mean tried to kill her...
nk left for australia just like that??? without even reasoning anything to khushi

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#888

chapter 6 was painfull for everyone except shyaam...
really felt bad for her..

how come shyaam got so much guts to spit all these rubbish in front of arnav...
that is why khushi was so much scared of arnav and was in a way loathing it that she fell in love with him...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#889

chapter 7 was again a heart wrenching chapter...

felt so bad here...
arnav is so much into self loathing...

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#890

for the next chapter i feel these are the best thoughts...

Originally posted by: Rabba-Ve-Delena
Hiru, honestly, I think you're the best at doing this, it never ceases to amaze me how beautifully you capture Arnav and Khushi thoughts individually - it's a talent and it's impressive, cannot wait to see what Jha will be up to!