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smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mommamia
Smita.. what can I tell yea which has not been told.. guess what.. you made my day and entire week. So good it was.. Actually it will happen I think. As I always tell, why the hell CVs dont steal your ideas. Their TRP will soar to roof top.

Love u for ur encouraging words. It is such a pleasure to write for u! Thank u for reading my ramblings.😉

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

just perfect ending.. and perfect touch:

"Maaa...Get a brain, Anju. And a new set of eyes while you are at it", said Laxmi.

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lexaxel
That was lovely...I cd imagine every detail as I read😊.

So glad u enjoyed reading it!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Nice one Smita..!

The ending was cute..! (Arnav and Ksuhi's part in the bedroom..)

And the final touch, Lakmi..!🤣.. A much needed advice to Anjali!!

Thanks for the PM😊

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dnyd

@dnyd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

i loved loved the part where he pulled the pins out of her hair and scattered the flowers on his bed. So suhag raat typish. But the actual thought that came to my mind as I read that was how he would later in the night think of her as he was lying on his bed and took the scent of those flowers in. Its so true that when you love that person you love to take in their smell. I do that often with my husbands shirts. Even after 9 years of marriage love the smell lingering on to his clothes at times.

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: dnyd
i loved loved the part where he pulled the pins out of her hair and scattered the flowers on his bed. So suhag raat typish. But the actual thought that came to my mind as I read that was how he would later in the night think of her as he was lying on his bed and took the scent of those flowers in. Its so true that when you love that person you love to take in their smell. I do that often with my husbands shirts. Even after 9 years of marriage love the smell lingering on to his clothes at times.

Sooo true! His bed, the wardrobe, the clothes, his skin, his soul etc will carry the scent.😉 She too is very fond of breathing him in.😆

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Nigtangle

@rushshri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Honey u forget me again. I was in d bathroom where she was heading initially. I wish I wud wore payal n jasmine flowers.

Nxt time I won't forget. N it I need ne help i'll ask lakshmi.

I lost my gadhu once again. 😭

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: rushshri
Honey u forget me again. I was in d bathroom where she was heading initially. I wish I wud wore payal n jasmine flowers.

Nxt time I won't forget. N it I need ne help i'll ask lakshmi.

I lost my gadhu once again. 😭

Better luck next time, Rashmi! Thanx for reading it!