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lagta hai yaha sab bahot time se wait kar rahe hai...chalo sabbar ka fhall meetha hi hoga..i hope we get wonderful update
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piya yaar its going to be 8 and still u stuck with finishing the update common yaar
our little hearts dont have strength now to have patience update soon na
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Intehaaa
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lagta hai yaha sab bahot time se wait kar rahe hai...chalo sabbar ka fhall meetha hi hoga..i hope we get wonderful update..
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waiting piya
kahan ho tum kahan ho tum update mein tere yahan hum tum
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start the countdown guys colr changes karke abhi post kar rahi hoon
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Originally posted by: piya-

start the countdown guys colr changes karke abhi post kar rahi hoon



tere mzubaan mein ghee chinne yaar
aab jaldi se update de

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Posted: 13 years ago
I am extremely sorry for the delay guys. Well this part has the SUHAAGRAAT of Maaneet trust me friends I tried my level best I am really sorry if I could not live upto ur expectations
Love-Piya
PART 67
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Meera: Chal Geet gulab jamun le aur Maan jiju ko khilakar dhikha [Common Geet take the Gulabjamun and make Maan jiju eat it]

Geet had no option she took one gulab jamun with the help of her teeth and started walking towards Maan

Meera: Ek minute Geet teri aakhein toh bannd kardu [One minute Geet first let me blindfold u]

Geet: Iski kya zarurat hai? [What's the need of all this?]

Meera: Are Geet yahi toh game hai agar teri aakhein khuli rahengi tab tu bade aasani se Maan jiju ko jaakar ye khiladegi par ab chuki teri aakhein bannd hai issliye tujhe khud Maan jiju ko dhundkar unhe ye khilana hoga [Geet this is the actual game if ur eyes would remain open then it would be very easy for u to go and put this sweet in Maan's mouth but now since ur eyes r closed the task would be a little difficult as u need to search Maan first]

Meera took Geet away from Maan

Meera: Achhe se dekh le waha khade hai jijaji ab main teri aakhon mein patti band rahi hoon tujhe bus Maan jiju k paas jaana hai aur apna dare pura karna hai [Have a proper look Geet Maan jijaji is standing over there now I am going to blindfold u after this is done u simply need to go to Maan jiju and complete ur dare]

Geet was really nervous but she had no other option

Geet started walking towards Maan. Yash, Meera Adi and the rest of the gang were encouraging her

Maan was simply standing in his place and was admiring his innocent wife

Geet: (thinking) Babaji Maan waise bhi shararat k mood mein hai aur upar se ye dare ne toh meri aur bhi musibat bada di hai pls Babaji inn sabke saamne mujhse kuch galat shalat na ho jaaye aap samaj rahe ho na main kya kehne ki koshish kar rahi hoon [Babaji Maan is already in a mischievous mood and on top of this the dare has increased my problems pls Babaji bless me so that I won't do any embarrassing thing in front of others u r understanding na what I mean]

Maan: (thinking) Mishty apne babaji se laakh madat maang lo par ab tum mujhse bachkar kaha jaayogi main tumhe kiss toh karke hi rahunga wo bhi sabke saamne [Mishty ur Babaji won't be helping u today as u won't be able to run away from me so easily I am going to kiss u right now and that too in front of each one of them]

Geet continued walking she wanted to finish this game as soon as possible so she started taking quick steps in this process she collided with a chair that was kept nearby

She was about to fall when Maan reacted quickly and gave her the protection of his strong arms

They were in such a position that none of the other people present there could make out what was going on between the two they could only see that Maan was protecting Geet from falling

Maan took advantage of this situation and kissed Geet in the pretext of eating the gulab jamun

Before Geet could realize what had taken place Maan scooped her in his arms and placed her on a chair

All his actions were so fast that only Maan and Geet knew that they had kissed each other in front of so many people

Maan removed the blindfold of Geet and without looking at Geet he started talking to Meera

Maan: Meera ye kaisa dare tha agar meri Geet ko chot lag jaati toh? [What type of dare is this Meera who would have been responsible if Geet would have been hurt?]

Meera: I am sorry Maan

Maan: Chalo ab bahut ho gaya ab aur koi games nahi Geet ko kamre mein lejau wo thak chuki hogi [Now no more games Geet must be tired take her to the room let her take some rest]

Maan told this in such a dominating tone that no one could oppose him

The girls started taking Geet to the room

Geet turned around and looked at Maan

Maan moved his thumb on his lips and winked at Geet

Geet could not meet his gaze; she immediately turned her face and started walking towards the room

There was a romantic feel in the breeze as soon as Geet entered their room. The whole room was decorated beautifully with roses. Aromatic candles were spreading the fragrance of their love. There was something that was hanging on the roof Geet could not make out what exactly it was as the thing was completely covered with a beautiful cloth

After the teasing session the girls left Geet alone she was now waiting for Maan. The veil covered half of her face; only her nose ring and her beautiful rosy lips were visible. There was a strange anticipation which was making her nervous. She was unable to hear any sound it was only then that she recollected Maan's words that Maan's room no no their room was now soundproof. As reality dawned into her; her heart started thudding rapidly

She was experiencing a beautiful blend of happiness, nervousness and excitement at this particular moment

Geet's attention got diverted as she heard the torrents of rain singing a melodious song reminding her of their first kiss. Rain had brought them close for the first time and today it was dancing and racing with the breeze celebrating the union of their love. The sky was showering pearls of water which were giving her the message that today both of u would be one and now no one can separate the two of u. She felt shy as she heard this message; her nervousness was increasing and only Maan could calm her down. It was not the first time that both of them would feel each other but yet today was a different day it was their wedding night; a night which she would remember throughout her life. After few minutes Geet could feel Maan's fragrance in the air yes he had entered the room. She wanted to stay calm but her anklets, her bangles were making things difficult for her; her heart was heaving heavily as she couldn't understand Maan's intentions he was already in the room but why was he still maintaining a distance. She felt like lifting her veil but she did not go ahead with this thought as she knew that only Maan had this authority she couldn't deny him this happiness; as Geet was busy thinking about Maan's intentions she felt beautiful rose petals kissing her and touching her lovingly. The cloth that was hanging on the roof was full of rose petals and the first thing that Maan had done after entering the room was to shower his wife with them. Geet curled her toes as she realized what Maan had done he always expressed his love in unique ways.

One petal remained on her lips, as Maan saw this he slowly started reducing the distance. Geet's heart skipped a beat as she felt his weight on the bed. Maan whispered her name huskily and touched her chin with his thumb. Geet closed her eyes immediately Maan's touch always soothed her but today it was burning her from within yes her heart was burning with desire.

She thought that Maan might remove the petal from her lips but instead she found him lifting her veil. Geet's eyes were still shut Maan was thanking the rose petal as it was giving a new definition to her beauty. Oh she looked so pure and adorable he wished to capture this moment permanently. He knew she was nervous he wanted to remove all her insecurities he lifted her face by holding her chin and moved his lips very close to hers she drank her saliva as she could feel his warm breath on her lips

Maan: I love u Geet

This was all that was required to remove her fears she immediately opened her eyes and got drowned in the ocean of love that Maan's eyes were echoing

Maan took the petal in between his lips and brushed his lips with hers

Maan: I love u Geet

These 3 simple words were drugging Geet with passion and a strong desire to claim him forever by submitting herself completely to his love. She hugged him tight as she felt she will die with this feeling

Geet: Aaj mujhe kuch iss tarah apnalijiye Maan k aapki khusboo humesha k liye mere ruh mein bus jaaye [Make me yours in such a way that your fragrance gets embedded permanently in my soul]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XuJ-T7Unytc

MUSIC

Maan moved her chunri with his finger and placed a soft loving kiss on her neck she moaned Maan's name as excitement started flooding through her.

Aa'aa'aa'

Lost in a sea of desires she innocently pressed her softness on his hard chest evoking the passion in him. Geet was experiencing a burning sensation on her back as Maan's hand started roaming shamelessly on it.

MUSIC

In the pretext of revealing her from the burden of her chunri Maan's fingers started moving in a sideway pattern from her shoulder to a part of her curve where he purposely allowed his fingers to linger for a longer duration of time.

Suraj hua madham chand jalne laga Aasman ye hai kyun pigalne laga

Geet felt weird tremors running down her thighs due to this act of Maan. His fingers were now relishing her curvy waist as Maan was successful in removing her chunri completely. Maan lovingly broke the hug and kissed the magical eyes of Geet. Geet opened her eyes and Maan could see emotions oozing out from them which were requesting him to complete her incomplete form with his love.

Music

He caressed her face with utmost love and moved his attention to her forehead.

Suraj hua madham chand jalne laga Aasman ye hai kyun pigalne laga

Geet rested her trembling hand on his shoulder as Maan kissed the entire length of her maang while removing her maangtikka. Maan caressed her soft cheek with his rough one as his lips made way to her ear giving her gentle exploratory kisses throughout the path.

Main thehra raha zameen chalne lagi

Geet dug her nails into his shoulder as Maan's tongue started playing with her earlobe. He squeezed her belly and bit her ear as he removed her earring.

Dhadka ye dil saas thamne lagi

His lips followed the same route backwards as he went on to remove the other earring from Geet's ear.

Oh kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

He traced her neckline with his teeth and went on removing her necklace. Every touch of Maan was sending shivers throughout Geet's body.

Sajna kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

Maan buried his head deep in her neck and started caressing her back passionately as he placed her gently on the bed.

Oh..oh oh'aa aa aa aa

Geet's hand slid beneath his sherwani as she too started exploring his back with her hands. Geet's simple touch was igniting the wild desires of Maan.

Suraj hua madham chand jalne laga Aasman ye hai kyun pigalne laga

He nuzzled his nose on the nape of her neck and very soon his nose got replaced with his tongue as he started licking the entire length of her neck tasting every part of her sweetness.

Main thehri raha zameen chalne lagi

Geet scratched his back as Maan marked her neck with his love. He got up a little to see the angelic face of his wife he rubbed his nose with Geet's nose and blew air on her face with his mouth giving her a tickling sensation.

Dhadka ye dil saas thamne lagi

Geet clutched his hair and pulled him closer she wanted him to claim her lips.

Haan kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

Maan succumbed to her demands and the very next moment their lips were glued to each other giving rise to a soul searing kiss.

Sajna kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

Their tongues were engaged in a battle of love due to which their saliva was getting intermingled with each other, there was so much passion in this one kiss of theirs that none of them felt like breaking it both of them kept on pulling each other more close as their wants went on increasing.

Music

Without breaking the kiss Maan rolled Geet on the other side of the bed after some time they parted due to lack of air.

Oh oh oh oh oh '

They were panting profusely when all of a sudden Geet's gaze moved on to his lips she felt shy as she saw traces of her lipstick on his lips she immediately hid her face in the pillow but while doing so she had given him access to her sexy back as her back was now facing Maan.

Music

Maan moved her locks that were curtaining her back and adjusted himself properly on top of her. He removed his shervani and his vest and laid on Geet's back.

Lalala lalala lala lala

An electric current passed through her entire body as Geet did not anticipate this action of Maan.

Music

Maan entangled his fingers with hers and started exploring every inch of her back in detail.

Hai khoobsurat ye pal sabkuch raha hai badal sapne haqeekat mein jo dhal rahe hai

His tongue started playing with the dori of her choli. He lifted Geet slightly by pulling her dori with his teeth and this slight movement of Geet was enough for Maan to place his other hand beneath her bre**t.

Kya sadiyon se purana hai rishta ye humara k jis tarah tumse hum mil rahe hai

Sweet notings made way through Geet's lips as she was getting drowned in a world of pleasure. Maan was kneading her curves continuously as his teeth went on undoing the dori of her choli. Maan caressed her back with his upper half and started giving open mouth wet kisses to Geet.

Yuhi rahe har dum pyar ka mausam yuhi milo humse tum janam janam

Geet bit the pillow as Maan pinched her ni***e while tasting the length of her spine. Maan removed his hand from her bre**t and with one quick movement he rolled her in such a way that Geet was now on top of Maan.

Hmm'Main thehra raha zameen chalne lagi

This was the first time that Geet had seen him without his vest she got completely lost in him. Her lips automatically started marking his face with her love. She kissed him madly all over his face as raw passion started dominating her senses.

Lala laala

As Geet was busy claiming him Maan delicately slipped the choli from her shoulder exposing her from the front, the only hindrance that was left was her bra.

Dhadka ye dil saas thamne lagi

Geet went on kissing his chest claiming it permanently she was so much lost in her passion that she did not recognize the burning desire in Maan's eyes.

Oh kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai sajna kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

Her hanging curves were intoxicating Maan he was not satisfied by tasting them with his eyes he wanted to relish the lusciousness of her curves with his lips.

Oh oh oh oh

Geet started moving downwards as she continued kissing Maan but this action of hers was taking the view of her beautiful feminine part away from Maan.

Music

Maan squeezed her waist and pulled Geet back. She saw the wild urge in his eyes and realized that Maan was busy admiring her soft milky white bre**ts as if they were his most precious possession.

Aa aa aa ..aa

She adjusted herself properly and gave him the permission to claim them forever. She held his hair in between her fingers tightly expressing her desire. Maan's fingers made way to her bra.

Music

Geet was expecting him to remove it but to her surprise Maan adjusted her hook to the extreme end which forced her curves to kiss each other.

Tere hi rang se yun main toh rangi hoon sanam'

Her valley was now clearly visible to him he placed his tongue at the meeting point of her curves and started moving his tongue in different patterns taking Geet to a blissful journey. Maan bit the soft flesh of her cleavage aggressively which made Geet to gasp in pain.

Paake tujhe khud se hi kho rahi hoon sanam

She matched his passion by giving him scratch marks all over the skin wherever her hands could reach. Maan removed her bra from one of her curves with the help of his teeth Geet pulled him closer as she was not getting enough of him. Maan took her ni***e in between his teeth and rolled his tongue in a circular fashion trying to taste every inch of her feminine bud. Geet let out a load moan as Maan was playing havoc with her senses.

O maahiya ve tere ishq mein

Unable to resist his temptation for any longer Maan unhooked her bra in one go and threw it somewhere on the floor. Maan cupped her bre**ts and started drugging Geet completely as he sucked her curves together trying to swallow most of them within the territory of his mouth. This was such a heavenly experience for Geet loved the way Maan was claiming her making her his completely.

Haan dub ke paar main ho rahi hoon sanam'

Maan fixed his face in between her curves and guided Geet's hands towards them. She understood his desire and she started massaging his face with her curves. Both of them were sweating; their breaths were heavy but still they were not ready to stop. As Maan was enjoying his massage he moved his fingers to her lehnga and without any hesitation he removed it in one go. Geet bent down and bit his shoulder as Maan's hand moved towards her panties.

Saagar hua pyasa Raat jagne lagi

Maan pulled her hair with one hand of his and started sucking her skin right from the upper part of her cleavage to the tips of her curves. Geet's heart skipped a beat as he carefully slipped his finger inside her panties. She started making unusual sounds as the touch of his cold finger on her wet feminine part started doing wonders to her senses. Her moans and her screams were just increasing. She entangled her legs so that Maan's finger could get a better access to her core.

Sholo k dil mein bhi aag jhalne lagi

Oh she was experiencing such a divine feeling that she was sure if she was alive or dead. As Geet was still trying to get into the feel of his finger Maan continued to rock her senses by introducing his second finger in her feminine portion. She scratched Maan's chest with all her strength as a new set of desires evoked in her. Maan rolled her with one swift movement. He removed the remaining clothes from his body and settled himself on top of her.

Oh main thehra raha zameen chalnelagi

Maan captured her lips into a passionate kiss as his fingers continued stroking her secret lips. Geet moaned his name in his mouth demanding more of him. He kissed every inch of her exposed skin slowly making his way downwards but he did not stop the stroking activity of his even for a second. Geet clutched the sheets tightly as she found Maan tasting the secret of her inner thigh. Her moans her screams were just increasing his passion. He started stroking her feminine part vigorously as his teeth and lips were busy feasting the soft skin of her inner thigh.

Dhadka ye dil saas thamne lagi

He removed her last barrier her panties in one quick go and without any hesitation he placed his lips on her feminity. Geet panicked for a second as she realized Maan's proximity. She tried to move back but Maan pulled her by holding both her thighs in this entire process Maan was successful in capturing a large portion of her hidden lips within his mouth. Geet screamed his name in satisfaction.

O kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai sajna ..

Maan rolled his tongue and inserted his finger in her feminine region as he went on tasting the delicious juice of his wife. Geet parted her legs more and clutched his hair in a tight grip allowing him to get a deeper access to her beautiful secrets.

kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai

His groans her moans were singing a melodious duet as both of them were completely lost in each other's love.

Suraj hua madham chand jalne laga

Maan kissed her secret lips for one last time and moved his body gracefully on top of her purposely allowing his manhood to touch her feminine beauty. She moaned his name as her desires were now out of control. Maan entangled her hand with his and took her ni***e within his teeth as without any delay he entered her.

Aasman ye hai kyun pigalne laga

Geet let out a loud scream as she felt a strong pain Maan stopped for a while but Geet ensured him through her eyes to continue. Maan reentered her and this time he kissed her to oblivion all her screams her pains were forgotten as very soon love and pleasure started dominating her senses.

Oh oh oh'Music' Sajna'.

Both of them rocked in rhythm as finally their incomplete love became complete with their union making them 2 bodies and one soul

PRECAP: The morning after😳😳😳

NOTE: Once again my sincere apologies to each one of u if I was not able to live upto ur expectations. Pls if possible give long comments so that I can improve myself while writing such scenes in MH and TJP.

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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