IPKKND: Breathing Only Half of the Air Thread 1

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

interesting plt

really enjoying it

impatient to knw the past and future :)

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Is there no update from page 17 to 31? Or did I miss something?

The last line of the first broke my heart...it's suraj's child...till I read someone's query if khushi was the mother...tubh jaan mein jaan aagaya !

Agla updatewa kab aayega???

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

aww poor arnav cried, nyc update

nayika itx interesting continue days one and other one temporary insanity

thankx for pm

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

ohh

feeling bad for arnav..
looking forward to reading the back story...

thanks for the pm..

continue soon..:)

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raii

@raii

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Amazing!!!!!!!!!! luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon...👏

n 1 qs is khushi the real mom of that child?????😲

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123460

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

awww poor Arnav...i can feel his pain
Since u said suraj is most definitely the father, im banking on the thought that u dint say khushi is the mother lol...i know m going crazy but i cant imagine khushi with someone else
I'd luv to see how this story unfolds though...this one was a really emotional update
Waiting for nxt !

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

wondaful update

relii wana fynd owt wa append btwn dem

poor arnav plzz update soon x

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Hey now this was really really a very different update!!!!

I have scores of questions in my mind ...

Khushi that too without Mangal sutra...why????

though the ring may signify...well a marriage or.hmm Suraj doesn't sound Cristian

Now Sree rushes back to the previous update...though you have mentioned a photo of Khushi after delivering Sharman..and assured that Suraj is Sharman father is Khushi the biological mother

...does this have something to do with surrogate mother and things like that!!!!

As for Khushi she seems to hold Suraj and Sherman as only her anchor in life who have helped her be occupied mentally and physically in their world...no mention of any love for Suraj

And my heart goes out to her guilty self...She did take care of her family when needed so she shouldn't feel really guilty

And she seems to have run away...

But just one more thing...Hope Suraj is not be killed or something

Well I am reading between lines now and becoming involved to the extent of being crazy!!!

Let me stop and let you develop the tale beautifully and as unique as you have created!!!

You are the first I should say as far as I have read!!!!!

Loved Arnav's anger and combined care he still has for Khushi and also love the the way Khushi still is so concerned for him...Curious to know more!!!!

But repeat once again both their feeling/emotions were superb and loved it!!!! Eager for know more!!!!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

okay, I'm dying to know what actually happened between Arnav&Khushi! She does not wear a mangalsutra or the sindoor? Hmm, interesting! Your gona have to continue real soon I can't wait to know what exactly happened. (:

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose
Hey now this was really really a very different update!!!!

I have scores of questions in my mind ...

Khushi that too without Mangal sutra...why????

though the ring may signify...well a marriage or.hmm Suraj doesn't sound Cristian

Now Sree rushes back to the previous update...though you have mentioned a photo of Khushi after delivering Sharman..and assured that Suraj is Sharman father is Khushi the biological mother

...does this have something to do with surrogate mother and things like that!!!!

As for Khushi she seems to hold Suraj and Sherman as only her anchor in life who have helped her be occupied mentally and physically in their world...no mention of any love for Suraj
And my heart goes out to her guilty self...She did take care of her family when needed so she shouldn't feel really guilty
And she seems to have run away...

But just one more thing...Hope Suraj is not be killed or something

Well I am reading between lines now and becoming involved to the extent of being crazy!!!

Let me stop and let you develop the tale beautifully and as unique as you have created!!!

You are the first I should say as far as I have read!!!!!

Loved Arnav's anger and combined care he still has for Khushi and also love the the way Khushi still is so concerned for him...Curious to know more!!!!

But repeat once again both their feeling/emotions were superb and loved it!!!! Eager for know more!!!!

Thank you so much! I wanted to try something different for once :D

So glad you're so involved in the story! Hopefully at least one of your questions will be cleared up in the next update!

Suraj isn't Christian but there's definitely a reason Khushi only wears a ring and nothing else.

Yay, sooo happy that you liked the emotional side of it because especially in the first update I wasn't sure it came across well enough so I had to develop it slightly more in the second.