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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

OH GOSH MAN!
THAT WAS BEST UPDATE OF ''GANGSTA''
SIMPLY AMAZING'...AWESOME...SUPERB

OMEG!! Geet n her DREAMs
Zoobi doobi🤣...well describe sadiie
loved it sooo much
Loved the garage part 😳
I ws laughing like anything 😆

Eagerly waiting for next update
continue soon
thankx for beautiful update n PM

PS: Thank you very much and I will try to not change RED color 🤣

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Saddie ki bachi, you used my name in "your" song, evrytime i heard *read* zoobi, i imagined myself between maan and geet in geet's dream sequence 🤣 I swaer it was like someone is calling me 🤣

Nice updt, geet is smart and...crazy lol she used *crashed* meera's mercedes only to have a glimpse of maan/guru ( i have to read the parts again to know who he is right know, i dnt remember ^^ ) Bdw this is one of the reason i told these things yesterday, story is to slow so we tend to forget details like that... But otherwise i dnt want u to rush evrything, phir maza kia aye ga ! I just wanted you to progress the main story... cause honestly i feel like in at least the 5 last chapters, the story hasn't progressed a bit... But don't take it wrong sweety, these are just critics to improve ur ff, if u check my posts, am known to give critics to ff writers so that they improve their ff 😊, but as i always say whatever direction the writer take, i'll always support him/her till the ff's end !

And concerning the lentgh of the updt, am more than satified with u give us 😊 Daily updt are perfect ! Keep it that way !

Oye the description of maan/guru's body... awww i was dead !!!! 😕 😲 😳 😳 😳
Thanx for that loool

With love ! 😊

Zubi

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

So Zoobi Doobi was all a dream 🤣🤣

luckily she was at home with Meera otherwise she would have raped someone else 🤣

amazing update.. finally Geet realizes that she loves him 😃

nice nice nice.. i likey 😉

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..Shai..

@..Shai..

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..

If Only I Had A Brain in the first place🤣
Thank Youu😳
Will Doo😳

Hahaha you got no brain and this is what you can do?? I wonder what you'd do if you had one lool
Don't worry though - that makes the two of us ;))

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..Shai..

@..Shai..

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

Her lousy eyes deceived her as they travelled further down resting upon his fit ass, she wondered how.

For a moment I'd imagined myself in geet's place coz that all I do when I watch maan 🤣
I just sit there and stare at his cute ass

Edited by ..Shai.. - 13 years ago

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

part 15
nice part...
these 2 are pagals...
Geet has completely fallen for Maan...
cont soon dear...

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

awesome update yar loved it a lot i'm also in DREAMLAND of him

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

totally in love with your update crazy geet is the best awesome loved well written thanks for the pm

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

frnd..how r u???😃

4 Pming me..😛.

4 ur good job..👏👏..

ur updates..⭐️.

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics