[Maan&Geet]FanFic ||*Gangsta||* Thread #1

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

awsemand yes concentrate on one

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

ossum 😳 no continue both if possible .. 😵 😳
but if u finding it difficult den concentrate on one 😳

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

oh god!ye meera ki bachi bhi na..
if meera touches that *gorgeous* hands of leather jacket then i m sure geet will tore her into pieces..😆
u can concentrate on this one ya both...
do whatever feel like..
but at the end we want our *gorgeous* maneet 😉

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Amina

@aminaluvmaan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

awesome update sadie...loved it!!!

nd choose whats best for u...if u think that continuing wiv one story is better then do so!

pls update next part soon..thanx!!! :)

Edited by aminaluvmaan - 13 years ago

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RainAndRainbow

@RainAndRainbow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

Meeras blckmailng was lol...
C wantd 2 wipe her nose on dat...lol...bt cheee...
Amazing update..bt 1 tinny minny question...y always so small update?

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

aaawweeesssuuummm update sadiie
loved it so much

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

sadiie jaani...
luv ur both ff...but if u finding it difficult then concentrate on one

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Hayyye Saddie !!!!

I've been so positivlly surprised !!!!! 😲 😲 😲

I disapeared 2/3 days and when i come back 3 updt back to back waoooh NICE yaar, congratzzz ! 😉

Loved the geet/guru/maan scene... awww thats was so...cuuute loool loved the way maan said "cute" again and again ! Bdw what's this guru/maan confusion yaar 😕 Your are accumulating questions but not giving answers 😭

My piece of critic :

I have one "technical" remark : personnally i think the storyline isn't "highlighted" enough... or the story is goin to slowly, it's not like am in hurry to know what's gonna happen next but i think sometime you should pass some details... as a matter of fact, you've aready posted 14 chap but the story hasn't reeally started yet...

Waiting for the next chap ! 😊

With looots of love !
Zubi

Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago