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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

What a great start!!!! Loved it!!!

Two of u together i know it would be rocking.. cant wait to read more!!!!

Khushi is suffering with some disease and staying at La's... arnie got her address now.. wow..

waiting for more..

Thanks for this wonderful FF 😊

thanks for pm!! will add minilyraa...

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meluhan

@meluhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Very good start!!!

waiting for the next update

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

fab continue soon

thankx for pm

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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

You two, together ... ufff, this is going to be mind-blowing ... I'm going to wait for this one with bated breath ... bring it! Kill it, guys! Killer start, and wonderful idea ... keep going, keep going, keep going!

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

a gr88 start i must say ...

continue soon.

and plzzz add me to ur pm list..

take care :)

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Yayyy my two fav writers have mergeddd...and the start is already so gripping and addicting!! Seriouslyy! Im eager and excited is an understatement!! The concept itself is very different, and presents a unique and slight different, yet a real side to the relationship of ArHi. Maybe we will see something like this in the future in the show but till then, Im going to sit back and treat myself with your tale! Cant wait for Arnav and Khushi to meet...and i liked it when Arnav ripped apart the divorce papers!! Though it was heartbreaking to read the past of these two in the marriage, but im sure things will get better and is Khushi sick? The Doc said something about her having very little time...what does that mean?! Dont seperate them pleaseee!

Do update soon you guyss!

Fab start for suree and happy new year!!!

- Dee

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

The two of you together created an amazing update. It was written wonderfully, and the ff seems like it will be so interesting. I cant wait to read what happens

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invalid

@invalid

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Ahhh there is an error so I cannot like it, but wow, this is another amazing FF, cant wait to read it, you both have done a wonderful job. it is so so intense and the story sounds so intriguing. Can't wait to read the next part, please dont leave us waiting too long. Hayley xx

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

U two with fantabulous FF's to ur credit will for sure rock the world here with this combined combustible FF.Will look forward to each and every update eagerly.😊

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

call me a sadist a depressant bt lyk always i love wen those stories where one of da lead is either sufferin 4rm a fatal disease (i hope dats wat Khushi is goin throu)...involved in a life deadly accident(the reason i breathe Lyraa my fav read👏)...or is emotionally fragile (Spiral staircase is my 2nd fav...i told u Muffin😉)...so how can we not love this one...im super excited...wats gonna happen now...
n i'll apologise right nw 4 evr being late on commentin as im again jiggling 9 sisters 11kids n 8 different spiece of pets (my happiness was short lived...😭)

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