Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar Thread 9 PART 88 pg 133 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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congrets for new thread... wating for next post...

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YIPPPEEE...!!!!!!!!!!!!! MERE HUMSAFAR REACHES ITS 9TH THREAD... 🥳 WHERE'S THE PARTY TONIGHT...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃






Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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THNX 4 PM



CONGO 4 NEW THREAD

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Congrats on the new thread...

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this is 9th thread...wow lets party yaar with an update...
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Thanks for your love and support. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.
love- Piya
PART 77

Maan: Main tumse baat nahi karunga [I won't talk to you]

He takes Geet's photograph and places it near his heart and closes his eyes

Geet: (thinking) Kya narazgi hai Mr. Khurana ki mujhse baat nahi karenge par meri tasveer ko seene se lagaye baithe hai [He is angry with me but still he is holding my photo close to his heart what an anger]

Geet has a cup of coffee in her hand

Geet: Hmm..hmm.. ji suniye [Hmm..hmm' Maan]

Maan: Naa hi mujhe kuch sunna hai aur naa hi kuch kehna [I am not going to talk to u nor am I going to listen to u]

Geet: Toh mat kahiye waise bhi aapse baat karna bhi kaun chahtha hai mujhe toh apne iss chair par baithna hai issliye aapko utha rahi thi [I am also not interested to talk to u I just want to sit on my chair that's it]

Maan: Hadh ho gayi ek toh main naaraz hoon aur tum ho k mujhe manane k bajaye mujhse lad rahi ho [This is too much here I am angry with u and instead of pacifying me u are busy fighting with me]

Geet: Naaraz hone ka janamsidh adhikaar ladkiyon ka hi hai issliye chahe jo ho jaaye manana toh aapko hi padega [It is the birthright of girls to be angry whatever the case boys need to pacify girls]

Maan: Ajeeb baat hai naaraaz main hoon aur tum chahthi ho k main tumhe manau aisa bilkul bhi nahi hoga tumhe ye chair chahiye thina toh ye lo baitho [Strange here I am expecting your apology and u want me to pacify u]

Maan gets up from the chair and goes and sits on another chair

Geet: Hmm'hmm..

Maan: Ab kya hai? [Now what?]

Geet: Shayad aapne meri baat thik se suni nahi mujhe mere chair par baithna hai[I think you did not hear me carefully I want to sit on my chair]

Maan: Geet ye toh hadh ho gayi tumhe uss chair par baithna tha toh main waha se utt gaya ab tumhe iss chair par bhi baithna hai [Geet now u r crossing the limits you wanted to sit on that chair so I got up and settled myself on this one and now you want this chair also]

Geet: Haan [Yes]

Maan gets up once again and goes and sits on a sofa

Geet: Aapko meri baat samaj aa bhi rahi hai ya nahi? [Are u understanding what I am trying to tell?]

Maan: Geet ab toh tum jo chahe kar lo main yaha se nahi hilnewala [Geet now do whatever u feel like doing but I am not going to get up from here]

Geet: Yahi toh main chahthi hoon [This is exactly what I want]

Maan: Kya matlab? [What do u mean?]

Geet: Jab tak aap ek jagah nahi baithoge tab tak main apne chair par aaram kaise farmapaaungi? [Until and unless u settle at one place how would I be able to sit on my chair?]

Maan: Main kuch samjha nahi? [I didn't get u]

Geet removes his hand and makes herself comfortable on his lap

Geet: Yahi toh mera pyara sa chair hai aur iss chair par baitneka haq sirf aur sirf mera hai [This is my chair and only I have this right to sit on it]

Maan: (with fake anger) Achha toh ye hai tumhara chair aur isspe sirf tumhara haq hai? [ok so this was the chair that u were talking about and this chair belongs to u?]

Geet: Haan Saada haq ethe raqh [It's my right give it to me]

Maan could not control his laughter

Maan: Achha ye tumhare haath mein coffee haina lau mujhe doh [What's there in your hand coffee right? Give it to me]

Geet: Kyun du? [Why should I?]

Maan: Mere liye coffee layi ho toh mujhe doh [U have brought this coffee for me so why aren't you giving it to me?]

Geet: Ye aapse kisne keh diya k ye coffee aapke liye hai [Who told u that I have got it for u?]

Maan: Achha toh iska matlab ye coffee mere liye nahi hai tumhare liye hai tum peeyogi coffee? [Ok so this coffee is not for me that means u r going to drink it]

Geet: Nahi ye toh mere Maan k liye hai [No this coffee is for my Maan]

Maan: Agar ye tumhare Maan k liye hai toh tum mujhe ye coffee dethi kyun nahi? [If it is for your Maan then why don't u give it to me?]

Geet: Maine kaha ye mere pyare se Maan k liye hai aap jaise Dhust danav k liye nahi [I said that it is for my sweet Maan not for a Dhust Danav like u]

Maan: Tumne mujhe Dhust danav kaha ab toh main tumhe saza dekar rahunga [You called me a dhust danav now be ready for your payback]

Geet: Agar mere Maan ko pata chal gaya k aapne unki mallika ko nuksaan pauchane ki koshish ki hai tab toh aapki khair nahi [If my Maan comes to know that u have tried to harm me then we won't leave u]

Maan: Acchhaji toh ye batau k agar tumhare Maan yaha nahi aaye to hiss coffee ka kya karogi? [Ok just tell me one thing if at all your Maan doesn't come then who would drink this coffee?]

Geet: Main unki taraf se ye coffee pee lungi [I will drink it on his behalf]

Maan: Tum aur ye kadwi coffee peeyogi? [You will drink this?]

Geet: Haan main ye kadwi coffee pee lungi par iss coffee ko aap jaise Dhust danav ko nahi dungi [Yes I will but I won't give it to u]

Maan: Coffee toh main bhi peeyunga [You can't stop me from drinking this coffee]

Geet: Accha dekhthe hai [Ok let us see]

Geet takes a sip of the coffee she gives a very bad expression after tasting the coffee

Geet: Dekha maine coffee ko taste kar liya aur issi tarah main pura coffee pee lungi [Look if I can take a sip of this coffee then I can very well drink it as well]

Maan: Ab tum dekho main kaise coffee peetha hoon [Now it's my turn to drink the coffee]

Geet takes her hand which had the cup away from Maan

Geet: Ab peeke dhikaiye Mr. Khurana [Let me see how do u drink it]

Maan touches Geet's waist sensually and pulls her towards himself

Their lips were very close

Geet closes her eyes and Maan starts tasting her lips with his tongue

Geet's heart was beating very fast

Maan was just licking her lips he wasn't kissing her

Geet moaned his name

Maan: Kaha thana coffee toh main peekar hi rahunga aur aaj itni meethi coffee taste karne k baa dab toh yun lagta hai k aage bhi aisi hi coffee peeni chahiye [Look I told u I would taste this coffee and now I really love this taste and I feel that I should be drinking my coffee in a similar manner everyday]

Geet hugged Maan

Maan: Geet tumse ek pal ki duri main seh nahi paata aur tum ho k mujhe Mumbai bhej rahi ho who bhi pure 2 dino k liye [Geet I can't stay away from you why do u want me to go to Mumbai]

Geet: Maan main bhi aapse dur nahi rehna chahti par iska matlab ye toh nahi k aap apne kaam par dhyan na de kaam bhi toh important haina? [Maan my condition is also the same but work is also important ]

Maan: Par Geet main tumhare bagair kaise reh paaunga [But Geet I won't be able to stay away from u]

Geet: Humne ek saath itne haseen lamhe guzare hai Maan ussi ko yaad karke hum ye 2 din ki duri bardassh kar lenge par aap mujhse vaada kijiye k aap Mumbai ka kaam ache tarah se pura karke hi lautenge [These two days we will stay away from each other by recollecting all the beautiful moments that we have lived together u have to promise me that u won't return until and unless the work in Mumbai gets over]

Maan: Tumhari baat main kabhi taaal hi nahi saktha Geet waise kya tum meri ek tamanna puri karogi [I will never go against your words Geet but would u fulfill one request of mine]

Geet: Aap kehkar toh dekhiye Maan [Order me Maan]

Maan: Kya tum aaj mere liye ek saree pehnogi main tumhe apni aakhon mein kaid karke Mumbai lekar jaana chahtha hoon [Will u wear a saree for me today I want to capture your beautiful face in my eyes]

Geet: Aaj shaam ko hum ek haseen khwab banadenge Maan aur ye 2 din hum issi khwab k sahare kaatenge [We will make special memories today and these memories will help us to stay away from each other these two days]

Maan kissed her forehead and both of them once again get lost in each other's embrace

Evening

The entire Khurana Mansion was empty

Nakul had already left and he was in his servant's quarter

The terrace was decorated beautifully with lights of different colors and the floor was full of rose petals

Maan was waiting for the queen of his heart his Geet

Geet comes to the terrace

Maan knew that his ladylove was here

Geet had worn a light purple saree

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=si6BGXJ2EZo

Music

Maan starts approaching Geet he keeps on admiring her. Geet feels shy and lowers her gaze and turns to the other side

Mujhe haq hai'.

Maan stops her by placing his hand on her shoulder

Tujhko jee bhar k main dekhu mujhe haq hai

He goes and stands in front of her.

He lifts her face holding her chin

Bus uhi dekhtha jau mujhe haq hai

He starts caressing her face with all his love

Piya'Piya'Piya piya bole mera jiya'.

Geet hugs Maan passionately

Maan responds to the hug

Tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai

Maan kisses her shoulder

Geet starts melting in his arms

Music

Maan starts removing her earrings

His one touch was enough to send Geet to some other world

Maan placed a soft kiss on her ear lobe

Geet smiles and runs away from there

Dhal rahi pigal rahi ye raat dheere dheere

She reclines on the rose petals

Maan positions himself on top of her

Badh rahi hai pyar ki baat dheere dheere

He lifts her saree a little and touches her feet

He removes her payal with his teeth

Chudiyaan gungunake kya kahe sajna

He kisses her navel and removes her waist chain

Ye chudiyaan gungunake kya kahe sajna

Maan kisses her hand and starts removing her bangles

Raat ki raat jagau mujhe haq hai

He starts showering her with kisses

Chand poonam ka churau mujhe haq hai

He kissed the nape of her neck

He removed her chain slowly

Piya' Piya 'Piya piya bole mera jiya'

She encircled her arms around his neck and took him in her embrace

Tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai

Maan starts kissing her beautiful face

Music

He keeps on admiring her

He gets up and places his head on her lap Geet touches his face lovingly

Kal subah tujhse main dur chala jaaunga

Maan takes her hand in his and looks and keeps on admiring her beautiful face

Ek pal ko bhi tujhe bhool nahi paaunga

He touches her face with utmost love

Ye chehra ye muskaan aakhon mein bharke

He was capturing her angelic face in his eyes

Ye chehra ye muskaan aakhon mein bharke

Geet gave him a sweet smile

Main teri yaad mein tadpu mujhe haq hai Tujhko milne ko main tarsu mujhe haq hai

His eyes were reflecting pain as he had to be away from her

Piya' Piya'

Geet kissed his forehead

Piya piya bole mera jiya

She kissed his cheek

Tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai

She ensured him through her eyes that no matter what they would always stay together

Music' mujhe haq hai

Maan placed her beneath him and looked at her lips

Music'Tumhe haq hai

Geet submitted to his love and started reducing the distance between them

PRECAP 1: Maan leaves for Mumbai

PRECAP 2: Meera: "Geet ye koi aam bracelet nahi hai ek bahut hi special word engraved hai iss bracelet mein"

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Love- Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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WOW Pihu luved every bit of dis update yaar ismein dher saara pyar tha aur pyar bhari takraar bhi...
wah ji wah MSK k gusse ka ye rang bhi dekhne ko milega ye kabhi socha na tha pyar insan ko kya se kya bana deta h gussa bhi geet se aur usi ki tasveer seene se lagaye baitha h i agree wid u geet...luved dis bit sweetu 😆😆...kya bana diya h tune bechare MSK ko...LOL
wah geet uthao phayda badle hue MSK ka wo bhi specially tumhare liye hi h warna majal h kisi ki MSK ko kahe use usse baat nahin karni...lol
ae lo MSK to pyaar mein buddhu bhi ho gaya apni kahi baat hi bhool gaya geet ko uski special chair aur ye h ki soch raha h bechari use pareshaan kar rahi h...heheh
finally buddhu MSK ko geet ko hi poori baat samjhani pari aur ab ye Mr. fake anger dikha rahe hain bekar ki koshish h maan geet ko pata h tum apni geet se gussa ho hi nai skte...lo ji hansa diya na geet ne seconds mein...😆
awww d cute coffee nok jhok over maan n DD was really cute brilliant Pihu...i really really luved it...😃😃
geet MSK se jeetna mushkil hi nai namumkin h pi li na coffee...n lo ab Mr. demanding ki ek aur demand roz aisi hi coffee ki demand hogi sambhal kar geet...
awww i luved geet's haseen khwab wala dialogue it was really mesmerizing...
song to amazing h hi but ur narration n pictures made d whole sequence truly enchanting n mesmerising...d way he she was shying n he removes her shyness wid his luv n their hug their flowing passion geet melting n finally her submission to his luv...each n every moment of dis sequence was EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL...
hats off for such an amazing job dear...
luvya sweetu...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats 4 d new thread piyaaa... w8ing 4 d update... plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...

it feels like these 2 days will change their life...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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