Against all odds *A SaJan ff*

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Posted: 13 years ago

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[quote=358674]wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its awesome 👍🏼

superb 👍🏼

excellent 👍🏼

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thank you so much nisha di..
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Posted: 13 years ago

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[quote=gunurlove]Hey Dear Ambika...i was so happy that u actually updated its next part very soon...Awesome Part...Thank u so much...But what is this haan..at the end i still had wanted to kill u AMBIKAAA ...

Yaar it was marvelous update...Gunjan's reaction was so obvious..i felt very bad for her..u have written her painful feelings..her emotions very very nicely...TOO gud..she missed him so much...her betrayed condition was Perfectly portrayed by u...👏 👏👏

gunjan scene with her Parents was really nice...HMMM now adi has come along with Samrat..Ambika what did u do yaar..why have u ended it at so extreme point...😲 and im not going to wait it till 15 march im Sorry...plzzz try to give atleast one part..of samrat and gunjan...😳

plzzz i want Sajan update..plzzz continue it very very soon.

Best of Luck for ur Exams and thanks for pm [/quote]
thank you so much di..
I m glad you ,liked the part..
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Will Continue soon..
I will update probably tomorrow..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Welcome back Ambika..with ur very first time a quite longest part...😊

Sorry for so late comment...it was an amazing part..Mind blowing and TOO GUD...Gunjan's shattered conditions and her inner most hurt feelings were described so so well...👏👏

Felt very bad For Adi and gunjan both...Birthday party Sequence was very nice...glad to know Adi and Gunjan became friends once again...😳..Their true n pure friendhsip bond is really amazing...

Best scene was When Gunjan was remembering those childhood memories and then that last time Sam's birthday..u very well written the scene when she entered their house after a long time...Poor girl...Hope so Samrat would soon realized his mistake and Sajan would come along once again..Overall Fantastic update...whatever Adi did with Sissy was so 😲..

Last family scene was veryyy cute...😳

continue soon the next part..thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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[quote=gunurlove]Welcome back Ambika..with ur very first time a quite longest part...😊

Sorry for so late comment...it was an amazing part..Mind blowing and TOO GUD...Gunjan's shattered conditions and her inner most hurt feelings were described so so well...👏👏

Felt very bad For Adi and gunjan both...Birthday party Sequence was very nice...glad to know Adi and Gunjan became friends once again...😳..Their true n pure friendhsip bond is really amazing...

Best scene was When Gunjan was remembering those childhood memories and then that last time Sam's birthday..u very well written the scene when she entered their house after a long time...Poor girl...Hope so Samrat would soon realized his mistake and Sajan would come along once again..Overall Fantastic update...whatever Adi did with Sissy was so 😲..

Last family scene was veryyy cute...😳

continue soon the next part..thanks for the pm😊[/quote]
thank you so much rija di..
I m so glad you liked the update..
I ll try and update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

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[quote=kins103]waiting for update[/quote]
Will continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

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[quote=SM_317]Cont soon!!😳[/quote]
Will continue soon shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PREVIEW
"Gunjan, I like you. I really do." said Samrat holding silver promise ring in his hand. Gunjan smiled with tears in her eyes.
"Me too" she said forwarding her hand while he slid the beautiful ring in her ring finger.
"It looks beautiful in your finger." he said kissing her hand.
"Yes, it does." she said hugging him, smiling widely.

Life couldn't get any better...

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