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merrydock

@merrydock

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

absolutely beautiful, i loved the realtionship Khushi has with the Raizada family, love the easyness between Akash and Khushi, it reminded me of the exact easyness i have with my brother, like we can talk about anything in the world without the least bit of resevation. the slow but sure effect khsuhi has on Arnav and vice verse. well the building of emothion in Arnav is more intresting. OH!!!! FOR HEAVEN SAKE DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT CUTTING UP ON THE STEAMY SCENES i love your writhin partly because you right them so well, with it being sleezy. sexaholic or not i dont care you can count me as one if you want as long as you dont stop writhing them in 😉

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mandira1

@mandira1

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Awesome update😊

Really enjoyed reading it!

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Amina

@-Ammie-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

awesome update loved i so much...!!

Wow man Arnav is one hell of a complicated person...so many emotions all at once i wonder how he manages..really loved it!! Although i feel real sorry for him at times...

looking forward to the payash and NK Anjali thing...i bet its going to be fun..!!

and oh this gorgeous story has got be hooked u better update soon...lol!

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Awesome update munchy!!! Just now read all the parts..

Awww arnie boy is so cold hearted... but even though he is cruel at the end why do we feel sorry for him is the question there.. i must say ASR's character is never i can understand fully..

khushi is her usual bubbly self.. he is jealous of her..very well written..

thanks for pm!!

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

amazing...beautifully written... i loved Khushi in this one and felt bad for Arnav when he escaped from all the celebration going on...

continue soon...thanks for the PM

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

He keeps,biting in the same place...😆 Soon she will have a permanent tattoo...oops...love bite there!

Don't join nunnery or turn celibate...I'll be in the masses that corrupt you again!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Nice one Muffin!!

I loved the update.

Finally Akash and Payal are on track.

I'm hoping Arnav and Khushi will follow suit soon enough.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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bhavnah

@bhavnah

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Awesome update

Fnx 4 z pm

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Absolutely Beautiful!👏

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Beautiful update... I've said it before and I say it again now... You are one amazingly talented writer. I simply love how this ff is shaping up. Thanx for the pm.