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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1081

Superb update!

a sad and heart piercing consummation scene

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1082

Amazing Update Muffin Realy nice story you are a amazing Writter

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1083

Wow another amazing 3 chapters! Although the consummation part was a bit sad and not entirely what we would want Arhi's first time to be like, I thought you wrote it very well. Given the situation, I wouldn't be able to accept Khushi shedding her sorrow for her murdered family so soon and hastily move on with Arnav. Can't wait for the next part⭐️

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1084

Those last three chapters... so beautifully written... but so painful to read... all that sorrow and pain... how she was forced to get married so soon after her whole family was massacred... couldn't stop crying... its terrible and yet it was the only way she would have survived... thanks to him... he really is her knight in shining armour... her superman!!! This is such an amazing story... thank you so much for sharing this :) Thank you for the PM!!!

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1085

Heey mini !
After reading all your continues, beautiful updates.. i'm finally posting a comment with such sadness.

I must all your chapters were so amazingly written, I really have got no words. It's like I can actually see it happening from all the imagery, details and the horrific atmosphere that you had involved... It was hard to imagine though, and yet I read on- because that just made it so real and gave a feel of the partition.

The Gilani family nearing to their end, was so heart wrenching.. I love the way you've set up the family. It gave me such a great feel, reading about the them; love the Raizada's too.. no doubt.
& Yet , these last two chapters weren't too easy to digest.. i'll admit.

Really feel for Khushi, the pain you've put through her character is just unimaginable. I was teary while reading the last two chaps, and greatful for the way the Raizada's are trying to support Khushi and heel her along the way. Feels great that she's got another loving family by her side, and love Arnav's support.

The whole panchayat and consummation scene was truly heart touching, very emotional. It was stupid in a way, but uggh... I just wish Khushi was given the time to go along with what's happening, yet Arnav was helpless too.. :'(

Please update soon, i'm too anxious.. my heart's feeling just too heavy. Honestly, this is one of the very emotional, real feel of the characters you've laid out , and this FF is one of my very favourites. Your awesome ! Do publish this in the future, no jokes . tehehe.. xx <3

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roseycheek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1086

heartwrenching!!!! I feel terrible for both of them..what they wanted and what they got...I hope Khushi is aware of the panchayat's condition and Arnav's reason behind doing this...

I want to tell you again and again..what a wonderful writer you are!