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Bazzinga

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1071

Mini dear, I just ain't get it how ya manage to write such out of the world chapters all the time

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1072

RES for all 3 updates

*unreserved*

im speechless
you write so beautifully describing everything perfectly
absolutely loathe om prakash
the consumation was just really sad
but i like that arnav left her
but one question how will they know if they consumated?

Edited by sweet_girl234 - 13 years ago

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silki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1073

very sad...I hope Khushi knows why Arnav behaved like this :...

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saiqa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1074

oh wot a sad storyyy...i literally cried my eyes out as this is wot i wanted from a fiction story...it has all the ingredients of a story to make it into a mind blowing serial based on khushi and arnav...i just hope that khushi and arnav have a few romantic feelings like before...but i said the state that khusi is in...it will be down the line...

a mega mega mega story...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PM ME...THANKS...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1075

this is soo sad :( i wish khushi had it the way she wanted. depressed atm

xxx

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Bushra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1076

you should write a book.
i am not kidding.

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Saniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1077

BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! these 3 updates were heart-touching, hard to read esp the last one, their consumation but your writing doesn't allow me to stop reading! My heart goes out to both Arnav & Khushi! I really hope things get better soon.

UPDATE SOON! :D

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..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1078

I was waiting for this moment, but to see it happen like this is extremely depressing...

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1079

*silently watches and waits*

Hon, what comments do you want after updates so out of this world? Ask, and all praise shall be yours ...

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lilmissmuffin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1080

the last chapter was definitely different, this was an unique consummation night but wish it was one of those common first night. You got my heart bleeding when Khushi said that she'd 'give her happily ever after away. She doesn't want it anymore.' The price she had to pay was unfair but it should get better for him and her seeing as they do love each other.

Edited by lilmissmuffin - 13 years ago