EVERGREEN LOVE (RTMC ff) ud 35 on 119 - Page 6

Originally posted by: pranita1202

omg wow

old couple ki jai coz them dd were sitting next 2 each other

dhwani missed the train ab toh jab we met hone wala hai😊😆

omg this was amazinggg!!!!👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: samikshachauhan

omg this was amazinggg!!!!👏 👏 👏

sorry i couldn't read ur ff earlier... but today wen i finally read it... i luved it like anything😳

their luv in first sight... their happening fights... admiring other in his/her sleep 😉 all in all it was superb👏

now plzz plzzz plzzz keep updating regularly ...luv u😊

loved part one 😛 continue it

update 4

She left d handle'''n ran''..ran wid speed ,,,,,,,,it worked to certain extend,,,,,,,till certain extend'''''then she ran vid her full speed ,,,,,,it worked again ,,,,,,,,,again till certain extend''.now she lost hope'''it become hard to compete the train very soon,,,,,,,,,,

Suddenly d most fabulous thing happened to her in d whole life,,,,,,,,,,,yes daqsh arrived to the gate unconcerned of her''..soon he saw her'''''running in her full pace, speed ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vid full energy''''.he immediately reacted'''..shouted ''RUN ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,RUN''.''

HE worried like hell '''..as he just could not afford to make her loose d train'''.he extended his arm towards her,,,,,,,,extended more n more ,,,,,,,,,,,,it seems that suddenly his arm length increased so much''''.

She on d other hand was d happiest person in d world at dat instant''..suddenly she ran '''.ran like never before, as she absorbed extra power form her ambience'..d air around her'..and was successful ,,,,,,,,in touching d tips of fingers of daqsh''''

Rest part was daqsh responsibility'''to pull her and ''make her enter d train''..and he this d right way'..

He managed it vid gr8 difficulty to hold her palm'..hold her palm tightly''.hell pulled her''.vid full power ,,,,,,and making her run like hell ''..dis was just not a problem'''problem was,,,,,,,,,how will she manage to climb d ladder and if in any case of bad fate''.accidently she can injure her leg badly''.the train speed was really challenging''''he just wanted her,,,,,,,,,on the train'''she was still running trying to climb ,,,,,,,,but managing everything together,,,,,,her speed ''direction'...her climb was difficult ''..no thoughts ,,,no desire ,,,,,,but to simply hold hand of daksh tightly'''''

(i want u to read dis part vid a backgroud music...

feel aa jayegi ...boss)

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOtdPOr4P-0&feature=related )

She soon shifted her palm to d upper arm of daqsh ,,,,,,,,for support'..but before she could give her first try to climb'''.daqsh curled his arm around her waist ,,,,,,,she felt secured and believed that this is possible ''.possible for her to climb''.daqsh pulled n lifted her simultaneously''.vid his full jaat force,,, all desires,,,,,,,complete soul'''''''.within a fraction of second''..dhwani was in d train,,,,,,tightly embedded in daqsh's arms ''..which seemed to be most protective shield in d world,,,,,,,,,,she was having deep breadths''.very frequently'..she was damn tired,,,,,,,,,she felt a strange numbness in her right foot,,,,,,,,,,,not even in postion to lift up or stand properly''..or free herself from his grip''..after all she ran for almost d whole platform'''so she simply leaned herself on daqsh's body'''.daqsh's body supported her to stand'''daqsh himself was leaned on d wall behind''.they were close 'damn close'''their face were merely few cms away''

He wishpered'..''kaha gayi thi????????''

In between her deep breadth she said''aise,,,,,aisehi''''

They wre in each other proximity,,,,,,,,,daqsh was completely in her influence,,,,,,he was smelling her characteristic fragnance,,,,,he tried to light the situation''DAQSH,,,DAQSH SHAHLOOR,,,,NAAM TU SANA HI HOGA'''..SHE smiled and nodded,,,,,,she raised her head again,,,,,,watching daqsh vid d most lovable gaze,,,,,,,n said''DHWANI''.DHWANI TEVATIO(pronounce it te-va-tia) '''''Daqsh smiled back n said''WE BOTH D-D ''..HMMM!!!!''

she was taking breadths so deep and frequently'''daqsh noticed it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and saw her beautiful lips participating in d breadths''..and said'' thak gayi????''

She nodded yes'''and ''..and suddenly realized a piercing pain in her right leg''she responsed it vid smooth ''aahhh!!!!''in pain'.

D next second it become louder n audible,,,,,,,,,,,soon she slipped ,,,,,a little from daqsh hold'..daqsh made his grip more tight'..

She saw her right feet '..it was injured badly''a big ,,,,though not sharp and deep'..cut was seen on her upper part of feet'near her simple and neat anklets'.daqsh followd her stare,,,,,,,,and discovered it'''..he heard an trembling voice''ba''bahut,,,,,dard ho raha hai'''''.he shifted his stare to dhwani's FACE ,,,,,,,her eyes wre moist ,,,,,,though had no tears really'''he gazed her vid most romantic gaze , concern , and her pain in his eyes''.she was also,,,,seeing his eyes''..deep , black jet ,,,,,,,,,,d best remedy,,,,,in the world'''she soon realized that her pain was vanishing,,,,,,,slowly,,,,,,,(actually she was so much into his eyes''.that she even slowly stopped responding to her nerves'.)

She saw him as the most concerned man for her in d whole world''''..he bent towards her leg wid a most caring fashion''.still supporting her''..n said''I need to lift u up!!!!!''

Dis disturbed dhwani and again made her aware of d injury''

He was bend,,,,,,and she supported herself through his shoulder''.soon she felt her legs in air''floating'..she was being lifted by most caring hands of daqsh'within a blink of eyes'..now she was in daqsh's arms''.tightly bonded to to daqsh's body,,,,,,his chest''.she could feel his heart beating,,,,,under her palm''and d strength he is applying,,,,,,to lift her''on d other hands on his broad shoulders''''''

She said''tum kab kab meri help karage,,,,,,,,????????''

''tumhe jab jab help ki jaroorat padegi'''kisi ki bhi,,,,,,kaisi hi'.kabhi bhi''.yaah phir aieveen hi''''he smiled ,,,,,,,,on his commitment ''.so do dhwani''..but she even blushed,,,,,,,,

To this,,,,,,,,,,He turned his stare to d path,,,,,,,n started walking''..the path was bit congested ,,,thin,,,,,,,thank god ,,,,,their seats( 55 n 56)'were not too away'..adjusting to the path'.carefully,,,,,,,,he made d way'''all dis time dhwani was staring'..not staring,,,,,,,gazing him''.while daqsh was busy vid d path/way'..

They reached their seats,,,,,,,,daqsh placed dhwani on seats ,,,,,,as she was d most precious element for him in d world'''..she thanked him ,,,,,,,,,,,but he didn't response'''he immediately turned''n took out a small pouch,,,,,,from his bag'''.

It had ointments, his brush , shaving kit etc''.. in it ,,,,,,,,,,

He took d ointment tube''placed it over seat ,,,,,,and soon took out his handkerchief''.wetted it from the bottle near by''.hold dhwani feet wid atmost care ''and placed it over his bag lying below the seats''he cleaned d injury vid perfection,,,,,,,,,care,,,,,skill n delicacy''''

''tumhe pata hai''.main khud jo ki ek doctor hone wali hoon ''inta ache se chot saaf nahi karti'''''''''kya tum ek doc ho??????''she commented'''feeling a bit relaxed n cool wid her pain'..

He replied ,,,,,to distract her from d injury''no ''not a doc ,,,,,,,,,dr dhwani tevatio''.i m SQUADRON LDR. DAQSH SHAHLOOR.''

SHE is impressed''..n .replies''no''.not'..dr. dhwani tevatio'''its'.''MAJOR DR. DHWANI TEVATIO''

EVEN DAQSH is impressed '''.''wow!...ladki tho tum takkar ki ho!!!!!''

''Voh tho hai!!!!!!'' she said it proudly n gladly'''

While all dis he was done wid applying ointment and bandaging her feet vid his handkerchief ''.he hanged her anklets on a hanger on wall of train''''''n '''''.said''isse lena mat bhulana''

thankx for update n pm😃
Superb update!!👏
👏love ur narration of ddlj scene with rtmc
😉hey n u no need to background music feel toh aisehi tera scene padhkar n rtmc ko imagine karke aa gaya😃
loved the romantic scene of both in eachothers arm lost in each other introducing😳
n end introductions too.😛
😛so jaat aur jaatani takkar ke hai!!😃
waiting for further journey😍

wow ddlj scene was awesome

beautiful update dear...😃i am loving this ff...