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Hi friends I am here with part 2. guys plzz ask me if u didnt understand anywhere. In chapter1 we saw geet's feelings towards maan. She loves maan a lot but due to maan's rude behaviour she acts like she hates maan. But thats not true she never hates maan. N ha in this SS there is no dadi for maan. Hope all ur confusions r cleared 😳. If not plzz ask me I will explain.

Thanks guys for ur support. I am very happy with ur response. Ok enough of my bak-bak 😆😳. Happy reading. 😃

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2012.. hope this new year brings loads of happiness n joy.

~~ DIL KI BATEEIN~~

Chapter 2:

recap:

geet is upset due to maan's rude behaviour. Knowing about the accident dev cancelled his meetings n came to delhi. Geet explained everything about maan's condition to dev n he is relieved. When geet is about to leave the hospital once she went to man's room n found him sleeping but his face is so pale. She pecked on his forehead n left from there.

Geet reached home n saw her dad reading some file. She went n sat beside him n kept her head on his shoulder. Mohinder kept the file aside n carresed her hair n asked

kya hua beta?

He knows that when geet is upset then only she will come n sit beside him silently. Otherwise she will tell everything that happened in the hospital. But today she came n sat silently there means he sensed some thing is wrong which made her upset.

He didnt get any reply from her so he again asked

what happened dear?

Nothing papa aaj bohot tiring day tha. Ek important operation tha aur main bohot takh gayi hu.

Oh ok. Go n take rest geet today I will send ur dinner to ur room.

Geet weakly smiled at him n told

ok papa.

Geet left from there n went to her room. She went to her wardrobe n took her night clothes then her eyes fell on a photo. She took that photo n had tears in her eye n smiled at that photo n kissed.

Maan... yes that photo is the group photo of all her friends in school days.

Then she remembered her 1st day of school in 12th class.

~~Flashback~~

today is the first day of 12th class n geet is soo nervous. She is new to delhi. Upto 11th std geet studied on hoshiyarpur. After her mom's death her dad became busy in business but he didnt neglect them during weekends he use to go to hoshiyarpur n meet his two angels geet n pari. So now he suceeded very much in business n he thought to stay with his family. So he told geet, pari n dadi to come to delhi. But dadi didnt want to leave hoshiyarpur so she stayed there itself. Geet n pari came to delhi. They both were very happy that they r back to their father. Geet n pari bot got admission in the same school. Pari in 9th class n geet in 12th class. She is very nervous to go to school. Her father told her not to worry. She just nodded. Where as pasi is so excited to go to school.



They both started n went to school. They both went to their respective classes.

Geet entered the class n she was literally shaking. In hoshiyarpur the schools were very small but here she after seeing such a big school her tension increased more. She entered the class n it was already full. All the students r staring at her no one knows who is she? She silently went to last bench n sat there as no other bench is empty. She opened some book n started reading. After 5 min maan entered the class he smiled at all. He is the charmer of the class. He is brillant student n fav for all teachers n at the same time very naughty. He is a class 1st student n last bencher.

When he enteres the class he saw someone is there in the last bench. He went there n stood near the bench. But that girl is busy reading book. So she didnt see someone standing there. Then maan thought she is some new student coz he never saw her in the class. But her face is not clearly visible. Maan spoke

hey girl. R u new student?

With the sudden voice geet looked up n saw maan. Here maan saw her face n lost in her beauty. He thought wow.. beautiful. He lost in her beauty, her milky skin, brown eyes which r big, n those pink lips which r shivering due to fear, curly hair where few strands of hair r falling on her face disturbing her. He is just staring at her.

Geet saw that he is staring at her n dont know what to do but she spoke

ye.. yes I am new student here.

Then maan came out of his trance when he heard her sweet voice. Now even maan dont know what to speak

wo.. wo.. this is my place told maan.

Oh I am sorry told geet n got up from there but she dont know where to sit. She just stood there nervously. Maan noticed that she is nervous.

Hey no problem u can sit here with me.

No thanks I will go somewhere.

Its ok no problem. Come sit.

Geet smiled at him n sat with maan. They didnt spoke anything foe sometime. So decided to broke the silence. So he spoke

hi I am maan.

Hi maan I am geet.

oh.. geet. So where r u from?

I am from hoshiyarpur. N I am new to delhi.

Ok.. dont be nervous we all r friends now. He introduced geet to all his friends.

Geet, he is yash, adi, arjun, arohi, meera n I am maan.

Geet smiled at all n told hi guys.

Hi geet replied all in unison.

They all became very good friends. As geet joined late in school they all gave her their notes n helped her in studies. But after that maan n geet didnt talk to each other. They express their feelngs through their eyes.

Meera n geet became best friends. Both r of same mentality so they became best friends. They talked a lot. First maan thought geet is a silent girl but after seeing them with the gang he came to know that she is a big big chatter box.

Actually maan use to tease all others members in the gang but he never said anything to geet. Geet use to feel bad that he never talks to her. She thinks that maan dont like her. But the reason behind maan's behaviour is that he dont want to hurt her. He cant see tears in her eyes that too because of him. If anyone tells bad about geet he cant tolerate. He rarely gets angry. He is cool guy always makes others happy. Even if he teases others also its just for fun. But for maan even just fun also he dont want to see her hurt. When geet starts talking its very difficult for her to stop but maan will be lost in her sweet voice n her laughter.

On the other hand yash n geet always fight with each other. They both cant live in peace even for 1sec n wont let others to live in peace. They will fight for small small things. Always there will be cold war between them but it diesnt mean that they hate each other. After meera, yash is geet's best friend. N for geet maan will be always first priority.

After the 1st day geet use to sit with meera but always she will be thinking about maan. Here maan too thinks about geet. They both like each others presence but never talked. Their expressions r enough to express their feelings. Now geet is a part of their gang. The boys in the gang calls meera n geet as chatter box(CB).



Precap: seminar.. oops its a big trouble for geet 😭. What will she do now?😕 Will she be able to give seminar? 😲



So guys here is part 2. hope u guys like it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

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Thanku

-jyothi

part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51453780



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update dear...
Thnx for pm
Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yiepee on the first day of the year i m the first one to comment

awesome update


happy new year

continue soon

bye
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept Jyo...waiting for next update

Happy New Year to you too darling
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
nice update dear...
maan was nt rude in college days...
then wat happened to him now??...
please continue soon,,...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it graphics
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