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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Hehehehe, Somebody actually dared to slap ASR, and it was non other than our girl KKG who else?😆😆😆Loved the update. Well written.👏👏👏Update soon.😃 Thanks.😉Happy New Year to you. May the new year bring happiness and joy into your life.🤗🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
amazing update

continue soon and plz increase the length of update plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
thankss srry i will post a long one next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Nice part...but very short
Wish you a Happy new year
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Thankyouhh, yea I'm really sryy next one will be long promise (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
THAT WAS AWESOME, loved it plz continue,I can't wait ⭐️😳🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Chapter 5 :

hayy guys its Neema again, sryy for the late update

no one has ever slaped nor screamed at ASR and who was she? but before i could react she pushed me out of the room and shut the door in my FACE! for a minute i stood there dumb folded and thinking to myself did she actually do that?

after the slap i thought he was gunna react but he just stood there. i took the chance and pushed him out of the door. after i locked the door a noise came and my phone lit up. it was a message from nats. it had my jijis address. i thought i should go right away since jiji must be getting worried so i quickly got changed and packed my bags.

well she messed with the wrong person. she thought i was gunna leave her just like that? noway! i left and wentt dowstairs, on my way i got an idea and ran towards the reception.

Arnav: heyy, can i borrow your companys clothes? like the one that the butler wear and make it quick but make sure it brand new Please.

his friend: ummm, for wat?

Arnav: no question, i dnt have enough time. i'll pay you later.

his friend: dnt wryy you dnt have to pay me. i was just asking! wait here i'll be back in a tick.

And with that he left. i waited there for 2-3 mins and finally he came running towards me with the suit wraped in a transparent bag.

Arnav: finally! i told you to get a suit not the whole factory.

his friend: it take time you know.

Arnav: ok watever. put the payment in my account.

with that i ran to my friends office/room and quickly got changed! on my way i saw butler with the trolley and on top of it was a cup of coffee and few dishes. i stood infront of her door and picked up the coffee for the saucer and stood there thinking may be i should go and chuck this whole thing on her face.

i know i know you all must be thinking how can ASR get soo low? your right i ASR cant do this and prove her right. i stood there thinking for few seconds and then finally i told myself, forgive her. that spoilt brat doesnt deserve my time. my times to important to waste it like this. i was about to leave when the door opened. i dont think she noticed me she was looking for something in her bag.

i stood there thinking how can she looked so beautiful yet again. my mind was telling me to just leave before she sees but something in me told me just wait one for second. i wanted to just turn around and walk but i couldnt ... i just couldnt.

she took her key out then turned around and before you know it we were on top of each other like before but the only difference was she was on top of me and on the floor instead of that bed. i had no idea when the coffee spilled in onto my shirt and how we landed on the floor. it must have hurt but i didnt fell anything, how? i thought to myself. i knew she was gunna scream and do something like maybe another slap? but a suprising responce.

after everything was neatly packed in the luggage i looked for my key. i knew it was in the bag somewhere i just had to find it and without looking anywhere i opened the door. i did see someones shadow but i thought he or she was just waiting for the lift or something so i continued looking for it. FInally i found it, i closed the door and slowly turned around still looking in my bag. just one step forward and i collided into someone, we both landed on the floor. it seemed like a man. i cluched onto his tshirt and had my eyes close. i could feel something wet inbetween us. it felt hot not in the sexy way but in the tempreture/warmth way.

i knew it was my fault because i was the one who wasnt looking at where i was going.

Khushi: im sorryy

Arnav: uhh ... mm ... its, f iii nee.

i've heard that voice somewhere i thought to myself. i looked up to see who it was and and ... i basically had no words. it felt like i suddenly lost my voice. i quickly got up and

Khushi: YOU again! (looking at his clothes), how dare you? didnt you have enough!

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i know it short but dnt wrry i'll update part 6 soon. thanxxx for reading<33333
Edited by iloveyou2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
funny.. it is gonna take a lot of coffee for her to digest the fact that he is actually ASR when she finally meets him at his home... not a stalker or a bulter.. heheheheehe... funny... waiting for the next update.. good one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
A very good update...thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav got slaped, Arnav got slaped.Heheheehe😆😆😆😆😆
INteresting update.👏👏👏
Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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