SwaRon FF : ADLAA BADLI Chap 13 Pg 93 *3rd oct'12 - Page 22

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aaawww love u too and i miss u :(
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same here baby...miss u too :(
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Eeepp I love This Ash
Pm Me Nxt Update Plz 😳
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CHAPTER 4

sharonn turns back and looks at swayum

sh: tumhare aur tumhare friends ki wajah se mujhe...detention mil gayi...ab toh khush hoge na? sir inke hi prank ke wajah se---

pr: sharon i dont want to hear anything tumhe aur swayum ko detention milegi thats all

sh: but sir

pr: i said i dont want to hear anythin

sw: sorry sir...

sh: (to swayum) all bcuz of you!!!

dey both went to d detention room...

sh : ye sab tumhari vajah se hua hai

sw : oh plzz tum washroom me roke apna tym waste kar rahi thi usme meri kya galti hai?

sh : ha ha sahi hai...hey wait tumhe kese pata ki me washroom me ro rahi thi?

sw : vo...umm...its so obvious tumhari jesi behenji hamesha akele me jake roti hi rehti hai

Sw: ( in his head..)...dude...yeh tune kya kiya...waise y did u follow her...
Sh: hello..what do u think of urself...huh//...who do u think u r...
Sw: swayam...swayam shikhawt...( with loads of attitude..)
P: silence in the detention hall...
Sh: ( mocking)...swayam..swayam shikhawat...
Sw: did u say sumthing...
Sh: just stay away from me...i dun want any trouble...
Sw: that i cant do ...trouble toh tumne invite ki thi...mujse takrakar...

P : k now i want silence here...i have sum work n so i'm going n will be back in 10 mins but i want full silence got it both of u!

sw n sh : yes sir!

wid dis d teacher leaves...n now only sharon n swayam r der in d room

sh : god ek sir hi to mera sahara the ab mujhe iske sath akele is room me rehna padega

sw : mujhe bhi koi shok nahi hai tumhare sath rehne ka

sh : pata nahi esa mene kya kiya ki mujhe tumhare sath akele rehna pad raha hai

sw : vese akele me bhi bohot kuch ho sakta hai..

sharon was shocked...swayam moved towards her...wid sharon backing off...she was blocked now n a sandwich between d wall n d grt Swayam..

sh : ye tum kya kar rahe ho

sw : vahi jo mujhe karna cahiye

Sharon closed her eyes in fear...she didnt noe hw to get out of tis situation...

Swayam stopped n looked at Sharon's face...she looked so beautiful...He jus kept starin...

Sw: Dude...tum yeh kya kare rehi ho?? Iss behenji toh tumhari standard bhi nehi he...tum isko admire kare rehi ho...

Swayam started backin away frm Sharon...she still stood there wit her eyes close...

Sw: Hello behenji??...

Sharon slowly opened her eyes...Swayam was no longer near her...

Sh: Thank god...

Sw: Waise is incident ko yaad rakna...So tat u noe wat i'm capable of...

Sh: Idiot!!! Dnt come close to me eva again...

Sharon heads towards d door...

Sw: Hei behenji...U forgot sumthin...

Sh: Kya??
Sw: Yeh detention hei...U cant leave till d sir comes bac...

Sh: Owh god!!!!

Sharon comes bac n sits at her place wit her bac turned away frm Swayam...Swayam could hear her sobbing...

sw : ye ro kyu rahi hai? meri vajah se? wait y am i concerned in ladkiyo ki to adat hoti hai...

swayam stood der just admiring her...but he wasnt feeling gud! he went towards her...

sharon didnt knew dat he was cuming n she stood up to see wat he is doing...she turned wid a jerked n banned on to Swayam...she was abt to fall but our hero saved her *luk-luk hawa-hawa"...

she was holding his collar n he was holding her by her waist ...

cuming back to their sense...sharon straightened herself!!

sw : oye behenji i noe ki me bohot HOT hu! but iska matlab ye nahi ki tum is baat ka undue-advantage lo!

sh : me aur tumhara advantage plzz! mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni.

sw : acha hai kyuki mujhe tumhari koi bhi chiz se attachment nahi rakhni! i have better things to do k!

sh : better things lyk dusro ko irritate karna...jo aapki tarah amir nahi hai unko nicha dikhana ryt!

Swayam was taken aback...no one in St.Louis has eva dared goin against him...n tis gal was jus scolding him...

Sw: Behenji...hu do u think u r???...talkin to me like tis...

Sh: Actually yehi meri galti hei...shouldnt even talk 2 u...

Sw: Acha hai...muje bhi tumse koi baat nehi karna...

Jus then d sir comes in...

Sir: Tumhara detention khatam hei...u'll can go bac 2 ur classes...

Sh: Thank god...

Sharon grabs her things n leaves...

Sw: Wat d does she think of herself???...Weakling behenji...

Swayam leaves too...

Swayam luvd coke... He was drinking one and walking in the atrium... From the oder side sharon was heading... They both banged into each oder...
Sh: aaarrrghhh... Tum phir se...!!! Tumahri prob kya hai... Phirse mere clothes kharab kar diye... Aur iss baar toh khudke bhi... Aankhen h ki button... And rushes to the locker room...
Sw: ooo helo madam... Mene jaan bhuj ke nai kia... Tum mujse bang hui me nai... Aur tumhari ls kapde floor saaf karne walr coth se bhi bure hai meinhe aur kya kharab karunga...
In the locker room:
sh: shit ab me dusre pair kapdo ke kaha se lao...
Kr: hi sharon rite?
Sh: ya aur aap???
Kr: kria.. Kria ghai..!! Kya hua any prob?
Sh: ya mere kapde kharab ho gaye hai and i dun have an extra pair...;
kr: ye lo u can wear mine...
Sh: lekin ye toh halter neck aur mini skirt hai...
Kr: toh kya hua pehen lo...
Sh: ok! Thanks...

swayam changed his shirt n wore a white t-shirt wid blue jacket...

sw : us behenji ki itni himmat ki usne mujhe ulta jawab diya

nil : dude calm down

vi : ya man just ignore her

sw : ignore r u guys mad? u noe wat just wait n watch usko to me abhi sabak sikha ke ata hu...

he went towards gals locker room...he could not see any1 so he went inside...wen he turned around he was shocked

Sharon in mini skirt...swayam froze der itself...seeing him sharon didnt say anything just blushed

he took few steps towards sharon...her heart beat rose wid every step he took towards her...

Sw: Umm..Umm...Sharon???

Sh: Tum yaha girls ki locker room mein kya kare rehe ho??? Phir se detention chaiye kya???

Sw: Woh...woh...

Sh: R u kay??...U were talkin so much jus now...

Sw: HAWT!!!

Sh: Wat???

Swayam come bac to his senses...

Sh: Tumne kya kaha???

Sw: Ntg!!! Maine yaha sirf es liye aaya kyun ki...kyun ki...

Jus then he saw Kria comin out frm d restroom...

Sw: I wtd to c Kria...

Kr: U wtd 2 c me??? Y???

Sw: haan, kriya...to see u...i wanted to ask u if u wanna ...go for dinner tonight...actually ek nayi restaurent open hui hai...so u wanna go...
K: sure...kab...
Sw: 8...i'll pick u up at 8...
K: k fyn...shit...i hav to go...see u...
Sw: k ,...see u...
K: yup...
she walks away...
Sw: tum ne kya socha...huh...dun even think ...mein tum jaise...whatever se baat bhi nahi karte

Sh: mene tumse kaha bhi nai mujse baat karne...
Sharon found swayam starring at her...
Sh: u! Tum saare boys ek jaise hote ho.. Jaise hi ladki dekhi... Usse stare karna chalu...
Sw: oooh pu lease... Tume stare karke aankh fhud vani hai kya muje...
Sh: tumhari kria gayi.. Ab tium locker room se jaa sakte ho??
Swayam walkin closer and closer to sharon..
Sw: kyu! Mere yaha hone se tumhe kya pharak padta hai...
Tumhari saase tez ho jati hai...
Tum khud ko kho deti ho..
Sharons breath bcame faster and faster racing ...
They were just inches apart... Swayam starring at sharons beautiful face and sharons eyes closed... She had given in herself to him... Swayam gaining back his senses...
Sw: i am sorry!!! And left...
Sh: isne kya kaha sory! Aur isne.. Shayad itna bhi bura nai hai...

PMs l8er !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
*Res*

**Unres** ( This is the first and the only one - I couldn't stop myself )

Firstly, so happy on being the first one to like and comment. *pats her own back and dances around like crazy*

And now the update, gosh this was awesome.
Kya likhti ho app di. Maan na padega. Simply fab.

Detention part - Cute ! I mean Swayam admiring Sharon but still it was like Aw !! Apna majnu yaad aa gaya ! 😍

Sw: ( in his head..)...dude...yeh tune kya kiya...waise y did u follow her... - I was like rofl over here. Stupid Swayam Sharon ko nahi follow karega toh aur kisse karega. Lol ! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

sw : vahi jo mujhe karna cahiye - Again I was like - Yay yay !! Ab aayega scene. But you ditched me. *sob* 😛 😭

sw : oye behenji i noe ki me bohot HOT hu! but iska matlab ye nahi ki tum is baat ka undue-advantage lo! - This one again was a great punch. Gosh Tannu toh ek smile de de bas woh hi hum sab ko paagal karne ke liye kaafi hai. He's so cute and so hot ! ☺️😍

Sharon in mini skirt - Finally we get the real Sharon back - she must be looking as beautiful as ever. No wonder Swayam got a shock at that one. 😉

Sw: HAWT!!! - Here I was again rofl !! Gosh, one second he's the saty-away types and the other second he's lost in her. Well, anyone would lose their senses seeing Sharon like that. 🤣

Sw: I wtd to c Kria... - Ahahahaha ... Kya bahana banaya .. Way to go Swayam !! He's so cute ! 🤣 🤣

Sw: i am sorry!!! And left... - Finally. For a change attitude choda isne apna. 😳

Hope to see more of Swaron ( this one also had - but you know na what I mean 😉 ). You know na thoda sa lovey-dovey episode. 😆 I loved it to the fullest. 😊

Update soon. 😊

I know I've commented for the first time. But this won't be the last. 😳
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar... Plz update fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally miss bubbles ne update kar diya... dhanya ho aapke... anyways aacha wala update diya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i started reading it 2day only it was awsm pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

finally miss bubbles ne update kar diya... dhanya ho aapke... anyways aacha wala update diya...


hmara ashirvaad hammesha apke saath he mrs.fubbles !!!!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arey u updated! Nice one! Swayam ne sorry bola! :O
itna funny lagta he Sharon ko halter neck nd mini skirt pehenne me wierd feel hona! :P
anyways, cutiyoue update!! :D
pm chod hi de! :P

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