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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww..that part was really cute where they thought abt each other...thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FABULOUS...PLZ CONTINUE SOON AND DO PM ME THE NEXT TIME YOU UPDATE...WILL BE WAITING...!!!!!!!!!!!...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

I LOVED IT PRIA... bt did not get the PM... 😭

u described it so well...i can imagine the scene...UPDATE SOON...and this time I WANT the PM!!!!!!!

so sorry Cry i thought i sent it out to everyone but some ppl didnt get it
next time pakka i'll pm you! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my god its absolutely stunning. keep writing. i luv it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG OMG AWSUM AWSUM plzzz do pm me!!! i liked this fF very much!! keep up d gud work! AWSUM JOB BY U <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE REGARDING PMS

Thank you everyone for ur wonderful comments and appreciation for my writing!!! i really appreciate it and love reading what each an every one of u have to say. altho i dont always reply i assure u that i do read them, repeatedly sometimes too 😆

and if u want to recieve pms plz add the user: KunwarShakti

pms will be sent out from tht username from now on!
and tmrw im updating chapter 4 and its really long so i know u guys will love it !!
Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I can't waitt!!!:D:D
tommorows going to be a good day!! :) (hope satys like that)...
Yippieee!!!:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh God i cant wait...u r doing a fabulous work...plz plz update tmrw..i m eagerly waiting for d update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alrite guys here it is!!! this chapter is a long one so hope u guys enjoy!!

Chapter 4

Amar and Shakti arrive to the club and Amar holds the door for her as she gets out. He shuts the door and they walk across the parking lot towards the entrance. Along with them a bunch of other people are going in and a group of girls notice Amar and begin whispering and giggling until one of them actually approaches him.

"Hey! Your Kunwar Amarjeet Singh right?"

"Yes I am" Amar politely answered.

"Hi Amar! Im a huge fan of urs" she gushed "would u like to join me and my frends?" she asked sidelining Shakti. Shakti was really annoyed with this random girl talking to Kunwar as if they were buddies.

"I would have liked that but I'm here with someone as you can see and our frends are waiting inside for us."

He walked over to Shakti and held his arm out for her to take. She briefly looks at him before tightly grasping his arm in both of hers and they walk to the entrance.

Amar loves the feel of Shakti's presence beside him and especially now when she was holding on to him in such a possesive manner.

They enter the disco and Amar scans the area until he spots the rest of the gang sitting at a round sofa near the back of the club. He leads Shakti over to them.

"Hey guys!" Sneha greeted them "Bohot time laga dia", she said mischeviously.

Shakti glares at her while Amar inwardly chuckles.

"Come on guys. Let's hit the dance floor!" Archie suggests, grabbing Macci and Alisha before heading off.

"You guys aren't coming?" Shantannu inquired.

Before anyone can say anything Shakti quickly answered, "You go ahead with Kunwar. Sneha and I will catch up in a while."

Sneha and Amar both were a little surprised since the plan was to have Shakti alone with Amar not Sneha! But Amar follows Shantannu as Sneha looked worriedly over at Shakti.

"Uh-oh! Shakti naam ki bomb ab phaati gi" she thought to herself.

"Sneha tell me the truth. You set all this up didnt u? You planned for Amar and me to end up alone right? Yaar do you realize that for the first time I felt self conscience around him. And I'm sure he noticed. Now what is he thinking? Obviously that I'm just acting really weird and..."

"Woah Shakti, calm down! Saans toh lo yaar." Sneha broke in. "Listen right now stop worrying about all that okay. Just enjoy the party."

"Sneha.." Shakti said with warning in her tone.

"Okay okay i wont interfere in this matter anymore" Sneha easily promised since her part of the plan was already done.

Relieved by this Shakti finally relaxed and decided to enjoy the rest of the night. She followed Sneha onto the dance floor and joined the rest of their frends. The loud upbeat music unfocused Shakti as she just let go and danced freely. As she danced she felt someone against her back and instantly stiffened wondering which jerk had come up behind her. She turned but then relaxed when she saw that it was Amar.

"Relax Shakti, it's just me." She smiled at him and they began to dance together letting the moves come to them instinctively.

Suddenly the music changed from the upbeat rhythm to a more slow soothing melody.

Everyone on the dancefloor began to couple up. Shakti wasnt sure what to do, whether to get off the dancefloor or to ask Amar for a dance. Before she could make a decision Amar approached her and held his hand out. Shakti smiled and slowly placed her hand in his. As soon as she did he pulled her against his body. Shakti was shocked by Amar's action but didnt complain since it felt so good to be held against him.

Amar wrapped both his arms tightly around Shakti's slender waist and she lightly rested both her hands on his shoulders. They swayed to the music while getting lost in the depths of each other's eyes.

Shakti was in a daze. She cudnt think straight when being so close to Kunwar. His body was lined right against hers without enough space for even air to pass and his face was only a few inches from hers. He was gazing into her eyes with so much affection and warmth that is was making her melt.

Suddenly Amar stopped dancing and let go of her waist and took her hands off his shoulder, keeping one hand in his own. "Let's get outta here, okay?"

Shakti was overwhelmed by the turmoil of emotions inside of her and just nodded without completely registering what he was saying.

Amar led Shakti out of the club and into the parking lot. When the cold night air hit Shakti her head cleared a little and she realized that they were leaving.

"Kunwar, wait. Where are we going?"

"Let's go somewhere more private."

Shakti was surprised by his reply. "But what about everyone else? They'll notice we're missing."

"Dont worry Shakti, Sneha will handle it."

She shud have known Sneha had something to do with this. But she didnt understand why Kunwar wanted to take her somewhere more private.

They reached his car. Amar turned to face Shakti and put her against the car with her back pressed to it. He then stood in front of her and placed both his hands on both sides of her trapping her against the car. He leaned in close to her face making Shakti's eyes widen a little in surprise.

"Shakti, would you allow me to do something? Something that i have been dying to do since i saw you coming down the stairs in that sexy dress?"

Shakti was stunned by what Amar was doing, but she loved it too. She was curious about what he wanted but couldnt muster the courage to talk so she just gave a quick nod.

Amar smiled that dazzling smile of his with a look of triumph in his eyes. He then leaned further into Shakti leaving only a millimeter of space between their lips. He stopped, waiting to see her reaction.

Shakti closed her eyes in anticipation of what was to come. She knew Amar would want her approval so this is how she was letting him know that she wanted this just as much as he did.

Amar cudnt hold back anymore once he saw her close her eyes, ready to accept what he was offering her. He finally closed the remaining space between them.

The blast of passion that burst through them in that light press of their lips was stunning. Amar pulls back a little and waits for Shakti to open her eyes. She looks at him with need burning in her eyes. Amar closes the space between them again but this time he isnt as gentle. He wraps his arms tightly around her body while she tangles her fingers into his hair. They mesh their lips together and kiss each other with all their strength trying to convey all their love for each other thru that one kiss. They kiss as if they hunger for this and nothing else.

After a while Shakti breaks away as they both gasp for air. Amar leans into her neck and begins planting light kisses and nibbling on her collarbone making Shakti moan with pleasure. He loves that sound.

Shakti is in a frenzy of passion. Her head is muddled with her desire for Amar. She tightens her fingers in his hair and holds on for dear life.

They seem to lose all sense of their surrounding until they hear loud laughter coming from a bunch of people leaving the club behind them. Amar breaks away and tells Shakti to get in the car. Amar climbs into the driver's seat and speeds away from the disco. After about a minute of silence while they try to catch their breath Amar turns towards Shakti and takes one of her hands in his and brings it up to his lips planting a soft kiss on it. Shakti blushes a little but smiles loving the sensation that tingles up her arm.

"Would you mind spending the rest of the night with me, beautiful?"

"I'm guessing that's why Sneha told me i was spending the night with her so i can actually spend it with you?" Shakti grinned at her friend's tactics.

"Yes so we can have some private time together" Amar chuckled.

"So where are we going?" she asked.

"It's a surprise...which reminds me..." he reached to the backseat and retrieved a black cloth. "Put this blindfold on"

"Do i have to?" she pouted.

Amar leaned over and gave a quick kiss on her cheek, "No matter how cute you look u still have to put it on," he said while laughing.

Shakti smiled and tied the cloth around her eyes.

They drove for about half an hour before Amar stopped the car. He then got out and quickly ran over to Shakti's side to get her out. He opened the door, leaned in and picked her up into his arms.

"Kunwar, i can walk.."

"Ur eyes are closed so i dont want to risk ur fall."

"But..."

"Shh..u talk to much. We're almost there anyway."

Shakti kept quiet after that and tried to pay attention to her surroundings. She felt a cool breeze blowing and could hear the waves of the ocean hitting against the shore. She guessed they were probably at the beach. But why at the beach? They cudnt possibly go for a swim this late at night.

As she thought all this Amar suddenly stopped and put her down. Shakti had thought she wud be standing on sand but the ground beneath her was very sturdy, felt like wood or marble under her heels.

"Okay I'm going to take off ur blindfold now. open ur eyes slowly." Amar whispered in her ear.

Shakti slightly shivered from the warm breath hitting her ear and waited while Amar took off the blindfold. She slowly opened her eyes and gasped. She cudnt believe her eyes!

"OH MY GOD!" was all she could gasp out before she became utterly speechless.

alrite ppl leave long comments cuz i love to read them!!

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Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg Omg!!
an now i need to breath!!:P:)
this is awesomeee!!!!
this part is amazing!!!:):D
and thanq thanq thanqq for ur pm!!!
update sooon!!!!!:)

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