Originally posted by: surbhi_d3
part 3
this was utra fab! omg pia u r an amazing writer..i think u should noe dat!d way you write..each n every detail, i can actually feel all d emotions and it was as if i got c everything right in front of eyes!wow..d chemistry b/w kunwar n shakti is beyond imagination..!i m rily luving sneha's part..she truly wants both of dem together..n d smooch..wow..dat dat was mind blowing! d way u described it, so serene, pure n full of passion.. great job!and i rily chuckled at dis dialogue-No matter how cute you look u still have to put it on," he said while laughing.seriously dis part was just out of d world..i'll be reading from d next tom..since i hv my exams going on..i wish i would have started reading dis ff from d very beginning from when u started..n a surprise awaits shakti..eagerly waiting to read what is it..!gr8 job! well penned! *claps*
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