IPKKND:The'TeriMeri'Series OS1 P74/OS2 P78/OS3 P83

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

wowloved itthanks for the pmit was simply superbdo write more and do pm me

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faria86

@faria86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

wow awesome ,cute 👍🏼 interesting one thanks 4 the pm

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

awesome dr 😊

waiting for the next part...loved it 😃

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adorableaisha

@adorableaisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

wow...

dats sumthing unique...

plz continue soon...

thanks 4 pm...

luv aisha..

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KSGforever08

@KSGforever08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

hey amal i loved ur OS w h e n c u p i d t u c k e d m e . ..we only imagine AR after they r grown up nd how they r fallin in love,but u actually went backward nd remained us they r acually born 2 be 2gether.great concept.2 gud!!!.i loved it.best story ever.u r 2 gud sweety.nd i love u startin i didn't have a clue upto much later.i am learning how 2 write an gud essay 4m u 😃.keep on writtin nd keep enternatin us nd we will keep loving u 😃(quote of KSG modified a bit😉)

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

awww! dat was shhooo cute Amal!
loved da naughty baby Armaan! LOL!
amazing OS!...nd a quite unique idea!
thnx 4 pm
luv ya...Sunita:)

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

hey amal that was freakin amazing awesome !!!! 👏👏👏i was so excited that i was just dying to read the next line even before finishing the first.. the description from the baby point of view was soo wonderfully penned down and u deserve an applause for that👏❤️ however you could have added the name of mrs cupid.. just for history sake..- its psyche.😃 and no wonder Armaan was he only one awake that night he's gonna catch up on his sleep later when all the other girls lose theirs thinking day dreaming and dreaming about him..*sigh, me included*😉😆 just dying to know when and how he retrieves that part when he realizes 'oh there is my soul mate!'😳

wonderful work, i just wish it was a long story than a short one though i cant say i would have patience enough for that to end..😛 ok going back and this time I'm going to read slowly and leisurely AND you better update the rest soon.. luv u and thanks a lot for pming for this one.😃

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abandoned

@abandoned

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Mansi dii. Thank You so very much for that wonderful comment🤗 Dii, this is it. Isme aur koi part nahin hain. Its just a one shot that hovered in my head for quite long and I just found time to write it down now. I don't really think I have enough to develop into more parts. But I am so glad that you found it worthy of more parts. That by itself makes me feel happies.😳