OS: jealousy works?

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fascination

@fascination

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

What a os ! Full of emotion !

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Superb⭐️
Luvd d way u protrayd arnav's passion n emotions.
very beautifully writtn.

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Fariha

@felly_a

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

IF Arnav's jealousy comes out this way... then i want him to be double jealous in the party!!☺️

It was just AMAZING!!!👏

- Felly😛

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Anisha/Habiba Barun Sobti ;-)

@Anisha_91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Oh my gosh!! That was BRILLIANT!! It was just out of this world seriously LOVED IT!! and the last sentence i swear i was almost in tears 😳 loved it to bits!! Gosh u gotta write more often!! You're an awesome writer hope u know that!! x

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

aww how sad that he won't remember anything 😭

Anyways nice update

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Amina

@-Ammie-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

omg this was great yaar...

loved it..hope something similar happens in the show..fingers crossed!

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Dat ws awesome!!! Last scene ws so touching; fab job dear

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hey Tashu baby!

I loved it...u shud write more hun!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Too good..!!!!!! I really felt bad for Khushi when I read that he isn't gonna remember any of what happened between them tomorrow.. 😔

But loved the confession, even though he was drunk..