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JeevanaP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

abhi ke abhi chaiye...pls update...

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1
Knock knock 😃

Anyone there ???

Update chaheeyaayy ?? abhi yaa raat ko ?????? 😆

yes me here abhi chaheeeyeee😉😆
😉

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suhaaana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

abhiii wo bhi long update

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shruti_rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

congrats for new thread...

plzzz update nw yaar...

waiting...😍

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wow i want it right now only ...

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lively-piia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1
Knock knock 😃

Anyone there ???

Update chaheeyaayy ?? abhi yaa raat ko ?????? 😆

NAIKI AUR PUCH PUCH...

I NEVER SAY NO TO CHOCLATES N UPDATES...😉

FOR SURE...CHAIYE HI CHAIYE...

Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago

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poongs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

waiting!!!

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Naima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Hellooo !

Sorry i had typed it an hour before but my net crashed down suddenly so it got repaired just now and here's the update .. Sorry for the delay ..

PART 27

She was shocked at the sudden drag .. she turned up and saw maan taking her then she looked at the stairs where they were going and again a fear ran through her .. She withdrew her hand and said

Sir ye aap kya kar rahay hai ??

Can't you see ?? I didn't know miss handa you had an eye sight problem ..

Eye sight problem WHAT ?? Sir I am asking where are you taking me ??

Upstairs ..

Nahi I won't go ..

Yes you will ..

No sir ..

Is that you final decision ??

Yes ..

Fine ..

She thought he had agreed and turned to go back but then felt herself being lifted in the air and that is when she realized maan had picked her up and going upstairs ..

Sir what are you doing ?? I don't want to go !

You said you don't want to go .. You never said i can't take you

he said a smirked ..

What ? sir please someone will see ..

No one will geet .. Everyone is busy plus the lights are dim so relax ..

Sir but I don't want to go ..

Geet shut up or I have better ways to do that

he said eyeing at her lips .. She immediately caught his gaze on her lips and blushed looking down .. maan noticed her blush and chuckled ..

He kept her down near the same place where he had twisted her hand .. The memories came back and she felt scared .. But the next thing she noticed made her shock .. The whole wall was decorated with sorry cards .. Each had an interesting line .. like ..

Sorry for hurting you ..

Sorry I didn't mean it ..

She looked at him and smiled seeing this card ..

She laughed seeing the baby .. It was soo cute ..

She smiled realising it was true sometimes we do say wrong stuff unintentionally

She looked at the dos and carrased it .. It looked soo cute .. She smiled ..

she smiled yet again and in her heart forgave him ..

She had a tear forming in her eye seeing this .. Aww she felt bad for being mean with him .. She realised sometimes it's not you fault and people don't do it intentially .. But this card was soo cute she thought ..

She started to laugh seeing these a drop of tear escaped her eye sseing the unsonditional care and concern he had ... She could see the height to which he went for undoing his mistake .. She felt so happy and special .. She had a special kind of feeling which she herself didn't know why .. She was use to special type of treatments but when maan did it she felt out of this world so happy so blessed ..

She turned around to say it was okay but then she saw a cake ' It was a chocolate cake decorated with chocolates all over it's sides and written I AM SORRY in between it ' Her eyes once again became misty seeing the love and concern she turned around and hugged him tight when he said ..

I am sorry geet .. I seriously didn't mean to wo ..

Shhh .. Sir it's okay .. you didn't have to do all this .. I am sorry for being mad at you ..

Nahi nahi I am sorry ..

Nahi sir me sorry ..

No me ..

Maine kaha na me ..

Sir me ..

Geeet '

Maaan ..

Oops she bit he tongue realizing she said his name without sir while maan smiled thinking it felt so heavenly to be heard his name without the sir ..

I am sor

Please aab dubara na shuru ho jana .. Waisay bhi once you start you forget to end it ..

Hawww ! aap kehna kya chatay hain main buhat bak bak karti hoon ??

Maine aisa kab kaha magar tum yehi samajhti hoo tou main kya kar sakta hoon he said innocently ..

Sir aap aap aap na ..

Maine na kya ..

Aap aap buhat buray ho ..

She said and turned to leave when he caught her wrist ..

Aree ruku ..

She turned and showed her fake anger ..

Hmmm she said while rolling her eyes cutely and stamping her foot on the ground ..

Hayee she looked soo cute with this fake anger he thought ..

Geet agar tum naraz ho tou chocolates and teddy nahi chaheyay ..

She smiled widely at the mention of her two most favorite things .. maan saw that smile and decided to tease her ..

Chaloo I'll have to return it .. aab tum naraz ho tou thori loo gee ..

Nahi main kab naraz hoon .. she turned and saw him standing with a huge teddy bear which was almost her height and a box of chocolates all plain ones no nuts and fruits lol ..

She immediately snatched it for him and said ye meray hain .. She was soo excited that in her flow of excitement she kissed his cheeks saying Thank you and smiled .. She started to admire the chocolates and feel the teddy .. Then she saw maan looking at her with shocked expression and it then dawn to her what had she done .. she blushed and said ..

Wo ' umm sorry maine kaha than a remember when veer jee gives chocolates I kiss him tou wo ..

Maine bhi kaha tha na I won't mind he winked naughtily ..

She smiled and he said ..

Are cake tou katoo ..

Haan wo tou bhool he gaee ..

She picked up the knife and said par what should we sing ?? hmmm she said thinking deeply then replied haan you sing.. happy sorry to you ..

What ??

Geet tum pagal ho kya ?? what do you mean by happy sorry to you ??

Aree look cake par kya likha hai ?? soory na tou happy sorry gaaooo jaldii ..

Hmm he said and stated to sing happy sorry to you while looking here and there hoping no one caught The Maan singh khurana singing happy sorry lol .. geet cut the cake and then she fed him a piece and he fed her ..

They smiled and she again thanked him but then realized something and pouted '

Sir main ye ghar kaisay ay kar jaoon gee ?? she asked innocently pouting ..

Kya matlab ??

Sir it's soo big main kaisay chupaoon isse ??

Chupana kyun hai ??

Uff ho sir aapko na veer jee ..bhiyaa bhai aur us us Vicky ka nahi pata meray pechay parh jaeen gay police officers ki tarhaan ..

kahan se aya hai ??

Kon laya ??

kyun ??

Kab ??

Kis liyee ??

blah blah blah she said mimicking in their voices ..

Maan chuckled .. Nahi kuch nahi ho gaa ..

Ho gaa sir I know na ..

Geet maine kaha na kuch nahi ho gaa ' Ranbir nahi pochaay ga ..

Sir I know ! All four of them will be after me ..

Geet .. 😡

Acha fine if they'll ask tou you'lll answer ok ??

Haan theek hai .. He said and smirked he wanted to see how ms bak bak lies and stammers in front of her brothers he was dying to see that ..

She picked the teddy and went down the cards and cake and chocolate maan promised to be delivered at her place .. although he could have done the same with the teddy too but he wanted to enjoy her scared face .. Evil MSK lol ..

He again stopped her ..

sunnoo ..

jee ..

Wo can we be best friends again ??

Sureee she said and extended her hand but maan jerked her closer and said ..

Lagta hai you forgot what i told you last time .. He kissed her cheeks and said ..

Now we're best frineds .. she Smiled ... and proceeded to go down ..

Geet came a little before him .. she came down and unknown to her 5 eyes followed her and were

surprised to see a huge teddy in her hand .. those five eyes were 4 of her brothers and the 5^th was of Dadi's .. yes the CID dadi lol who had seen maan take her upstairs and smiled thinking her dream to come true soon .. But seeing the teddy she was also surprised maan and gifting teddy she was really happy thinking he was changing and she knew only geet could do this ..

How was it ??

Please comment !

PRECAP: Brothers becoming inquiry machine .. geet helpless and maan enjoying .. 😉😉😆😆😆

Blast from the past .. 😡😡😡

Next part ..

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Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago