Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum 👏 👏 lol ur not in d mood???hahaha cont soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys i'll post prt ten in 11 hour 😊
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hey continue soon...its an awesome part... 😉
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hey guys im so so so so so so so sorry i cant cont since i have skool tommorrow 🤢 ..ne ways i'll try and cont tomorrow 😊
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hey guyz i'll post prt 10 in 1/2 hour 😊
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Part 10

so kripa turns around and see's a girl with her luggage

k- hi...i think i know u from some where

gal- yes u do

k-umm....sorry i cant remember

kripa gives a innocent smile

gal- hey atleat u tried to remember me....well i am...

k- u r....?

gal-i am.....

k- irritated- u really sound like my friend simone

gal- arrey yaar meri irritation tumhe mera naam to yaad delaya

k- omg simone

s- yes its me

k- shocked/surprised- i havent seen u for a long time

s- yea same here

k- so ur also going to study here?

s- yep😃

both gals scream and yell in the omg way

m- hey sis

then he see's simone

m- hey beautiful

s- typical old manek...still hasnt changed

m- u noe my name?

s- heck yea i even noe u

m- u do😕

k- hey u dumbutt remember simonemy friend in hight skool

m- o yea u were a hottie bak then

them simone goes up to him and lay fully hits him

s- wen will u change manek?

k- manek dont u feel ashamed on hitting on older women and my friend

m- sis she's only 1 year older then me

both gals sigh

s- so kripa werent u in harvard

k- yep i got in to the forigen exchange program here..nd u?

s- well i just recently moved to southern england and got a scholar ship hea

k- omg congrats

s- thnkz

m- u grls r getting me bored here...nd besides im hungry can we go and eat now

k- wut happened with anitah

m-oh she had some important work to do..thats why

k-oh..ok lets go and eat..come on simone

s- yea ok lets go

so they went to some resturant and ate food

after they were done with the food

m- ok sis i'll b going to the airport now

k- but whatabt my stuff and the hotel

m- dont worry abt that i already did all of that and our stuff is in the trunk

k- thnkz manek

m- ur welcome

so manek dropped both grls at the dorm and dropped kripas suit cases up to her room

m- bye sis take care of ur self...and dont stress out

k- yea yeai noe i got that lecture many times

m-with a stern face- u noe wut happens to u when u stress out

s-wut?😕

manek faces simone

m- oh she acts like she is drunk and does not know what she's doing last time for her midterms she was so stressed out that she thought our neighbors house was ours and went to their daughters beddroom and went to sleep

k- MANEK!!!!!!!😡

m- hes sis relax i was just warning simone

m- ne ways simone take care of my sis

s- yea sure i will

both siblings hug then manek goes

later wen tha girls were done unpaking

hey does the internet work on the computer

s- i think soo why?

k- oh nothing i just wanted to check my e-mail

s- oh ok

so kripa goes on the computer

AT KHANNA HOUSE

the family is sitting there

a- so bhai how'd u like dinner last nite?

k-it was good why?😕

a- just good not really good

k-O K yea it was really good

a- so wait it was really good not perfect

k- angad r u okay, i always have dinner with u guys

a- but not with mishti

k-😳wut r u talking abt

a- u noe wut😛

the family was laughing

karthick was running behind angad as angad was trying to hide behind dadi

d- arey ab tum donu bhi bas akro

d- angad kyun mere bete ko sata ra hey ho

k- yea angad😛

a- arey girl friend mein kya krun...yei hai na mujshe meri hot si girl friend ko cheelna(snatch) ja ta hai

d- to girl friend koun hai

a- app

d- angad tu kbi nahi sudregha

a- u r rite😛

the family is having a great time talking, teasing karthick

***********END OF PART*********

sorry guys 4 the delay hope it was long enough😊

Edited by hawoo - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
i jus caught up, i rlylike it!!! i love that nothing is rly predictable, keep it up!! cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey that was great loved the teasing karthik part..continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
thnkz u guys i'll cont l8r on today 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its wonderful! u know wat makes ur story wonderful? its because ur story is unpredictable! i don't have the least idea abt wat is going to happen next until u post the next part. so continue soon....

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