ArHi FF: Bairi Piya - A Vengeful Lover Ch. 5 Pg-23 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Aww!! I'm all lost! Even to comment..!😳

Their love.. It could not be more interesting, sizzling than this!!😳

I loved it..! I came to comment, only after reading twice..!
Can a man be this romantic..? Giving flowers and making breakfast!! Gosh☺️

It was a most beautiful update, making me impatient for the 2nd one!!

Please update soon..! And thanks for the PM dearies😊


Hola! Awww that was such a sweet comment ^_^ And nope, Arnav could not possibly get cheesier 😆 In fact it was even more cheesy and lovey dovey, and we edited it out, knowing our ASR would shoot us if he ever found out how sappy we made him 😆

Glad you liked the update though! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: srahs

fab fab fab fab fab fab fab


Thank you Thank you Thank you!

Originally posted by: crazy44

how cuTe!
beauTiful update dEar! <3
arnav has becum realy roMantic!
cAnt wait for mOre :)


Hehe That's what marriage has done to him, clearly 🤣 But glad you liked the update!

Originally posted by: meghnas

awww so cute! 👏👏
Mr n Mrs Raizada are adorable!!! waiting for more 😊


Aww! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Glad you liked the ArHi romance! :)

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234


Looved it
love the fact that we didnt hav to wait long for a arhi scene
it was written beautifully
do add me to the pm list


Have added you as a buddy! Haha the real drama in this story starts soon😉 But thanks for reading and commenting! Glad you like the story!

Originally posted by: kashilpa

goodies in the beginning only...😛cool story, though the ff name seems very dark ...hope no tragedies up ahead😊pls pm me when u update it.


Yupyup! We didn't want to deprive you of the ArHi moments :) And as for the dark ff part...just wait and see😆 Have added you as a buddy! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

wow that was so cute romantic and happy!


Lovely update👏


Haha yupp! Happy Sappy Galore! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Awww, Very Adorable =) 😍 I Need Details In Next Update About The Dessert ;) ☺️


😲 Haila Shaila! Details on dessert?! They would call us besharam, and kick us out of the bedroom 😆😆 So glad you enjoyed the update though! 🤣


Edited by naishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: littlemoi

the update was soo sweet!! mr and mrs raizada are soo adorable!! and the little aman sounds like cutie too!! thank you so much for the pm!! plzz update real soon!!


Aww Thanks so much for reading and commenting! *Imagine how cute Arnav's and Khushi's baby would be* 😆

Originally posted by: shyperson

Great update can't wait to read more 😊


Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed the update :)


Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

aww! its such a cute update! and such a good plot too! great job you 2! I love it alot! Aman sounds adorable and Khushi seems like she has completely forgotten bout Shyam! yay!


Thanks so much love! Khushi has forgotten about Shyam for sure...but the real question is, has he forgotten about her? 😲 Anywho, glad you liked the update! :)

Originally posted by: Zeee

ooolala!! like this. so cute family

xxx


Aww thanks so much for reading and commenting! Soso glad you enjoyed the update! :)

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

aww, arnav is so cute. Haha, payash were hilarious!


Haha I don't think any of us have ever seen Payash being this outspoken...ever 😆 But thanks for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed the update!

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update! Can't wait to read more!


Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: nine2

just read first part...omg..i love the way this is going..lol @Payash n ArHi..n ArHi already have a baby..Aman..n he was really cute...waiting for next part...


Aww thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed the update! Haha we decided to fast forward through the sappy years of ArHi...but you'll see more of them later on 😆

Originally posted by: xXShriyaXx

wonderful story. PLs add me to ur pm list:)


Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Have added you as a buddy! :)

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

aww, they have a son...so cute

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm


Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed the update!

Originally posted by: nm21

Wow! I'm so glad I read this, such a great 1st chapter-you really understand the essence of each character and it came across in your writing! It is really very well written! Kudos to you!

Loved the concept, too cute! :)

Pls add me to your pm list!

xo


Wow, thanks for that awesome comment. Means a lot :) Have added you as a buddy! But thanks so much once again! :)

Originally posted by: Prinsesse.Suvi

Awesome start! Actually, I don't hate Shyam. I get that he needs to concentrate on his career, and if Khushi can't wait, then she shouldn't. But whats with Shyam that will be important in the future? Hmmm?

And the first chapter...
Arnav and Khushi are adorable! And little Aman Raizada. How cute! They're so coupl-ey, lovey-dovey type parents!😳 SHO CUTEEE!


Suvi! 🤗 Hola :) Hm keep thinking about Shyam...the secrets will stay hidden 😆

Hehe so glad you liked the update love! :) Thanks for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: meenaluma

awesome ff pls add me 2 ur pm list pls pm me when u update next part


Thanks so much for reading and commenting! So glad you're liking the story and will definitely PM you! :)

Originally posted by: amrit23

just started reading it n loved it completly...continue soon dear i'll b waiting for the nxt part


Thanks so much for liking the story! Next part will be updated soon :)

Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara

awesome much...great start cont soon n plzzz pm me on d next part


Thanks so much! And have added you as a buddy!

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

What a lovely first Chapter!

Awwh they have a son? that's so adorable. Arnav and Khushi's son. Gosh he must be so cute. Chota Raizada ❤️

Please do continue it very soon. Eagerly waiting for the next part.


Thank you soso much! Haha too bad we have a while to go in the show before they even confess their love...let alone get married...forget the chota raizada part 😆

Glad you enjoyed the update though!


Thanks so much! Will do!


Thanks for reading and commenting!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Loved the update girlies!!

It was so romantic.
I really hope Arnav and Khushi's relationship stays like this!!
It's so perfect.
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for the PM.
⭐️


Aww Thanks so much! :) And you just have to wait and watch. Is it really possible for ArHi's relationships to be without any troubles? -_- But glad you enjoyed the update!

Originally posted by: anita_21492

well this part was maha cute


Why thank you!

Originally posted by: annie.shona

so this vengeful lover is our shyam babua...


oh gr888 ..

btw gr888 update

continue soon..

and plzzz add me to ur pm list..


Maybe...or maybe not! 😲 😆 You'll just have to wait and watch! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! So glad you enjoyed the update!

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234


When are you planning on updating?


In a few minutes!

Originally posted by: renee27

woww...im blushing...this is way too cute dear...continue soon...loved it😊


Awww so glad you're enjoying the update! :) Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Hello Shello Everyone!

Sure, you could throw tomatoes at us, but then what would you put on your sandwiches? You could throw belans at us, but then when you want rotis, what will you flatten them with :O
So see, the best solution is that you keep all your precious things by your side, now if you have any pretty shoes of purses of course, we take anything and everything given 😃.

Haha, that's our way of saying SORRY for that huge delay. This is Aishu saying: I BLAME NAINA! ITS ALL HER FAULT!
But now, as usual, enjoy, add this account for pms, and please hit the like button and comment :D


Chapter 2: Forgotten Pasts

"Arnav..."

"Hmm?"

"Get up..."

"No..." he whined, pulling her closer.

"You're going to be late..."

"I don't care."

She gasped, "Did Arnav Singh Raizada just say he doesn't care if he's late?"

"Arnav Singh Raizada is perfectly happy where he is. And anyway, it's all your fault that I didn't get any sleep last night," he replied, hugging her closer, if that was possible, and planting a feathery light kisses along her bare shoulder.

"Arnav! Akash and Payal will be here soon with Aman, get up!" she said, struggling to get out of his arms.

He pouted, then pulled away reluctantly to make his way to the bathroom.

"I'll get you back for this soon Mrs. Raizada," he yelled as he shut the bathroom door behind him. "Very soon," he reaffirmed, opening the door to glare at her again.

"And I can't wait," she said winking at him with an impish grin.


Arnav gulped down his coffee, "I'm late!" he said again.

"We've already determined that remember?" Khushi replied bemusedly as she sipped leisurely at her cup. "And I thought someone said they didn't care."

He glared at her over the rim of the mug, pausing only to shovel some toast into his mouth.


The door banged open and Akash and Payal arrived, with a crying Aman in their arms.

"Khushi!"

"Bhabhi! Your little devil is crying away and we can't manage him anymore!" screamed a frustrated Akash as he handed over Aman to his mother.

"Don't you dare call my son a devil Akash." reprimanded Khushi, "He's an angel I tell you, a perfect angel," she took her son, who willingly jumped into her arms, and placed a kiss on his forehead.

Aman fell silent almost immediately causing Akash and Payal's mouths to fall open. Khushi smiled at Akash, who turned to Payal with a frown, "Why can't you do that?!"

"Because I'm not the baby's mother," she replied pointedly, punching him in the shoulder.

"Ow! That hurt!" he complained, rubbing his shoulder.

"Good. That was the point." she replied with a sarcastically sweet smile.

"Ok Akash, you spend your time here, while I head to the office" said an annoyed Arnav, "There's a lot of work, and no one to do it."

"Can I come?" Payal asked hopefully.

"No!" Akash replied, cutting Arnav off, "you are staying home and RESTING. R-E-S...resting!

An annoyed Arnav placed a kiss on his son's forehead as he rolled his eyes, after giving a peck to his wife's lips he grabbed his remaining coffee and headed out the door.

"Wait! Arnav bhai! I'm coming with you!" yelled a panicking Akash, giving Payal a kiss he rushed after his bhai, who by then had disappeared from view.

The two wives laughed watching their husbands leave, "These Raizada men. They'll never change."

"Anyway Khushi, I'll head back home. You seem to be really tired," said Payal, seeing how Khushi could barely stifle her yawns. "Seems like Arnav kept you up all night," she continued, teasing her best friend.

"Payal. Shut up." retorted Khushi, who could only pretend to be angry as her cheeks turned a crismon red.

"Don't worry. Don't worry. I know how it is," replied Payal as the two women shared a look, "Raizadas!" they yelled out simultaneously, bursting out in laughter.


Khushi had put just Aman into his crib for his afternoon nap, and was beginning to make her lunch when the bell rang.

That's obviously not Payal, she thought as she headed towards the door, spatula in hand. It better not be that creepy salesperson again! What part of 'I don't want to buy the stupid lifetime supply of rugs' does he not get?!?

She opened the door angrily, ready to start screaming at whoever it was. However, the only sound that could be heard was the clanking of the spatula as it hit the floor.

"Sh..Sh..Shyam?" she whispered hesitantly.

"Hi Khushi," he replied in a distant voice.

"I...you..here...What are you doing here?" she managed to stutter.

" It's nice to see you too," he scoffed.

"I..That's not what I..." she stuttered again.

"Don't worry Khushi, I know you're happy to see me!" He pushed his way past her into the house, signature leather jacket swung over his shoulder. "Are you alone Khushi Gup-, sorry Raizada?" he asked. "The husband's not around?"

"How did you-"

"I moved to a different city Khushi, not a different planet. Plus I went to AR first." he replied breezily.

By then he had settled himself onto the couch; flipping through the magazines littered on the coffee table indifferently, he continued talking. "So he's the CEO huh? Owns the whole company and heads the menswear section? Nice," he laughed bitterly.

Khushi internally cringed at his tone, but maintained an unfazed look as she questioned, "Shyam, why are you here?"

"I want to sell you a mango tree! Come on Khushi! We used to be best friends! I-"

"Really, because as far as I know, we haven't talked for over five years," she interrupted, arms crossed at his annoying behavior.

He looked up at her, head cocked, "Aww, you counted? How sweet!" He got up off the couch, approaching her, "Khushi! Khush Khush, haven't you ever heard the saying, the past is the past? Come on, lets put the past behind us," he grabbed a resistant Khushi into a bear hug. Pulling back he continued, "and you can tell me how much better I am compared to Mr. Raizada."

"Shyam," Khushi said, pushing him away, "Shyam, what are you doing here?"

"I told you baby, I was in the city and-"

"Shyam. Cut. The. Crap. Why are you really here?" she cut him off swiftly, her annoyance with the situation clearly evident.

He pursed his lips, thinking. "Ok. So. I wasn't really just in the city."

"I figured."

"Look Khushi," he reached for her hands but she stepped back, causing him to raise his hands in defeat. Stepping back he fell back onto the couch, "Look, I was going through my stuff the other day, and I was like, 'Shyam you are an idiot! You let Khushi Gupta go!' And so I decided I would find you, and see if we could work things out..."

"You are an idiot."

He opened his mouth to speak, then closed it again, head hanging. Brushing his floppy hair aside he spoke again, "So I'm kinda late but we still love each other-"

Khushi was about to interrupt again when a wail erupted from Aman's room.

Shyam balked, as he turned to stare at her wide eyed "Wow. I am really late."

Rolling her eyes, Khushi walked past him to the nursery. He followed close behind, peering over her shoulder at the tiny bundle in the big crib, "O My God!" he said.

"Shyam! Leave!"

He raised his hands in defense, "Alright alright, I'm leaving!" he paused at the doorway, "I'll be in the kitchen, hungry you know?"

Khushi's mouth fell open, as she watched him go, What the hell was I thinking in business school? she thought as she rocked her baby. Once she finally got Aman to fall asleep again, she entered the kitchen to see Shyam had expertly finished not only making, but also eating the lunch she had begun before his entry.

"Shyam!" she said insistently, " as you can see, I'm happy as I am, and I definitely do NOT need you back in my life."

"Khushi darling," he replied brashly, "People don't need Shyam Jha in their lives, they want him." He continued speaking coolly, rummaging through the cupboards, "Khushi, don't you have anything good to eat? Like some pizza or something?"

"Shyam. Seriously. You need to leave the house. Now," Khushi answered as she pulled the plate out of his hand and closed the cupboards forcefully.

"Come on Khushi! Athithi Devo Bhava remember?" he replied, refusing to budge.

"Shyam. Manohar. Jha."

"Ok, ok, I'm going!" he headed towards the the front door, turning to walk backwards he added, "but only for now. And only of you promise I can meet the Mr. Raizada you left me for."

Khushi sighed, exsasperated, "Shyam please just leave, and not just my house, my life."

"I'm going now," he said, "but I'll be back," he continued imitating the Terminator, "This isn't the last you've seen of Shyam Manohar Jha, Mrs.Khushi Raizada."


Edited by naishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omggg this is the cutest ff ever!!
absolutely adorable!
i love aman...that cutie pie...and then ofcourse arnie.. hottie <3

loving payal and akash too..they are so funny!!

the relationship between ArHi is very sweet!

but omg shyamu is back!!?!?! as much as i hate him..i love his cockiness and sarcasm hahaha! it had me laughing!!! but awww why is he back?!?!? =( make him good!!! and i hope he doesn't create problems between them!!

great job ladies <3

xox
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Edited by Smileyface - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome in the begin love the bonding between arnav and khushi she should let arnav know whats going on that the snake is back good lord he is a creep and so disgusting thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

i so ooo hate this creepy person shyaam manohar jha..


arghh .. !!! soo irritating..

but it was a gr8888888 update

i loved khushi -arnav-payal-akash bonding..



continue soon

take care :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update guys ! I won't mind Shyam as long as he doesn't hurt Kushi ! Update soon !:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nanina and Aishu!!

Finally u gals updated..! Though late yet updated..! So I leave u 😃

God..! First half was truely good and why do u have to introduce him in the second chapter itself..!
No, you can't ruin their happy moments with one chapter. It's just one chapter..!

Creep filthy idiot b**d Shyam..! I hate him. Knowing Kushi is happily married he's intervening..!😡

Better, Kushi needs to tell this to Arnav..! Hope she does..!

Thanks for the PM dearies..! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
hes bAck , why? i hate hIm! and hes goNa cum betwn them! argh!
buT i gues the story is takin a intersting tUrn!
cAnt wait 4 the next part!
and please update soON! dont keEp us waiting like the last time :_

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