ArHi FF: Bairi Piya - A Vengeful Lover Ch. 5 Pg-23

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

aww! its such a cute update! and such a good plot too! great job you 2! I love it alot! Aman sounds adorable and Khushi seems like she has completely forgotten bout Shyam! yay!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

ooolala!! like this. so cute family

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

aww, arnav is so cute. Haha, payash were hilarious!

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Great update! Can't wait to read more!

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Chaiya_Chaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: naishu

himu it was for the the AN threads writing contest, which btw, *proud moment* we won something, i think twas best story/concept?

Wow..thats awesome.. Congratulations to both of u!!

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Chaiya_Chaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

just read first part...omg..i love the way this is going..lol @Payash n ArHi..n ArHi already have a baby..Aman..n he was really cute...waiting for next part...

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xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

wonderful story. PLs add me to ur pm list:)

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..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

aww, they have a son...so cute

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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nm21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Wow! I'm so glad I read this, such a great 1st chapter-you really understand the essence of each character and it came across in your writing! It is really very well written! Kudos to you!

Loved the concept, too cute! :)

Pls add me to your pm list!

xo

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Awesome start! Actually, I don't hate Shyam. I get that he needs to concentrate on his career, and if Khushi can't wait, then she shouldn't. But whats with Shyam that will be important in the future? Hmmm?

And the first chapter...

Arnav and Khushi are adorable! And little Aman Raizada. How cute! They're so coupl-ey, lovey-dovey type parents!😳 SHO CUTEEE!