ArHi FF: Bairi Piya - A Vengeful Lover Ch. 5 Pg-23

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naishu

@naishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: niru273
wow another FF ! i hav read both ur works !!n i love all of dem !
im lookin forward2 this one !
i liked d prologue , its very different from d actual plot ...n its very interesting ...has already started building up curiosity in my mind ...now i jus cant wait 2 read wat happens next !
do update soon ...n good luvk wid this FF

omfg! wanna join our admiration society? we just sit around and admire us- its great fun 😆

but thank you! we hope not to disappoint!

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
nice start dear...

thanks!

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11
wow! It looks interesting. Please continue soon and add me in your PM list. xxx

thank you!

Originally posted by: coolsabs
wow nice...thanks for the PM and please please update soon..hey Naina...we met after so many days...how are you?

thank you! naina can reply to that later :P but i mean, im sure shes fine...like eating and shit 🤔

Originally posted by: monkeydog18
Okay firstly eww... Shyam calling Khushi baby?! Grr swear I'll punch him one day! And second its looking great!! Loved prologue and update soon! :)

haha yes. the characters are kinda a little bit more modern than in the actual story, more urban really. ohhh punch him? me kick!
😆 thanks dude

Originally posted by: littlemoi
fantastic prologue!! plzz continue soon with the first chapter!! thanks a bunch for the pm!! looking forward to reading this!!

thank you! we shall!

Originally posted by: bookadict303
Continue soon :)

if we dont, it's naina's fault [:l]

Originally posted by: srahs
loved it

thankx for pm continue soon plz

thank you!

Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan
Wow. I loved it. It hard to imagine Shyam in a real relationship being nice to Khushi or am I speaking too soon? Anyway I really enjoyed it. Wonderful writing both of you. It shocked me a bit to see Shyam being so nice. But that's only because of what I've written about him. It's a nice change to see him so normal I guess. I loved it. Thanks for the PM. And Merry Christmas to you both.

Best Wishes,

KF

hmmm you'll see 😆
well nice he's always been...yuckily so 🤢 but we hope you enjoy this and having an amazing writer like yourself compliment us just does wonders to our esteems!

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smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Loved it but shyam? why?😭

where is my sweetheart arnav ?

i want him now😭

pls update soon and give me my love

Smitha

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hey Aishu and Naina!!

I loved the prologue buddies..! 😉

Khushi-Shyam broke up. Is Shyam a good guy here?? Just leaving for his career or something else??

Where is the hero gals? When is he gonna make his entry??

Thanks for the PM😊

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

fab start...

waiting to read more

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Chaiya_Chaiya

@Chaiya_Chaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

First of all, happy belated Christmas!

Hope u guys had blast!

This is really nice concept..no more snake...Thank God!

@Aishu...did u ever write n SR FF similar to this concept...where shyam's part was played by *cough cough*...bc the prologue does seem feemiliar!!

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..Naina..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: nine2
First of all, happy belated Christmas!
Hope u guys had blast!

This is really nice concept..no more snake...Thank God!

@Aishu...did u ever write n SR FF similar to this concept...where shyam's part was played by *cough cough*...bc the prologue does seem feemiliar!!

Haha this was an Abhi-Nikki FF before :) I have no idea if you may have read that but yeah 😆 Good catch! 😳

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Chaiya_Chaiya

@Chaiya_Chaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Naina2127

Haha this was an Abhi-Nikki FF before :) I have no idea if you may have read that but yeah 😆 Good catch! 😳

Thanks for clarification...Well I was close enough.. n i liked them as well..so it might have been an AN ff that i had read

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Siva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Nice & interesting👏

pls continue soon

Add me to ur pm list

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naishu

@naishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: nine2

Thanks for clarification...Well I was close enough.. n i liked them as well..so it might have been an AN ff that i had read

himu it was for the the AN threads writing contest, which btw, *proud moment* we won something, i think twas best story/concept?

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naishu

@naishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: siva2901
Nice & interesting👏
pls continue soon
Add me to ur pm list

thank you!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
fab start...

waiting to read more

hope u like it!

Originally posted by: smithasrk
Loved it but shyam? why?😭

where is my sweetheart arnav ?

i want him now😭

pls update soon and give me my love

Smitha

hehe wait n watchhh

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Hey Aishu and Naina!!

I loved the prologue buddies..! 😉

Khushi-Shyam broke up. Is Shyam a good guy here?? Just leaving for his career or something else??

Where is the hero gals? When is he gonna make his entry??

Thanks for the PM😊