ArHi FF: Bairi Piya - A Vengeful Lover Ch. 5 Pg-23 - Page 3

Okay firstly eww... Shyam calling Khushi baby?! Grr swear I'll punch him one day! And second its looking great!! Loved prologue and update soon! :)

wow nice...thanks for the PM and please please update soon..hey Naina...we met after so many days...how are you?

wow another FF ! i hav read both ur works !!n i love all of dem !
im lookin forward2 this one !
i liked d prologue , its very different from d actual plot ...n its very interesting ...has already started building up curiosity in my mind ...now i jus cant wait 2 read wat happens next !
do update soon ...n good luvk wid this FF

wow! It looks interesting. Please continue soon and add me in your PM list. xxx

Wow. I loved it. It hard to imagine Shyam in a real relationship being nice to Khushi or am I speaking too soon? Anyway I really enjoyed it. Wonderful writing both of you. It shocked me a bit to see Shyam being so nice. But that's only because of what I've written about him. It's a nice change to see him so normal I guess. I loved it. Thanks for the PM. And Merry Christmas to you both.

Best Wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: music1

Hey Aishu,
Another one ...this time teaming up with ur buddy? Expecting Double dhamaka hun.Well the concept looks cool except I hate the name Shyam Manohar Jha(as horrible as him😡)

yesss me n nainz, hehe double trouble!
buhaha ee korangenne kondu njankal oru kali kalikyum 😆

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Shyam nd khushi???????? Wat the...

🤣 ASR ka asar????

Originally posted by: moon_mine

well add me in...m so interested to read this!!!!

that sounds awesome!

Originally posted by: srahs

continue soon plz

add me to ur pm list

we shall!

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

nice start...

hmmm shyam broke khushi's heart... does that creep ever do any thing rite...

his loss arnavs gain

cant wait 4 his entry...

amazing concept...

to answer your question, Nope 😆
and yes hehe arnie shall enter soon :P thanks yaar!

Originally posted by: -Saibo-

Looks good!

thanks sana!

Originally posted by: srahs

fab add me to ur pm list

thanks!

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun4eva

interesting ff.. pls add me to ur pm list.. love to read more...

thanks we hope you continue liking it!

Originally posted by: Kritianya

seems 2 b nice concept
add me in
continue soon

thank you!

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Ahhh, It's Interesting 😳

hehe thank youuu

Originally posted by: pri12

awsome...plzzz pm me whn u updte...

thank you!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Aishu & Naina!!

Fab prologue girlies.

I really loved it.

Looking forward to reading this.

Thanks a bunch for the PM.

Merry Xmas!

⭐️

thanks dude! hope you love this and keep giving fab comments :P
Happy New Year!

Originally posted by: Zeee

wooo this shyam didnt get married to khushi..lol

nice start

xxx

haha isnt that cool 😆

Originally posted by: dumas

good lord here come trouble you to teaming up lord help us two of you should come with warning labels stay away combustion is expected awesome os shot

love the prologue sounds very interesting can't wait for the update thanks for the pm

it seems you have met naina before 😆 oh..wait..what? you were talking bout both of us?
pfffttt
thanks for that pic, neva knew asr smiled then 🤣 but ishh he looks FINEEE

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

nice prologue. Eew, shyam! Haha,but it sounds really good.

thanks yaar! hehe 😆 nice reaction

Originally posted by: felly_a

AWESOME!! It sounds very interesting!! 😳 Shayam breaking her heart..well you can't expect anything else.. But i'm looking forward to arhi's first meeting 😍 please continue soon and add me to your pm list 😊

thank you! we hope you keep finding it intriguing! isnt shyam a- language :\

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

nice prologue

thank you 😊