Phool Aur Kaante (A.K) - Page 25

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They all got up and was about to leave but angad stops and looks at kripa who was still in same position sitting lost thinking about something. He walked up to her and put his hand on her shoulder
A: kripa
K: came back to since and looked up at him)
A: lets go
K: nods and gets up)

Angad puts his arms around her then slowly puts fake smile to her but she still had tears in her eyes. They walked to their bikes and rids off. Kripa was speeding really fast and the gang had to speed fast to for them to be with her. They reached to a place. It was kind of farmhouse and it seem like there was party.
J: we have to go to the roof and fire from there so no one could see us
P: yea I got the guns that doesn't make sound when u fire
K: I want one
A: we will do it kripa
K: I want to do it….give me one
Prithvi hands all 5 of them the guns and they climb to the roof. Each of them take their position in each side and down was the party. Kripa sees someone and points the gun at him then shots right in his heart. The man falls down on the pool will blood starts coming from him
Ka: kripa….u should have told us when u were starting
K: I don't have time

The mans man sees them and tries to shot at kripa but same time angad shots him. There was lots of bodyguards and they started killing them will people were going crazy down screaming. All the gang kills the mans and people run away form the house. They climb down and kripa runs to the man that she shot and jumps in the poll then pulls him out from the water. She looks at him then laughs.
K: u lost ur brother zaib….I will kill each me member of ur family and wont spear any of them…
A: this is his brother
K: nods)
Kripa takes the cell phone that was in the table and dills zaibs # that had recorded on the cell phone. Zaib picks it up and thinks it his brother
Z: yes what is it?
K: one down…3 more to go
Z: who is this?
K: forgot ur pal…aww zaib u have bad memory…come to ur farmhouse and pick up ur dead brothers body
Z: angry) why u?
K: cuts the phone)


Zaib gets to the farm house and sees his brothers dead body…he runs to him and sits next to him. His man comes up to him and holds phone in front of him
M: sir there is a call for u
Z: takes the phone)
A: come to ur beach house and see ur other brother (cuts the phone)
Z: angry and hit's the phone down then holds from his mans collar) I thought u said she died….and angad was in jail
M: sir…her car did explode…she did die

Z: picks up the gun and kills four of his mans that's suppose to kill kripa then drives to beach house. He finds his other dead brother there. He was about to touch it when the phone rings that was in the table…he picks it up) hello
A kids voice comes from other side
K: dad…dady help us…daddy
Z: jiya…what happen?
Angad gets the phone
A: did u hear ur kids voice
Z: shocked) what are u doing there
A: just visiting ur family in ur house….ur kids is really sweet…just like my kids were….(angry) and I will kill her just the way u did to my kids
Z: scared) no don't…plez don't…she is just a kids

Kripa takes the phone and shouts) my kids were innocent to…why did u hurt them
Z: plez leave my kid…u want me then I will come to u but plez don't hurt my kid
K: I wanted to say the something to u…but u never listened to me…why should I spear ur kid now…say goodbye to her
Z: no wait
K: to late
Z: says quickly) ur kids are alive
K: stops shocked)
Z: ur kids are alive….I didn't kill them
Angad hit's the speaker button and all of them hears it and they were shocked and happy.
Z: plez leave her…I will give u ur kid back
Tears starts rolling down angad and kripas cheek from joy of hearing their kids alive
K: were are they
Z: they are in my house….they are locked in the room….
K: were
Z: but promise u wont hurt my kid
K: I wont…tell me
Z: I don't trust u
K: not everyone is like u zaib…(shouts) tell me


Zaib tells her were he is hiding sasha and karan. As kripa hears it she runs toward that direction and stops by a door. She slowly opens the door and sees sasha and karan tied up in the corner. She burst out crying and runs toward them. Sasha and karan sees kripa and gets really happy. Kripa quickly opens their hands and hugs them both. Sasha and karan hugs her back and angad comes by them and hugs three of them…the gang was really happy to see them together again. Zaibs wife comes in the room and sees them.
ZW: he will be here in few mints….u guys need to run away
A: we are not going anywhere….I wont spare him
K: im sorry shital…..but we have to kill him
S: I cant defend him…he is bad and he did crime….im happy to be a widow rather then being his wife and see him kill people

Her daughter comes and kripa smiles at her
K: thanks for ur help little one
D: ur welcome….I told u im good at acting…see I scared dad (giggles)

Zaib reachs home and runs inside. He looks around and couldn't see anyone. He runs to the room were sasha and karan was tied up will his mans fallowing him. He opens the door then sees a bomb in the table right in front of him. The bomb had 3 seconds left. He shut his eyes and the bomb blow up will the whole house exploded.

All the gang were outside and kripa buried her face in angads chest will sasha and karan hugging him to. Angad hugged them back smiling will the house exploded. The whole gang watched the house burn. Zaibs wife and daughter was standing next to prithvi and prithvi holed her hand then smiled at her. She smiled back at him and hugged prithvi. Prithvi was happy he got his lost love back after 7 years later. They rid off back toward home.

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